( Stop reading after finishing chapter 50 for the best understanding )
Tris
I shake myself out of it. A picture in my head shows my mother, and she's cheering me on. "You... You didn't win..." I gasp, David smiles. "I shot you three times. You're nearly dead." I smirk as I pull out my gun. "Go to hell." 1 shot in the head, and he topples down. My blood loss becomes clearer to me, as I try to refuse my mother's hand, I black out...
Four
Caleb comes running through the hallways, screaming his head off, "Tris! She took my place!" I stop in my path to him. He stares at me, tears pouring down his face. "No!" I shout, I push him down, screaming into his face. He barely registers my shock, but I now am punching him down. "No, no, no, NO!" I find myself running into the weapon room. The guards are trying to push me away. "I will punch your faces in if you don't let me see her." They stare at eachother, then nod. I run inside, and find Tris in a pile of blood. "Tris..." I stare into her face. Her beatiful blonde hair is soaked in blood. Her brown eyes are stuck in a trance, staring at the ceiling. "Tris..." I kiss her forehead, waiting for her to wake up, waiting for her to kiss me back, to promise everything was fine... She didn't.
Tris I wake to see a white room. Was this heaven..? It couldn't be... I felt pain in my back. "My god!" I scream my head off, this pain was impossible to ignore. Doctors frantically came rushing in. "She's awake!" they whisper to each other as if I'm not there... "My back..." I start to say how much it hurts, but I black out again.
(Should I continue? Tell me if I should, thanks :D I'll probably write more tonight.)