now here this is my first attempt at... anything concerning fanfics really...
it's just a possible start to a story, meaning: to be taken like a challenge.
Naruto whirled around, Kusanagi in hand, haori blazing, enemies being just a blur of pictures, the sounds of his blade clinging against theirs. Always whirling and whirling, his feet in a staccato of steps. Slowly he makes out the amount of enemies he is fighting. It is five in the immediate vicinity. Another clash of weapons. Step. Step. Step. Clash. Step. Step. Step. Clash. Always whirling.
Finally both sides disengage. Naruto makes out the silhouettes of five ninja, seemingly jounin level. But with his blurry sight he has a hard time, recognizing them clearly.
They start making handsigns and his hands, too start moving, weaving sign after sign. First there is a pop. Two clones on each of his sides.
Hands making signs in a blur.
At once both sides let go of fearsome attacks. Still he feels totally calm, amused even. The other side calls out several names for jutsu. He just still stands there, smirking to himself. Then he and his clones say only one word.
Boom.
The jounins' jutsu clash with just one of his and disperse. Four more jutsu of the same kind still move towards the jounin at high speed…
In a flash Naruto sits up, sweating as if he ran around Konoha several times in a sprint, his eyes hurting and mind a mess with all the thoughts of this weird dream.
There can't be someone as powerful as to play with such skillful enemies as if they were kids… right?
There it is.
Now as you can see I used a variation of the jusho, or a variation of a "whirlpool"-style (mostly named "Uzuken"). Both which are highly centered around using dodging by using a high amount of steps and circling an enemy as defense and using the different angles you gain by this method, combined with the velocity your body reaches by doing so, to attack.
So if you take it over please use a stlye like this.
some other things:
I kind of miss Nauto being a half-demon and still not being OP from the very beginning. it would be great if someone would be able to write a fic with the Uzumaki clan being a clan of half demons, who are mostly humans now but gain their special traits from this lineage, aside from the line of their kinship with the Senju and Uchiha.
if you did, you could make the first stages of Narutos empowerment by Kurama (before the one-tail-cloak) an Uzumaki hanyou trait (of course no one has to know all of that in the beginning, it would make him a little more powerful and less sensitive for Kuramas still tainted chakra but not make him OP from the beginning at all... just more potential, even though it's not seen from the beginning)
ok I'm done now.
please consider taking this beginning.
Dune
out