The first two chapters are really average writing, I know that and you know that. You could write and tell me how crap I am, or where you think the story should be heading. If you want better writing that I actually thought about ( even a little ) go to chapter three. When I get a review saying anything I'll start writing chapter 4. ImKay. thanks I hope you enjoy ( Or at least get a laugh ).
Harry potter.
A dark haired boy looked at the letter from a school he had never heard about before. Saying he was invited to attend the school. With his nosy mother peering over his shoulder, looking very excited, his father reading the news paper like he did every morning.
"Dear have you heard of a school named 'Hogwarts' they say it's a school of witch craft and Wizardry.
"NO"!
It was strange; the boy's father put down his paper and left the room very quietly. He has never, not finished the paper before. Dareth placed the letter in his lap as his mother chased his dad from out the door.
"Hogwarts... I remember seeing a letter like that before".
"When"?
"When I was Dareth's age, my mother took it from me and forbade me to go. I never forgave her. Every year a new letter came, she thought I didn't know, but I did…" He trailed off then started back up with his authoritative voice. "…The boy is going". And that was that, marching back to into the lounge.
"Boy, me and your mother have decided you are going to attend Hogwarts. We discussed it and decided it would be good for you".
His mother tried to hide it but Dareth knew they didn't discuss a thing, he could hear them, the door was still open.
"No I'm not! What about all my friends, it's a boarding school, I won't get to see them".
"You'll make knew ones. Now go to your room and pack".
"Dad the train doesn't leave till next week".
"Well then you'll be organised for once in your life".
The next day Dareth wet down the street to play with his best friend.
"James, I'm not going back to school next year".
"It's all right Dare I'm not either, Mum and Dad a making me go to this weird school"?
"Same Hog… something".
"Hogwarts. The school for wizards"?
"Yeah that's it…and witches! Yuk all their worts and facial hair".
The two boys then began to play wizards pretending to cast spells on each other.