As the air was pulled out of their lungs like a vacuum pulling dirt from carpet, the plane shook down to the unruly barren ground below. Peoples screams faded as the loss of breath claimed its prize. Alice held her brothers hand and the oxygen mask in her other.

Everyone braced as the planes face reached the ground. The crackling of the fire as it kissed Alices cheek, the wrenching pain as it slithered up her body.

Bang another explosion cracked through her ears, covering her head with her blood soaked arm she gripped the warm hand of her brother even tighter than before, silently praying for his dear life. Groaning she slowly sat looking down at her aching legs and the her eyes drifted over to her brothers calmly moving body. She huffed at the relief that washed over her at her brothers life.

Her brother groaned and slowly lifted his fragile and blood covered arm towards her sitting form. "You alright" his voice cracked as he asked the subtle question "fine but i can't feel my legs, you"... she replied with a cough as the smoke choked her already starved lungs, her brother breathed heavy and replied "as good as can be expected" her brother sat looking around and then turning to face Alice and began standing to move away from the blazing metal rubble.

Alice tried to scream as pain shot through her as her brother tried to lift her off the shifting ground the sound just wouldn't leave her burnt and sand coated throat. Her brother calmly bent down towards the screaming girl. he examined her leg which broke in the devastating crash of the plane which now lay on fire and bodies littering the ground surrounding all around it. He grabbed part of his already shredded and destroyed shirt and ripped it to wrap it around her broken leg. The pain once again slithering up Alices body as James her brother pulled the sand covered cloth around her leg. James proceeded to find a way to make something for her to sit in so she didn't have to walk with a leg that shattered under the immense pressure of the crash. James had found a less destroyed plane seat and also landing gear, he then proceeded to gather large material remaining from the crash. By the time James had gathered a large amount of sand paper like metal sheets another two weary passengers awoke from the crash and began the short but painful journey of to the still sitting Alice. James walked over to the small group of survivors and sat down next to Alice, James asked "is everyone ok" the young man had spoke first "cut and bruised but fine, nothings broken so i guess i was lucky" he said smiling at Alice, the other woman spoke next coughing to remove the smoke from her lungs "ok i guess", James smiled and spoke to the man "can i use your help" "yeah I have nothing else to do" he said trying to lighten the dim and tragic mood of their situation, "I need you to find anything you can that could help us escape this barren land" James told him "ey ey, names jordan by the way" said Jordan as he stood and walked away. James turned toward the woman who was conversing with Alice, he asked "Can you tend to my sister while i make a wheel chair type thing" "of course" she said and focused her attention back on Alice.

James had walked away from the two women and was heading towards Jordan who had gathered bags and fabric from all the scattered luggage he was making a pile of anything he could find most of it partly burnt and destroyed from the fire, although he did manage to find some food and water and was able to find other stuff usable for a wheelchair and even a trailer type thing. James began making the wheelchair with the metal and other things he had gathered before hand.

Three hours later the wheelchair was complete and the sun was drifting past the golden hills of the vast desert, everyone still had dry throats and Jordan had gathered over 20 bottles of water and a few things of food, he had placed the all inside a bag that was the least destroyed and placed it inside the small attachment James had put on the side of the wheelchair making it possible to hold the heavy objects inside instead of carrying them. Jordan seemed to think himself lucky when he found the planes first aid kit which had bandages and sunscreen the one thing they all were happy about. The two men after finishing there scavenger hunt through the rubble returned to the women who had sheltered under a sheet of metal to avoid the sun, Alice's leg was bandaged up and put into a splint which held it flat, the women that tended to Alice was smiling and laughing but James could also see the terror in her face, the woman said to Alice "my name is Thia" she said and bowed Alices only reply to that was "Alice and you don't need to bow" "sorry" Thia said smiling with her eyes flashing a brighter blue than normal, Alice didn't really notice the change just shrugged it off as an effect of the light.

Hello Readers

Yes this is probably terrible i originally wrote the intro for a school thing. Sorry for terrible grammar trust me I am working on it and learning to write better stories that is the point of this i guess so please review and give me tips on my writing.

Thanks M3l XD