Disclaimer: I do not own Golden Sun, or its characters. This marvelous
game and all of the rights belong to Nintendo...but I am saving up to buy
rights...yea...one day.
D.D.: Alright...-claps hands together- This is my first Golden Sun fic, so keep that in mind when you click the review button at the bottom of this story. I do not care what kind of review you submit, but no telling me how my story sucks. Justify it please, and I will then take it more seriously. I posted this story, so I am prepared for the constructive criticism that I may receive.
Chapter 1:
Love. That's what it had to be. A pair of blue eyes were staring across the living room
of his house in Vale, to the back of a 'blue haired goddess', or, that's what Isaac called her. Mia
was sitting in a chair a few feet away from a roaring fire, her face buried in a book entitled,
uThe Art of Healing/u. Isaac watched her fondly, her every movements seemed to grace
him. The way her shining blue hair reflected off of the fire's dancing flames, the way her slender
fingers moved when she turned a page, and the way sighed, seemingly tired or bored.one of the
two. Isaac shrugged his shoulders and sighed, believing she could never love...him. Just then,
out of nowhere, a fairly large hand rested itself on Isaac's shoulder, causing him to jump a few
feet in the air. It was Garet.
"Just tell her already! For the love of Mars, you just stare at her all night long, doing
nothing but swooning over her. I swear, Jenna and I are together, and all I did was confess my
feelings. I mean, what's the worst that could happen? You are shot down and never want to
love again?" Anyone could tell that the loud Mars Adept was joking when he made that last
comment, but Isaac took it a bit more seriously than most people, he usually was the one to take
things a bit more seriously than they were intended to be.
"Gee, thank you for that vote of confidence Garet, I will hold it deeply in my heart, and
when I'm forty-five and still a bachelor, I'll know who I can thank for it." The young Earth
Adept grimaced slightly when he pictured himself alone with no one to hold all his life, and Mia
being whisked off of her feet by some other man who was not too shy to confess his feelings. He
then glanced over to Mia again, to see if she was listening to any of this, and was relieved to find
her face still in the book, quietly breathing, as if nothing had been said.
Almost as if on cue, Mia stood up and rubbed her eyes with her free hand, the book in the
other, and smiled over to the pair of male Adepts and yawned rather ungracefully, without
covering her mouth. Blushing slightly, she looked down when she realized how un-lady like she
was being and nodded her head to her two friends.
"G'night Isaac, Garet, see you in the morning." Yawning again, but this time covering
her mouth, she started towards the stairs to her room until she was cut off by a voice.
"Umm...hey Mia, do you know where your guest room is?" Garet smiled slyly, his
fingers clasped behind his head and his head was resting in them.
Mia looked at him confused and nodded her head slowly. "Yea, Jenna showed me earlier
in the day, and I'm pretty sure it didn't move from that spot. Why?"
"I think he wants to show you just in case." Grabbing Isaac's arm, he shoved him towards
her, Isaac just stopping in time that he
softly collided with Mia, whose cheeks were now flushed with color from the close contact.
Time seemed to stand still. Neither Isaac nor Mia moved from their closeness, no, it felt
too right. Isaac's cheeks burned hotly with a crimson color, feeling Mia's warm breath on his
neck and her heartbeat against his torso. Mia's face flushed with more of a light peach color as
she suddenly felt Isaac's strong arms wrapped around her slender form. They both seemed to be
lost in their own little world until one very rude interruption-
"Hey...guys...yea...hello. You two alive in there or did you both suffocate each other?"
Garet proceeded to wave his hands next to their faces until Isaac grabbed one of them and
squeezed it, not too lightly. The pair parted, their faces still flushed, and Isaac's death grip still
locked tightly around Garet's unsuspecting hand, with a smile on his face.
"Yes Garet, we are still alive, thank you for being concerned for our well-being, you are a
true friend." All of Isaac's words were short and enunciated with great care, trying to sound
cheerful, though Garet could see right through the fake cheerfulness. He could also no longer
feel his hand.he was pretty sure the blood stopped rushing to it a few seconds ago.
"Ow ow ow ow ow....My hand...please?" Isaac released Garet's hand with a look of
feigned innocence. Garet cradled and rubbed his sore wrist, just figuring out why Isaac did that.
"I'm sorry..." He looked down on the floor, slightly ashamed of ruining Isaac's and Mia's
romantic moment together that he had strived to get for them.
Mia just stood back and watched the two boys have their quiet and obviously inside
argument, for she was oblivious to why Isaac was so mad. "Umm...I think I'll go to my room
now, good-night you too." Casting a quick Ply on Garet's still sore wrist, she made her way up
the stairs and into the room she was sharing with Jenna.
When the soft click of the door was heard behind her, Isaac glared at Garet again, though
not as mad as before. "Garet, tell me. If you wanted Mia and I to get together, why did you just
interrupt our first, and now probably our last moment?" He raised his eyebrows slightly,
expecting an answer, but knowing he could not stay mad with him, for they had been best friends
for a very long time.
"I-I'm sorry..." That was Garet's meek answer as his eyes continued to be directed at the
extremely interesting floor boards. "I didn't know what was going on..." He looked up to meet
Isaac's gaze, to find that it had softened dramatically.
"Hey...It's okay buddy, I know that you have a rather large head with a relatively small
brain. There'll be other chances to get together with her anyways." He grinned at his fiery
friend who was still trying to decipher to brain remark. Isaac patted him on the shoulder, and
they walked up to Isaac's room, to finally crash for the night on his two cushy beds. When they
got to the entrance to his room, they had to do their best to suppress fits of laughter as they heard
the sounds coming from the room next door. It was Ivan. He was snoring so loud, it would
probably wake everyone in the whole town up. They stepped into his room and jumped into
their separate beds, stuffing their ears with their pillow. It was going to be a long night.
D.D.: Eep! -avoids rotting fruits and vegetables being pelted at her as she hides behind her laptop- Okay, you see that review button, please click it and submit a review! Thanks!
D.D.: Alright...-claps hands together- This is my first Golden Sun fic, so keep that in mind when you click the review button at the bottom of this story. I do not care what kind of review you submit, but no telling me how my story sucks. Justify it please, and I will then take it more seriously. I posted this story, so I am prepared for the constructive criticism that I may receive.
Chapter 1:
Love. That's what it had to be. A pair of blue eyes were staring across the living room
of his house in Vale, to the back of a 'blue haired goddess', or, that's what Isaac called her. Mia
was sitting in a chair a few feet away from a roaring fire, her face buried in a book entitled,
uThe Art of Healing/u. Isaac watched her fondly, her every movements seemed to grace
him. The way her shining blue hair reflected off of the fire's dancing flames, the way her slender
fingers moved when she turned a page, and the way sighed, seemingly tired or bored.one of the
two. Isaac shrugged his shoulders and sighed, believing she could never love...him. Just then,
out of nowhere, a fairly large hand rested itself on Isaac's shoulder, causing him to jump a few
feet in the air. It was Garet.
"Just tell her already! For the love of Mars, you just stare at her all night long, doing
nothing but swooning over her. I swear, Jenna and I are together, and all I did was confess my
feelings. I mean, what's the worst that could happen? You are shot down and never want to
love again?" Anyone could tell that the loud Mars Adept was joking when he made that last
comment, but Isaac took it a bit more seriously than most people, he usually was the one to take
things a bit more seriously than they were intended to be.
"Gee, thank you for that vote of confidence Garet, I will hold it deeply in my heart, and
when I'm forty-five and still a bachelor, I'll know who I can thank for it." The young Earth
Adept grimaced slightly when he pictured himself alone with no one to hold all his life, and Mia
being whisked off of her feet by some other man who was not too shy to confess his feelings. He
then glanced over to Mia again, to see if she was listening to any of this, and was relieved to find
her face still in the book, quietly breathing, as if nothing had been said.
Almost as if on cue, Mia stood up and rubbed her eyes with her free hand, the book in the
other, and smiled over to the pair of male Adepts and yawned rather ungracefully, without
covering her mouth. Blushing slightly, she looked down when she realized how un-lady like she
was being and nodded her head to her two friends.
"G'night Isaac, Garet, see you in the morning." Yawning again, but this time covering
her mouth, she started towards the stairs to her room until she was cut off by a voice.
"Umm...hey Mia, do you know where your guest room is?" Garet smiled slyly, his
fingers clasped behind his head and his head was resting in them.
Mia looked at him confused and nodded her head slowly. "Yea, Jenna showed me earlier
in the day, and I'm pretty sure it didn't move from that spot. Why?"
"I think he wants to show you just in case." Grabbing Isaac's arm, he shoved him towards
her, Isaac just stopping in time that he
softly collided with Mia, whose cheeks were now flushed with color from the close contact.
Time seemed to stand still. Neither Isaac nor Mia moved from their closeness, no, it felt
too right. Isaac's cheeks burned hotly with a crimson color, feeling Mia's warm breath on his
neck and her heartbeat against his torso. Mia's face flushed with more of a light peach color as
she suddenly felt Isaac's strong arms wrapped around her slender form. They both seemed to be
lost in their own little world until one very rude interruption-
"Hey...guys...yea...hello. You two alive in there or did you both suffocate each other?"
Garet proceeded to wave his hands next to their faces until Isaac grabbed one of them and
squeezed it, not too lightly. The pair parted, their faces still flushed, and Isaac's death grip still
locked tightly around Garet's unsuspecting hand, with a smile on his face.
"Yes Garet, we are still alive, thank you for being concerned for our well-being, you are a
true friend." All of Isaac's words were short and enunciated with great care, trying to sound
cheerful, though Garet could see right through the fake cheerfulness. He could also no longer
feel his hand.he was pretty sure the blood stopped rushing to it a few seconds ago.
"Ow ow ow ow ow....My hand...please?" Isaac released Garet's hand with a look of
feigned innocence. Garet cradled and rubbed his sore wrist, just figuring out why Isaac did that.
"I'm sorry..." He looked down on the floor, slightly ashamed of ruining Isaac's and Mia's
romantic moment together that he had strived to get for them.
Mia just stood back and watched the two boys have their quiet and obviously inside
argument, for she was oblivious to why Isaac was so mad. "Umm...I think I'll go to my room
now, good-night you too." Casting a quick Ply on Garet's still sore wrist, she made her way up
the stairs and into the room she was sharing with Jenna.
When the soft click of the door was heard behind her, Isaac glared at Garet again, though
not as mad as before. "Garet, tell me. If you wanted Mia and I to get together, why did you just
interrupt our first, and now probably our last moment?" He raised his eyebrows slightly,
expecting an answer, but knowing he could not stay mad with him, for they had been best friends
for a very long time.
"I-I'm sorry..." That was Garet's meek answer as his eyes continued to be directed at the
extremely interesting floor boards. "I didn't know what was going on..." He looked up to meet
Isaac's gaze, to find that it had softened dramatically.
"Hey...It's okay buddy, I know that you have a rather large head with a relatively small
brain. There'll be other chances to get together with her anyways." He grinned at his fiery
friend who was still trying to decipher to brain remark. Isaac patted him on the shoulder, and
they walked up to Isaac's room, to finally crash for the night on his two cushy beds. When they
got to the entrance to his room, they had to do their best to suppress fits of laughter as they heard
the sounds coming from the room next door. It was Ivan. He was snoring so loud, it would
probably wake everyone in the whole town up. They stepped into his room and jumped into
their separate beds, stuffing their ears with their pillow. It was going to be a long night.
D.D.: Eep! -avoids rotting fruits and vegetables being pelted at her as she hides behind her laptop- Okay, you see that review button, please click it and submit a review! Thanks!