This is my first story! It's about hinata, I tend to make this at least tenchapters or more, so enjoy! Give me ideas and reviews I will reply!
The Clouds, dropped pellets of rain hard with stillness with their eternal pounding drop. The water of the ocean had roared like always, no living life was found in the greyish blue waters, It was completely a dead shore. As if the sky was cloudless but grey and dark, no light was seen up above in the heavens of earth.
The Village was close, even the Village filled with living souls that could smile everyday looked depressing. That made Konan sad to think about. Once in the life time of the Rain, Everyone was happy. Now it is to the point, no one talks to each other, most stay in their hard concrete homes. The concrete walls were plastard white with poles and lines around the large Skyscrapers and buildings. Alot of Pipes everywhere, since building have disconnected each other from the horrible storms.
The Villagers looked even more depressed then the Village itself, they had lost a true honorable Leader. Which in effect, made them lose their rare hope. On a corner street stood a natural looking building that happend to be their orphan home. She always wanted to adopt a child, and raise the child to her own will. Pein said it would get in the way.
Yes, he said 'It' a child isn't a 'It'. She knew it was a must to change into the serious strong nature for him to take over the Five Element Nations. She just missed the hyper active Yahiko she knew and grew up with.
He was like Naruto Uzumaki in a lot of ways when he was younger, thinking he was the strongest and best, that didn't give up.
Konan stood on a sunken boat and clumped dirt in the middle of the ocean, looking down at the water around her roared as her elegant stance was facing a inhumane Uchiha. It now seemed like, any Uchiha living was inhumane. They were not reliable with anything. Every Uchiha she knew had did or done something to lose their trust to someone they knew.
But now Madara stood 40 yards in front of her, His orange mask reflect the rain itself. His hair was bending its edges in droplets. She wished she could tell what he was thinking. Even Madara was a traitor, which was really sad. Are any Uchihas
realiable?
Years ago the Great Uchiha clan was killed by Itachi Uchiha. Konan still doesn't know why though.
Itachi was quietly deadly. He was very calm though
Madara spoke agaisnt his own will. He didn't really hate Konan she just was agaisnt him, which meant a battle had to take place. He squat down his elbows on his knees, his long arms hanging off.
"Konan, nice seeing you here."
Konan returned a glare to him. He smiled wickedly staying in his position untouched. Her silence forward him to say more.
"Say where is Pein-SAMA." His voice held a sydistic smirk to the 'Sama'. Madara calmed down on his cockiness, but the same smirk stayed on his face.
Konan glared at him, the only two that she had ever felt anything with were dead and gone. How could he even be rude? It was plainly disrespectful
"They are dead, there is no reason to ask that, when you know damn well what happend."
She paused to look away, somthing she had done with her dear Pein-sama. It was true...even as a Akatuski, a female can be intimidated easily.
She had missed Pein-sama dearly, He had barely any love to give, but any sympathtic tone of voice or soft looks, she would rather be happy to recive.
He would hug her agaisnt his chest if she felt overly worried.
Konan sighed to herself Glancing back to gauge the distance of her pursuer, he sickened her greatly.
Madara's smile faded behind his mask, fiesty Konan was,
"Calm down Konan. I am planning on killing you soon."
Madara seemed to have activated the Special Sharingan, She could feel his cold wet stare at her, his desire for her to look once in his melancholy eye direction. She shifted her weight, her eyes refusing to look at his one felt rather painful not to look, the world around her swung and spinner every which way, her head spinning as if she was going to faint. The rain felt colder As the waves crash down louder, Her eyes refused the temtation.
"Whats wrong Konan? Feeling sick are you?"
His smirk killed her inside, he was winning. She had to give in soon. 10 mintues passed, she felt as if her head was going to explode
"Arghh!", She held her head clenching her eyes shut falling to the ground. The mud she landed in squished under her, she felt so uncomfortable. She opened her pretty eye eyelashes, breathing heavily giving in, her Almond eyes fell into his red sharingan. She was in danger, like she could grab it in midair.
The chakra went through her eyes, she tried to fight agaisnt the pain by peeling herself, but it hadn't helped. The paper she was peeling flew at him in sharp shuriken. She couldn't help but not to be concentrated through this kind of pain. The shuriken flew passed him hitting his mask. She could hear the cracking of the mask, her paper flew back to her reattaching itself. Before she could get a last glimpse of him, the pain deepen into her internal organs.
"Auguh!" A genjutsu had effected her harshly torturing her, the world turned negative, the odd color of the sky confused her greatly. She could feel hot blood swimming out of her mouth, her eyes clenched as she fell into the cold water, filling her lungs she took her last breath seeing the Red eye, the Red eye smirking and laughing at her defeat. The rest was blank, all she could feel was pain. Her body became limp and lifeless surpassing death.
Part2 of chapter1
The Heiress and The Cousin
Hinata had been painting her toes a pale pink color, she sat in her elegant room, on the lacy bed, trying her hardest not to mess up. She had Her knee to her chest bending to swipe the brush on her middle toe. The paint easily went on. She blew gently thinking about her family.
Her favorite cousin, Kai Hyuga was on a mission, he was suppose to come home tonight, she sighed hoping to get him back before midnight. The heiress worried about all her family, but Kai had encouraged her and helped her with training, the RIGHT way.
Glancing at a small drop of nail polish on her bed she picked at it while biting her lip. She was worried about her family, the intensity of walking past each other was ridiculous, She had seen other family relationships. Normal families. They loved and cared, Kiba's mom was Ill tempered against kiba , but she still loved him.
Why couldn't her family be perfect? Was it her fault?
Shaking her head she moved on to her next toe nail, dipping it then swiping it gently on the edge so it wouldn't drip, she gently then swiped it on her toe nail.
Hinata wore a black hoodie and grey shorts, her soft Indigo hair in a ponytail, letting her toes dry, she looked outside sighing. She thought about her sensai's death. Maybe she should go pray?
Yes...She smiled putting on her simple strap shoes.
Opening the door to a soft creak, she looked around to see if any of the clan was walking past. When the coast was clear she walked down the hall way which was outside. Our family clan house is weird. We are all connected to each others room, it's like each room is a different house with Japanese styled features, but the hallway was connected to each other outside. The middle had a pond and a training field.
Looking around she stepped over the gate instead of opening it. She walked through the Hyuga manor entrance.
Finally Reaching the Konoha village to buy flowers at the Yamanaka Flower Shop. She looked around in the village lantern lights just to see if anyone would want to come with her.
Sighing seeing no one she would know, she walked on the dirt road taking a right on the next corner.
"Naruto-kun has been Hokage for a year already. I wonder what he is doing now? Oh wait...with Sakura? Of course!" She mumbles to herself as the cool breeze fell throught the strands of her hair.
" What's so great about Sakura?", Her body stiffened to a halt.
She thought about this as she awkwardly started walking again. Kicking a rock off the dusty road.
Okay, Sakura has...Pink hair...Green eyes...really bitchy to Naruto for some reason. Hinata looks to the side of her, seeing a window pane.
She looked over her body, and face. How ugly...she was no heiress... Her face had a scar that went down the right of her lips. Hinata's lashes were long, making her huge eyes look even weirder. Her Lavender eyes could see through to the soul, but looked plainly weird. Her body was thick, not bone skinny, but not super fat. Just thick with curves.
Hinata turned looking away from the ugly reflection, the area was crowded, bumping into someone, she excused herself with a sorry, her blush grew, how embarrassing. Passing the body she saw the flower shop, reaching the entrance.
Reaching the flower shop took her mind off of everything. She opens the door as a sweet smell filled her nose. The walls are covered in elegant flowers. She smiled at Ino-Chan. Who returned smiling back
Ino had long blond hair, very pretty eyes, she was curvy like Hinata, but right now she had her hair abnormally down. Wearing a orange shirt and shorts.
Hinata walked up to the counter, her eyes set on the simple roses.
"Late night shifts Ino-chan?" Hinata gave her a hug, she never had talked to Ino much until her and Kai had been getting close, she loved hanging out with them both.
She sighed slightly, a hint of tiredness in usual her peppy voice. "Well, yeah my dad has been busy too, so I wanted to step up"
Hinata nodded understanding her situation. "Hehe I-I understand Ino-chan."
"Oh yeah, so how have you been Hina-chan?"
Ino smiled, her eyes looking outside then glancing back at hinata.
"Uh-uhm Okay, I-I geuss. I just came here for some flowers, I am going to go pray at the cementary."
Hinata remembered about her teamates and Karenai being killed by some Unknown ninja on their last mission. She sighed looking away. Her eyes ran over the counter top, the glass scratched and scraped up. She missed them, she felt alone. Kiba and Shino were basically her brothers. Akamaru and Kiba were always there to make her feel better, they protected her dearly. Shino was understanding and silent, she often confessed personal issues, clan secrets she had problems with, and her feelings on everyone.
Karenai was her sensai period, she took care of Hinata greatly. They would shop if they would gain money from a mission. Hinata owes Karenai her life. She owes Shino and Kiba her life too. It was because of her they were dead.
A sudden anger burst in her heart though... Her calm expression twitched but stayed calm.
"I heard Hinata-chan, I am so sorry. " Ino eyes saddened, looking down she was truly sorry. Hinata saw she was about to cry, she shook her head, " Ino-chan, don't regret anything. They are in a better place, they are happy. Even I know that, I miss them but...I shouldn't cry, I should pray...so should you."
Ino looked away wiping her tears, she noddes understanding. Noticing how confident Hinata sounded, it was strange but true.
"Thankyou Hinata-chan."
Hinata got some money out, she knew Ino's family was needing money badly, flowers weren't coming in on the season, it was Fall. Hinata took out all her money, 90$ for four independent roses.
Ino eyes widen, she shook her head, "Hinata, no."
"Yes, take it."
"Hinata...that's unfair, stop being generous."
Ino looked at her pushing back the money.
Hinata pushed it back.
"Take it, it's from my Father's check, he doesn't deserve anything like this. Now take it."
"Your father is a leader."
"My father is cruel, please..just take it. Your family need it more then anybody in my clan."
Ino sighed looking at the money then back at hinata, she took the money in her hand putting it in her pocket. She smiled at Hinata getting the four yroses off the shelf. Giving it too hinata, three of them were red, the pink one for Karenai-sensai.
"Thankyou Hinata. Your amazing, we are thankful."
Hinata smiled and nodded, walking to the door, she opens it slightly. "It's fine Ino-chan, I'll see you later."
Ino noddes waving back, "Bye Hina-chan!"