Sweet Revenge
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A/N Due to some idiot who decided it wud b fun to delete my story; either by hacking or just reporting abuse, I have to repost my story all over again. Stupid person! As a precautionary issue, I have changed my pass.
So who deleted my story? I don't get it.
Anyone find anything wrong with my stories? Speak up, I'd really like some constructive criticism.
Anyways, I modified it a bit so it's better now. Leave a review, I lost every single review I had. This sux... ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~
It was a hot day in July and the Bladebreakers were just heading out to
the Beystadium in Sydney, Australia to practice. 2 weeks from now there
would be a tournament and Kai decided that they were going to get their
butts kicked if they didn't train.
The blue-haired captain sighed as he listened to his teammates
chatter on about the tournament and who was going to be in it. Kenny was
typing into his laptop while walking which seemed almost impossible to Kai
except for the fact that a cord was binding the laptop around Kenny's neck.
"Hey guys!" Tyson yelled, "Dragoon developed a new move!!" he bragged
excitedly.
"That's way cool!" praised Rei as he slapped Tyson on the back.
Max ran up behind Tyson and glomped him and yelled into his ear,
"Yeah? Well, Draceil has some pretty awesome moves too!" he challenged.
"Hmph, they're still no match against the mighty power of Drigger!" Rei
boasted.
"Hn," Kai grunted to show his displeasure at his teammates for showing off.
It was early in the morning and who knew how Tyson got his extra
energy after staying up until 3 o'clock last night playing console games with
Max. Max had drunk 3 cups of extra strong coffee just to be this hyper.
Kai walked a bit behind his teammates as usual and Tyson led the
way. Max sauntered a bit behind Tyson and was animatedly gossiping with
Rei who was beside him. Kenny was beside Tyson and showing him some
clips of Dragoon doing its thing.
As they rounded a corner, a girl with long ebony black hair ran beside
Kai, shoved him aside roughly and stuck her hand inside his pocket. She
was doing a routine she had rehearsed many times in her 16 years. Quickly
pulling out her hand, she spun around with Kai's wallet in her clutches and
quickly ran off in the opposite direction.
Kai took 3 seconds to recover from the girl shoving him before he too,
spun around and raced after the girl with his team in hot pursuit. He
rounded the corner in which he last saw the girl, but she was nowhere to be
found.
~~~~*Alley's of Sydney Australia*~~~~
Raven was pleased. She had just perfectly executed a perfectly
planned pickpocket move. After checking the wallet and finding $700 in it,
she had to resist the joy of jumping up and down in glee. Pick pocketing
someone's wallet wasn't too difficult, but finding $150 or more was. And
not everyone's wallet was pick pocketable. 9/10 person's wallet that passed
her was either too deep in their pocket or it was inside their jacket or she
could not clearly see where the location of the wallet was.
She worked for a ring of pickpockets who taught her a lot of the tricks
of the trade. Without them, she'd be penniless and broke, so in a way she
was thankful for them. The downside of it, besides being on the most
wanted list of the police, was that she had to give them most of the money
she stole. The "boss", which she had yet to see, brought everyone together
and collected the cash secretly.
The organization operated mostly in a deserted warehouse not far
from the alleys in which she worked. It was also where she slept at night
and kept her possessions.
Raven stood up as high as her 5'6" frame would let her and grinned.
She tossed her raven black hair back and straightened up her purple tank top
that ended a few centimetres after her chest. She also wore black short
shorts that started just below her hips. This was the only outfit she owned
and the only outfit she needed to survive on the streets.
Her tank top and shorts showed a lot of skin, but when you live on the
streets, your clothing is the least of your worries.
Her large lavender eyes glanced around, to make sure no one could
see her.
Raven frowned, it wasn't that easy to get this much in one steal and
she didn't want to give most of it her leader, so she pulled out $300 and left
$400 in Kai's wallet. $400 would make her leader extremely happy anyways
seeing as the wallets usually contained $150 or less.
She entered the warehouse and knocked on her boss' door.
"What do you have for me this time?" he snarled as he had just been
interrupted in the middle of his afternoon nap."
"I have something for you that would make you pleased." She answered
calmly.
She handed over the wallet now containing $400 and folded her arms
in front of her chest, waiting for his reply. Her eyes wandered around the
dirty warehouse and she wrinkled her nose at the odours that assailed her
senses.
"Very good..." Mr. Papadouski, the boss, said.
"Whatever," Raven brushed the compliment aside, "Now where's my
money?" she demanded.
"Here, you're lucky today," he said as he handed Raven a hundred dollar bill.
Raven's lips curled in satisfaction as she reached out and grabbed it.
She walked away from the warehouse heading towards the bank to deposit
her precious money into her bank account. Her bank account was the one
thing she treasured and she carefully kept her bankcard safe. Her bankcard
was her only valuable possession.
She walked into the bank and up to a teller, ignoring the looks that
other people were giving her. The bank was cool and it felt good on her hot
skin. She deposited the $400 she acquired and walked out to do her job
again.
What she didn't expect was Kai drawing more money from the ATM
machine outside of the bank. She gasped and tried to look normal and
blend in but when you're wearing such skimpy clothing, it is nearly
impossible.
She tried to discreetly move out of the plaza, but her gaze wandered
around and locked onto to Kai's...
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A/N Like I said, I lost every single review, please review! I have all the chappies saved, 'cept for chappie 3. I'm trying to find it... lol, but I'm editing it all so that its better to read. Thanx for leaving a review and if you're the one who reported my fic, you're a loser.
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A/N Due to some idiot who decided it wud b fun to delete my story; either by hacking or just reporting abuse, I have to repost my story all over again. Stupid person! As a precautionary issue, I have changed my pass.
So who deleted my story? I don't get it.
Anyone find anything wrong with my stories? Speak up, I'd really like some constructive criticism.
Anyways, I modified it a bit so it's better now. Leave a review, I lost every single review I had. This sux... ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~
It was a hot day in July and the Bladebreakers were just heading out to
the Beystadium in Sydney, Australia to practice. 2 weeks from now there
would be a tournament and Kai decided that they were going to get their
butts kicked if they didn't train.
The blue-haired captain sighed as he listened to his teammates
chatter on about the tournament and who was going to be in it. Kenny was
typing into his laptop while walking which seemed almost impossible to Kai
except for the fact that a cord was binding the laptop around Kenny's neck.
"Hey guys!" Tyson yelled, "Dragoon developed a new move!!" he bragged
excitedly.
"That's way cool!" praised Rei as he slapped Tyson on the back.
Max ran up behind Tyson and glomped him and yelled into his ear,
"Yeah? Well, Draceil has some pretty awesome moves too!" he challenged.
"Hmph, they're still no match against the mighty power of Drigger!" Rei
boasted.
"Hn," Kai grunted to show his displeasure at his teammates for showing off.
It was early in the morning and who knew how Tyson got his extra
energy after staying up until 3 o'clock last night playing console games with
Max. Max had drunk 3 cups of extra strong coffee just to be this hyper.
Kai walked a bit behind his teammates as usual and Tyson led the
way. Max sauntered a bit behind Tyson and was animatedly gossiping with
Rei who was beside him. Kenny was beside Tyson and showing him some
clips of Dragoon doing its thing.
As they rounded a corner, a girl with long ebony black hair ran beside
Kai, shoved him aside roughly and stuck her hand inside his pocket. She
was doing a routine she had rehearsed many times in her 16 years. Quickly
pulling out her hand, she spun around with Kai's wallet in her clutches and
quickly ran off in the opposite direction.
Kai took 3 seconds to recover from the girl shoving him before he too,
spun around and raced after the girl with his team in hot pursuit. He
rounded the corner in which he last saw the girl, but she was nowhere to be
found.
~~~~*Alley's of Sydney Australia*~~~~
Raven was pleased. She had just perfectly executed a perfectly
planned pickpocket move. After checking the wallet and finding $700 in it,
she had to resist the joy of jumping up and down in glee. Pick pocketing
someone's wallet wasn't too difficult, but finding $150 or more was. And
not everyone's wallet was pick pocketable. 9/10 person's wallet that passed
her was either too deep in their pocket or it was inside their jacket or she
could not clearly see where the location of the wallet was.
She worked for a ring of pickpockets who taught her a lot of the tricks
of the trade. Without them, she'd be penniless and broke, so in a way she
was thankful for them. The downside of it, besides being on the most
wanted list of the police, was that she had to give them most of the money
she stole. The "boss", which she had yet to see, brought everyone together
and collected the cash secretly.
The organization operated mostly in a deserted warehouse not far
from the alleys in which she worked. It was also where she slept at night
and kept her possessions.
Raven stood up as high as her 5'6" frame would let her and grinned.
She tossed her raven black hair back and straightened up her purple tank top
that ended a few centimetres after her chest. She also wore black short
shorts that started just below her hips. This was the only outfit she owned
and the only outfit she needed to survive on the streets.
Her tank top and shorts showed a lot of skin, but when you live on the
streets, your clothing is the least of your worries.
Her large lavender eyes glanced around, to make sure no one could
see her.
Raven frowned, it wasn't that easy to get this much in one steal and
she didn't want to give most of it her leader, so she pulled out $300 and left
$400 in Kai's wallet. $400 would make her leader extremely happy anyways
seeing as the wallets usually contained $150 or less.
She entered the warehouse and knocked on her boss' door.
"What do you have for me this time?" he snarled as he had just been
interrupted in the middle of his afternoon nap."
"I have something for you that would make you pleased." She answered
calmly.
She handed over the wallet now containing $400 and folded her arms
in front of her chest, waiting for his reply. Her eyes wandered around the
dirty warehouse and she wrinkled her nose at the odours that assailed her
senses.
"Very good..." Mr. Papadouski, the boss, said.
"Whatever," Raven brushed the compliment aside, "Now where's my
money?" she demanded.
"Here, you're lucky today," he said as he handed Raven a hundred dollar bill.
Raven's lips curled in satisfaction as she reached out and grabbed it.
She walked away from the warehouse heading towards the bank to deposit
her precious money into her bank account. Her bank account was the one
thing she treasured and she carefully kept her bankcard safe. Her bankcard
was her only valuable possession.
She walked into the bank and up to a teller, ignoring the looks that
other people were giving her. The bank was cool and it felt good on her hot
skin. She deposited the $400 she acquired and walked out to do her job
again.
What she didn't expect was Kai drawing more money from the ATM
machine outside of the bank. She gasped and tried to look normal and
blend in but when you're wearing such skimpy clothing, it is nearly
impossible.
She tried to discreetly move out of the plaza, but her gaze wandered
around and locked onto to Kai's...
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A/N Like I said, I lost every single review, please review! I have all the chappies saved, 'cept for chappie 3. I'm trying to find it... lol, but I'm editing it all so that its better to read. Thanx for leaving a review and if you're the one who reported my fic, you're a loser.