Here it is, after a few weeks of a little touch of here and there so far, I've decided to post up the first chapter. So enjoy (again) and remember that I don't own Yugioh!
"Yami. Oh Yami. YAMI!!!"
"Huh, what?!"
"You went off into Sleepy Land there, pal," said Jounouchi, who was sitting on the sofa.
Jounouchi was a blond, brown eyed guy who appeared tough, but was someone completely different with his friends. You couldn't ask for any more loyalty from a person. Currently, he was playing duel monsters, a big game in Domino at the time, with his best friend, Atemu Amon.
Atemu preferred to go by Yami, since he thought it suited him better. He seemed like the quiet, mysterious type like a shadow in an alleyway. Yami was a spiky, tri-color haired teenager. He had sharp crimson eyes, and tan skin. All the girls went crazy over him for his looks at school. Even though he was popular, he didn't let it go to his head. No point in showing off to a bunch of drooling, squeaky girl constantly.
It was Jounouchi's turn, and where our story begins. He was trying to think strategically on what to do next. He was up against the king of games. That and one wrong move would make this his 10,478th loss this week. How that was possible was beyond Yami's.
Since his friend had been staring at his cards for the last thirty minutes, Yami's boredom had overtaken him and caused his mind to wander off.
'Hmm, I wonder how many licks it takes to get to the center of a tootsie pop,' Yami wondered. 'Okay, that was a weird thought, think about something more interesting.'
For a few seconds, his mind went silent.
'I got it!' he exclaimed. 'There's rumor of a new kid, who just moved into the Kame game shop. I wonder what that person's like. I hope it isn't one of those creepy fangirls.'
"You know," Jou said interrupting his thought, "you could, at least, pretend to be intent on the game."
"Sorry Jou, I was just thinking about the new kid who moved in recently."
"You mean that Motou kid?" asked Jou.
Yami nodded.
"I heard his grandfather owned a game shop," Jou looked down at his cards. "Maybe we could go check it out later. Who knows, maybe they have something good."
"Yeah, good point. With some luck, you could find some new cards that might actually help you win for once."
"Hey!"
Yami gave him a nervous smile, and held his hands up defensively. "I'm just kidding!"
Jou just gave him a glare before finally making his long awaited move.
'Man, I need to learn how to think before I speak,' Yami noted.
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A young girl wearing a black hoodie, blue jeans, and sneakers was struggling was a large box. Her mission was to deliver the contents of the box into the Kame game shop, go to the living room, and, eventually, arrange the things inside the box neatly.
The muscles in her arms and back ached with each passing second, making her want to shriek in pain and run around the room as if she were on fire.
Once the box was successfully in the living room, she decided to skip the running, and just to take a break on the sofa.
She took off her 70s' style hat, revealing her long, unusual hair. Unlike most girls, who have one plain color of hair, hers was tri-color. She had pure black hair with red tips, and randomly placed blond bangs on the sides of her face. She hated the look of it and tried to get rid of it with hair color. Each time she colored it, however, the color washed away completely leaving her unique color again. Oh the pains of family genes.
Sighing, the girl looked around the house she would now live in with the other two family members.
Her family, grandpa and her brother, had just gotten to the town of Domino, Japan. They originally had lived over in Tokyo, but her grandpa and she both agreed that her brother, Yugi, wasn't able to fit in with the rush of the city. So here they are, in a peaceful little town, easy to move around in.
"Well, I suppose this'll do for now," she assured herself. "A nice place to dwell, with a clean new start."
"Sonya!" Yugi called, "Could you in here and help me out with something?"
"Sure, I'll be there in a second, Yugi," she called back, getting up.
Before she made her way towards Yugi's room, grandpa stopped her.
"I'll go up there and help him out, but I recall someone saying they'll bring in all the games from the moving truck," he scolded.
"Hehe, must've slipped my mind," she said blushing, going right back out.
Once out of earshot, Sonya groaned at the thought of having to haul ridiculously heavy boxes for the next hour or so.
Glaring at the brown container, she growled, "You just love mocking me, don't you?"
"Who loves to mock you?" a soft voice asked.
Sonya shot up ten feet at the sound of the voice and quickly spun around to see her younger brother standing there.
Just as she was about to open her mouth, the door burst open revealing a blond and a tri-colored man, who looked shockingly similar to Yugi.
Sonya couldn't help but stare at the creepy twin-like man.
"Uhhh, hi," she said staring at him. "How can I, umm, help you... two?"
"What's da matter with you?" Jou questioned. "Never seen a two hot looking guys before."
Emerald eyes scanned over the two boys and a fire of hatred was beginning to glow deep within them. The blond's first impression had failed miserable. Now what about his spiky haired companion?
Yami just stared at the kid standing next to the girl at the cash register.
'Whoa, he looks just like me,' he thought. 'Well besides my hair having a little more blond bangs, I'm slightly taller, and his eyes are much more innocent looking. I wonder why he isn't as surprised at me. Actually, he's not even looking at me.'
That was what puzzled Yami the most. What was up with this kid? Didn't he notice his clone standing a few feet away from him? Who wouldn't notice the resemblance?
Sonya was watching Yami the whole time and was beginning to get a little uncomfortable about him staring at her brother.
"Can I help you?" she repeated in a slightly irritated voice.
"Geez, can you be any more rude," Jou snorted.
Sonya ignored the blond, her focus was mainly on Yami.
Yugi felt Yami staring at him, and finally looked at him, but not straight in the eyes.
"Excuse me," he said in a shy voice, "but why are you staring at me?"
"Well, uhhh, you kinda look like me... and , uhhh," Yami sputtered. "Didn't you notice?"
'Why am I acting so stupid. C'mon Yami, what's the big deal. Just cause he's a cute look alike- Whoa, I did not just say "cute!"'
"Yeah, it's pretty obvious you two look a lot alike," Jou added.
"Sonya, what's he talking about?" Yugi asked reaching out for her.
"Don't mind him, I'll take care of this," she said going over to him.
She grabbed the both of them, and dragged them outside.
"Just stay there, Yugi," she called, "You two, come outside with me. We need to have a little chat."
Once outside, Sonya scowled at the two boys, before whacking them both hard on the head.
"Ow!" cried Jou. "What was that for!?"
"Yeah, what did we do?" Yami said rubbing the back of his head. "I was only curious about why he wasn't as stunned as me."
After he said that Sonya whacked him again.
"Hey!"
"You stupid jerk, he's my brother!" she exclaimed. "How dare you insult him in front of me. Not to mention making fun of him because he's different."
"Whoa lady, we didn't know anything about him until today," Jou remarked. "And we're not those kind of punks who pick on the new kid."
"What do you mean by different?" Yami asked curiously.
"Don't act dumb with me," spat Sonya. "You know that he's blind."
"BLIND!" the two teens exclaimed.
Hope you liked it. It's a little better than the original, which had quite a few spelling errors. Reviews make me happy, so don't forget to drop one off before you go, and the next chapter will be coming by next week. Until then, bye-bye!