Please don't take anything from this as it is my own story
This is my first story and im going to start out with this one chapter and i want you guys to review and tell me whether or not ishould keep going.
Chapter 1
She was walking down a dark scary road, on a pitch black night with no moon and no stars, trying to figure out yet another clue that he left after retreating from battle. Jolie was looking for Chuck once again getting annoyed with his cowardliness. She was giving up hope when she saw a movement up ahead. It was just big enough to be a person, but not knowing what kind of troubles are in this town she stuck to the shadows with no light, using what she knows to find her way. When she gets to the spot she saw the movement she stops. She can feel the power of another witch nearby and she knew she was on the right track.
Finally, after waiting for about an hour, the person came back, but it's not Chuck. The power is good not evil. Jolie moved out of the shadows to confront him or her.
"Who's there?" she asks, but there's no answer.
"Who's there?" she asks again. This time there's an answer.
"Me" says the witch. It's a girl's voice, but it's slightly frightened.
"Who is me?" Jolie asks.
"My name's Emery" she says.
"Are you good or evil?"
"Why?"
"Because I want to know."
"I'm good, of course."
"Good, I don't have to kill you."
"Well, that's relief" Emery said in a sarcastic tone.
"Ok c'mon"
"What?!"
Jolie took off down the road without explaining anything. But when she looked back Emery wasn't following.
"C'mon!"
"Why?"
"Because i need your help"
"With what?"
"Finding someone"
"Who?"
"No more questions just c'mon I'll explaine on the way"
"Fine"
So yeah thats the first chapter review and tell me what you think and if i should continue. i promise that if i continue the story it will get A LOT better:)