YAY! My first story on here. I know this chapter is short but I want some reviews and feedback before I write the next chapter. So, review and tell me what you think.

The first day of the new school year. That meant a whole new freshman class. A whole new load of suckers who just wanted the seniors and juniors to like them. Kakuzu stood in front of the school surveying the crowd. "Oi Kaku!" Kakuzu looked towards the voice. He saw Kisame walking towards him. "Oh, hey Kisame," he said. Kisame had been a freshman last year and Kakuzu had targeted him. Kisame got the best of him however and they had become friends. "Whatcha doing?" Kisame asked. "Scoping out the newbies," Kakuzu said. "I saw this hot chick by the gate coming in," Kisame said. "I told you, I'm gay," Kakuzu said. "Oh yeah, forgot," Kisame said, rubbing the back of his neck. "So, who are the targets this year?" Kakuzu asked. "Hm, I saw this silver haired kid with PINK eyes," Kisame said. "Oh yeah, his name is Hidan, he just moved in next door to me," Kakuzu said. "Come on," Kisame said.
He led his friend through the crowd to where the younger boy was standing, looking around. "Hey Hidan," Kakuzu said. Hidan turned towards him. "How the hell do you know my name?" Hidan asked. "I overheard your mom talking to mine," Kakuzu said. "Oh, um. . .okay," Hidan said. Kakuzu stuck a hand out, "well I'm Kakuzu and this is my friend Kisame." Hidan looked at Kisame and scoffed, poking a finger into his chest, "what the hell kind of evolutionary mistake are you?" Kisame wasn't your average everyday sixteen year old. He had blue skin and hair, and gills on the side of his face. He was six feet three, making him the tallest kid in their school. "You're one to talk," Kisame said, pushing him back. He was right, Hidan was an oddity. His hair was silver, and his eye a dark pink color. Hidan lunged at Kisame with a fist but was grabbed by Kakuzu. "Slow down kid. Kisame, keep your comments to yourself," he said. Hidan yanked away from Kakuzu and straightened his clothes out. "What do you two idiots want anyways?" Hidan asked. "Well, we just wanted to be friends. We know how it can be to be a freshman, isn't that right Kisame?" Kakuzu asked. Kisame gave a lopsided grin and nodded. "Well I don't need your help, I have my own friends thank you," Hidan said, he pushed his way into the crowd. "Why that ungrateful little son of a bitch," Kakuzu said. "Temper, temper," a voice said from behind them. Kakuzu and Kisame turned to see their friends Konan and Pein standing behind them. "Oh there you guys are," Kisame said. "Like you were looking for us," Konan said. She was a pretty girl, by Kisame and Pein's standards that is. She had light blue short hair and piercings all down her ears. Pein, her boyfriend, was an odd kid. His hair was red, and his eyes an odd color. His nose and ears were lined with piercings. Kakuzu looked over their shoulders, "has anyone seen Tobi?" "Nope, I heard he moved," Konan said. "That sucks," Kakuzu said. "Yeah, well the bell is about to ring," Pein said. "Okay, see you guys in class," Kisame said. He hurried off into the crowd. "Yeah, see ya," Pein said. He grabbed Konan's arm and pulled her into the crowd. Kakuzu took one last look at the crowd, trying to spot Hidan, and the bell rang. He turned to face his first day as a senior.
Kakuzu's first class was economics, his favorite. "Okay, today we're learning about the American economy," the teacher said. Kakuzu took out his notebook and looked at the teacher. "Psht." Kakuzu tried to ignore the voice. "Kaku!" the voice whispered loudly. Kakuzu turned to see his friend Tobi sitting behind him. "Hey Kaku! Tobi made it to school, Tobi is a good boy," Tobi said. "Shut up Tobi, don't get me in trouble on the first day," Kakuzu said. He turned back to the front as the door was pushed open and the assistant principal walked in, leading a small blond girl along with her. "Mrs. Alashi, this is Deidara, he had a hard time finding his way around so I thought I'd show him to his class," the assistant principal said. "THAT'S A DUDE?" Kakuzu thought to himself. "Of course, Deidara take a seat next to Kakuzu," Mrs. Alashi said. She pointed to the seat next to Kakuzu and Deidara trudged over and sat down. Kakuzu studied the smaller boy. He was rather short and skinny and had his blond hair in a ponytail. His bangs covered one eye and his clothing was way too big on him. Kakuzu tried not to pay him too much attention and returned his sights to the board.