I have a new storyline.I know now I have three story's to finish.I HAD to make this story though.I was dying to make this story.I wanted to hurry and finish this one so I could get this over with.Well here goes.

Tidus was a filthy rich boy.He always got what he wanted.Though he was not spoiled and always had a nice time with himself.Yuna was a medium class girl.She was happy with what she had and wanted no more than that.Tidus lived in the rich part of town.Yuna lived in the medium classed shop and owned a shop with her parents.Tidus was twenty-three years old.Yuna had just turned twenty.Tidus had a little brother named Gippal.Yuna had a little sister named Rikku.Rikku and Gippal were both twelve.Yuna had medium length light brown hair and one green eye and another blue.She was always sweet and tried to make everyone laugh.

Tidus had long blonde hair and tanned skin.When he smiled he had a dimple.He was sweet and was real smart and intellegent.He had crystal like blue eyes.Now this is when the story REALLY begins.

Tidus was at his house playing with his little brother.( Tidus calls Gippal 'Fatty' because he was fat when he was young ) " Hey Fatty," Tidus started," You cheated." How would You know," Gippal answered," and don't call me fatty".

Haha its wonderful living my life,Tidus thought.Tidus's father Jecht called him." Tidus you need to go where they live and run to the market," He called Tidus.

" Ok Dad," Tidus started," I swear Fatty when I get back from the market I'm gonna beat you like crap". Gippal turned to Tidus and chuckled.

Then he gave Tidus a grin.Tidus grinned back as he got out his car keys.

Once Tidus Was There

( If you were wondering what that they live was,was where the medium class people lived ) Tidus went to the market where he would give his mom's friend some medicine for her husband.When he was there he saw a young girl.She gorgous,Tidus thought.

She noticed him and went up to him." Hi there what are you here for," She asked," Oh by the way my names Yuna whats your's?" My names Tidus," Tidus started," I'm looking for Richard Raichand".

" Well thats my dad," Yuna started," Hey listen wanna hear some poems I made".

" Uh...yea sure," Tidus replied giving a wide grin.How is it that she is a hottie but still koo-koo,Tidus thought.Yuna started saying all these poems.Tidus loved them.Yuna was real good at making them.

Meanwhile

Gippal was hiding in Tidus's rad black convertible.He got out and started going to the place where he last saw Tidus and was about to follow Tidus's footsteps.

Then when he was just about there a girl and all these boys came infront of him." Not so fast Mr.Belly," The girl said while stretching her hands out.The girl was really cute.

Her blonde hair was up and she was wearing green shorts and an orange top.She had a gold necklace on and a gold watch on.She looked at Gippal and smirked a smirk of evilness and glory.

" If you want to get past us then you must say this ' Betty bought a bit of better butter but the bit of better butter was bitter so Betty bought another bit of better butter' ".

" um...Betty and butter better," Gippal started.Then he thought up of something." Look money," Gippal cried as he pointed far away.All of them ran away.Finally,Gippal thought.

The boys and the girl ran but then the girl realized what he did.She ran back and was about to get infront of him but.

Meanwhile with Yuna and Tidus

She looks sooooo hott in that dress,Tidus thought." Oh come with me Tidus I wanna show you something," Yuna said.She took him to a table and she sat down as he preffered to stand behind her." Look at this newspaper," Yuna started pointing to a picture of a boy that looked exactly like Tidus.As a matter of fact it WAS Tidus and he was standing right next to his father.

" That is Tidus Goodriches," She started," Why that looks exactly like you..." Then she gasped and murmered in a crying voice." OH MY GOD thats you,I'm dead,I'm dead,I'm dead," She cried gasping as she looked back at Tidus and then to the picture.

Tidus looked at her and grinned.Then Gippal stood at the door and cried," Tidus help,there's a crazy girl thats trying to kill me or something".

Tidus looked at Yuna and she was pouting." Thats my lil bro," He answered." Here's the medicine to give to your father," Tidus proclaimed as he held out a medicine.

Yuna grabbed it out of his hand.Tidus walked away but then stopped and turned back to smile at Yuna.She pouted again though she was trying to force a smile but it never worked on HER face.IHAVE to see him again,she thought as she worked back to the shop.

How did you like that chapter.If you want to know my opinion I loved it.Plz R&R!!!!