The Black Rose Murders
A rather loosely based Utena Fanfic (And I use Loose in the Loosest sense of the word)
Written By: Double O
Utena is property of Chiho Saitou and B-Papas.
Any characters that resemble theirs in this story is purely intentional
All other characters that don't belong to the said two people are property
of me.
If there are any spelling errors, please be kind. I suck at spelling.
Prologue: He who is known as the Black Rose
Setting: A rather sparsely furnished apartment somewhere in America. There isn't much in the way of
furniture, only a blue recliner and a sofa. There's a TV near the door, a small kitchenette
near the back, also sparsely furnished, and a small hallway with a few doors at the end and
sides of it. A few boxes are scattered throughout the area, each marked with numbers and writing
saying where it's supposed to go.
(The door to the outside opens, and in walks a red-haired girl and the pink-haired man. They appear
to be talking about something, but near the end of the conversation. The red-haired girl is wearing
a long green dress, apparently made of crushed velvet. She has a matching bow in her hair, which
is currently braided into a ponytail. The man is wearing what appears to be a black priest
shirt, minus the white collar, with a red trim and buttons, and a pair of white dress pants. He
is also wearing a long black suitcoat.)
Girl: Please, Dr. Nemuro, let me take your coat. It's late, and I don't want you to be burdened.
Nemruo: Don't worry; I'm not staying long. I just want to thank you for the time we've spent
together. Actually, (reaches into his coat) I have a gift for you. I hope you accept it!
(Hands girl a thin box, white, with a red ribbon tying it shut.)
Girl: Oh, don't mention... (Opens box, then drops it in shock. A single black rose falls from it)
Oh... my... GOOOOOOD! It... CAN'T... BEEEEE!
Nemuro: It is. I am the infamous (pulls out a sword from his coat, which has a black hilt and a
pink rose emblazoned on the hilt) Black Rose! And you (points tip of sword at the girl's
heart) Have been chosen as my next victim. Prepare yourself, or be destroyed.
Girl: Please! Spare me, Nemuro. You have no reason to kill me! Why? WHY MEEEE?
Nemuro: Because, you were the first woman to catch my eye after the last victim. Since you have
not made yourself ready, I guess I have no choice but to revolutionize the world...
STARTING WITH YOU!
(Nemuro moves his sword back, then lunges forward, driving sword through the girl's chest,
piercing her heart. The girl lets out a cry of pain before she passes out . Nemuro
pulls out his blade from the girl's lifeless torso, and starts to sheath it when he hears a
knock at the door. Nemuro finishes sheathing his sword, moves the girl's body onto the couch,
then opens the door. He sees that there are about 25 police officers surrounding the house,
with a rather attractive girl with dark purple hair and eyes standing a good meter in front
of the door. She is wearing a black dress shirt, a red tie, and red dress pants. She also has
a gun at her hip and a badge on her left breast pocket. Her hair is tied in a ponytail, and she
has a rather stern look on her face. Nemuro turns around and sees that the red head is alive and
poining a gun at Nemuro as well.)
Purple-Haired Girl: Dr. Nemuro, you are under arrest. You have the right to...
Nemuro: I know my rights, Detective Tokiko Chida. And I'll go quietly. One should always know
when one is beaten.
(Nemuro gave his blade to a random officer, then walked up to Tokiko, who promptly put him in
handcuffs and threw him into her cruiser. The medics ran into the girls house, but only
brought out a body bag with the girl's lifeless body inside. Some of the officers present were
mystified that the famous "Black Rose" used a sword and not a gun, which is what they first
suspected.)
(A few days later, Nemuro has been officially charged with the murders of Sakura Shinobara,
Nanami Takigawa, Kozue Fumihiko, Kanae Jumonji, Kiko Tatatsuki, and Keiko Sonodo. He is currently
locked up inside a rather featureless cell. Nemuro is wearing the typical Orange prison garb,
with the number 4313654 imprinted on the left breast, back, and arms. A guard opens his cell,
and in walks his lawyer. His lawyer has rather tan skin, long light blue hair, nearly white,
and is wearing all white. Nemuro looks up, then away.)
Lawyer: Well Nemuro, are you proud? Did you do what you set out to do? Did you bring about this
"World Revolution" that you bragged about? Was killing those six women really worth it?
Nemuro: I believe it has. However, I don't think that I needed to kill those six girls, when I
look at it in retrospect. You know, when you're put into solitary confinement, you get
a lot of free time to think. And that's what I've done: I've though about things.
I have no wish to die. I wish to make a plea bargain. It will be rather strange, but
I think that if I set it up right, almost anyone will agree.
(The lawyer and Nemuro start talking, but it cannot be heard.)
End of Prologue.
A rather loosely based Utena Fanfic (And I use Loose in the Loosest sense of the word)
Written By: Double O
Utena is property of Chiho Saitou and B-Papas.
Any characters that resemble theirs in this story is purely intentional
All other characters that don't belong to the said two people are property
of me.
If there are any spelling errors, please be kind. I suck at spelling.
Prologue: He who is known as the Black Rose
Setting: A rather sparsely furnished apartment somewhere in America. There isn't much in the way of
furniture, only a blue recliner and a sofa. There's a TV near the door, a small kitchenette
near the back, also sparsely furnished, and a small hallway with a few doors at the end and
sides of it. A few boxes are scattered throughout the area, each marked with numbers and writing
saying where it's supposed to go.
(The door to the outside opens, and in walks a red-haired girl and the pink-haired man. They appear
to be talking about something, but near the end of the conversation. The red-haired girl is wearing
a long green dress, apparently made of crushed velvet. She has a matching bow in her hair, which
is currently braided into a ponytail. The man is wearing what appears to be a black priest
shirt, minus the white collar, with a red trim and buttons, and a pair of white dress pants. He
is also wearing a long black suitcoat.)
Girl: Please, Dr. Nemuro, let me take your coat. It's late, and I don't want you to be burdened.
Nemruo: Don't worry; I'm not staying long. I just want to thank you for the time we've spent
together. Actually, (reaches into his coat) I have a gift for you. I hope you accept it!
(Hands girl a thin box, white, with a red ribbon tying it shut.)
Girl: Oh, don't mention... (Opens box, then drops it in shock. A single black rose falls from it)
Oh... my... GOOOOOOD! It... CAN'T... BEEEEE!
Nemuro: It is. I am the infamous (pulls out a sword from his coat, which has a black hilt and a
pink rose emblazoned on the hilt) Black Rose! And you (points tip of sword at the girl's
heart) Have been chosen as my next victim. Prepare yourself, or be destroyed.
Girl: Please! Spare me, Nemuro. You have no reason to kill me! Why? WHY MEEEE?
Nemuro: Because, you were the first woman to catch my eye after the last victim. Since you have
not made yourself ready, I guess I have no choice but to revolutionize the world...
STARTING WITH YOU!
(Nemuro moves his sword back, then lunges forward, driving sword through the girl's chest,
piercing her heart. The girl lets out a cry of pain before she passes out . Nemuro
pulls out his blade from the girl's lifeless torso, and starts to sheath it when he hears a
knock at the door. Nemuro finishes sheathing his sword, moves the girl's body onto the couch,
then opens the door. He sees that there are about 25 police officers surrounding the house,
with a rather attractive girl with dark purple hair and eyes standing a good meter in front
of the door. She is wearing a black dress shirt, a red tie, and red dress pants. She also has
a gun at her hip and a badge on her left breast pocket. Her hair is tied in a ponytail, and she
has a rather stern look on her face. Nemuro turns around and sees that the red head is alive and
poining a gun at Nemuro as well.)
Purple-Haired Girl: Dr. Nemuro, you are under arrest. You have the right to...
Nemuro: I know my rights, Detective Tokiko Chida. And I'll go quietly. One should always know
when one is beaten.
(Nemuro gave his blade to a random officer, then walked up to Tokiko, who promptly put him in
handcuffs and threw him into her cruiser. The medics ran into the girls house, but only
brought out a body bag with the girl's lifeless body inside. Some of the officers present were
mystified that the famous "Black Rose" used a sword and not a gun, which is what they first
suspected.)
(A few days later, Nemuro has been officially charged with the murders of Sakura Shinobara,
Nanami Takigawa, Kozue Fumihiko, Kanae Jumonji, Kiko Tatatsuki, and Keiko Sonodo. He is currently
locked up inside a rather featureless cell. Nemuro is wearing the typical Orange prison garb,
with the number 4313654 imprinted on the left breast, back, and arms. A guard opens his cell,
and in walks his lawyer. His lawyer has rather tan skin, long light blue hair, nearly white,
and is wearing all white. Nemuro looks up, then away.)
Lawyer: Well Nemuro, are you proud? Did you do what you set out to do? Did you bring about this
"World Revolution" that you bragged about? Was killing those six women really worth it?
Nemuro: I believe it has. However, I don't think that I needed to kill those six girls, when I
look at it in retrospect. You know, when you're put into solitary confinement, you get
a lot of free time to think. And that's what I've done: I've though about things.
I have no wish to die. I wish to make a plea bargain. It will be rather strange, but
I think that if I set it up right, almost anyone will agree.
(The lawyer and Nemuro start talking, but it cannot be heard.)
End of Prologue.