I wrote my first writing for Fanfic..um..a day ago! It was a list of humor
(Which I am NOT good at) but it got pretty cool reviews! I had an idea for this story, and decided to
write it..It isn't funny, but serious, a story written from my own emotions...um(did I get too serious?Heheh..)Um..Please read it!
"Garnet..Please help me!" Zidane called out to his love. He dangled on the edge of the
cliff, his knuckles white in their vain attempt of holding on. His nails dug hard into the
ground, causing particles of dirt to fall into his eyes. Squeezing them shut, sweat poured off of
his face and his fingers grew moist and slippery. It hurt so much to stay suspended that way
and he was about to lose his grip and plummet to the earth far below his feet.
A voice cried out from the darkness."Zidane..Please hold on! Please!" Garnet ran to to the figure
as fast as her feet could carry her..Close,he was so close. His screams of help became louder and
louder.Breathlessly,she panted "Wait,Zidane!Hang on!" As she grew closer to the edge where Zidane
dangled helplessly, a sudden sharp spasm jolted from her stomach and coursed through her body
causing her to sink to her knees...Frozen in shock, for a moment, Garnet zoned out and lay there
feeling the pain surge inside her, draining her, making her forget.Zidane's screams bought her back
to reality."Garnet!Just a little closer! You're almost there!"Garnet nodded. She had to make it. She
just had to. His life depended on it.
Despite the pain, Garnet tried in desperation to help him, even if it meant dragging herself
along the ground..She reached out to him and their fingers almost touched. Her stomach spasmed
again and she buckled up, clutching her stomach. "Zidane..I-I can't! It hurts.."
"Damn it,Garnet!Try harder..Garnet please...!!"
Under any circumstances,Zidane would not have demanded so harshly anything else of Garnet, but
the Angel of Death, the one who was not Kuja,the TRUE Angel, lingered dangerously close, throwing
him into panic...
For a moment Garnet and Zidane's eyes made contact...and he spoke words that would haunt her
dreams many, many nights over..
"Please my love...please don't let me die."
Did you like it so far?I actually have finished this story..Don't worry,everything is explained...from how they got there,How Zidane got in that situation,to what is going on in her head
and most importantly,her body...I didn't mean to leave anyone hanging(O.k,actually,I did!!Muahahahha!).um,but I wanted to see what
people thought before I posted the rest!If you guys like it,then I will!Thanks a bunch everyone!:-)Peace!