OK 1st off I didn't no this was updated in the first place!
this was a rough draft and I meant to add punctuation and stuff so here's the polished copy.
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It was a beautiful day in the cloud village, except for a certain baker, "Argggggh come back here,'' he screamed.
The ninja just replied, ''As if'' eating his newly 'found' bread.
The man just screamed about to pop a vein, ''Curse you Raito Nejairu.''
Meanwhile, in a village in the fire country a blond boy with 3 whiskers down his face was crying. ''Why? Why do they all hate me? Why?''
5 years later...................
"I can't believe this," Raito said.
"Of all people that could be the ambassador for cloud, I have to do it heck I don't even like cloud village save 4 or 5 people."
As he walked in the hokage's office, the third, with a solemn look on his face as if he just witnessed a miracle, said, "Ahh Raito Nejairu welcome to Konoha."
"Thanks but I have a question first before anything."
"Well?"
"I was wondering if i could be a Konoha ninja and start a team here." he said hoping he would never have to go back to that forsaken village again.
"I don't see why not." the third said with a smile on his face.
"Sweet!" then realizing his impoliteness he bowed and apoligized.
"It's OK. Here is your team, you have tonight to review their records."
"Got it." Raito said with a hint of happiness in his eyes.
Meanwhile.............
An angry mobee says, "Get the demon fox; kill him!" with a bloodthirsty anger that the devil would be proud of.
Running for his life, Naruto runs into the forest only to bump into someone. A beautiful someone with chocolate eyes and her hair done up in 2 buns.
"Sorry my fault." He blurted flustered by her appearance.
"No it was mine I was daydreaming." She said with smile.
"Hi I'm Tenten."
"Hi I'm Naruto."
.....and with that a new bond was formed. Little did they know it would be forever.
In Raito's apartment.........
"Wow indoor plumbing." he said with great appreciation for his new place. "And here I thought the Hokage was kidding when I'd get a good place to stay."
He sat down on his couch and read his clipboard. "Alright let's see who we got here."
1. Tenten Araitun skills are: very good with weapons
"OK great someone with skill."
2. Sakura Haruno skills are: chakra control
"hmmmmm have to meet in person tomorrow." he said.
3 Naruto Uzumaki skills are: fast and loud
"Oh joy a -- hmm whats this?"
WARNING! #3 VESSEL OF THE 9-TAILED FOX BEWARE!
and he dropped the paper his face in total shock.
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OK heres the better version. hope you like it. Read and Review. :)