PLEASE READ THIS
Alright everyone,
It's finally come to my attention that I cannot keep writing like shit and expect it to flow the way I imagined it. I've decided to rewrite this story and fix everything I've left to hang out. This has been weighing on my mind for a while now but I didn't know how to do it but I can't keep writing this badly. I'd re read my chapter and point out each flaw painfully and it makes me want to rip em off the screen. Sorry for the inconvenience guys and thank you to everyone who's shown support.
with warm regards,
Shaun.