5 year old naruto uzumaki was a lonely boy with no friends. None of the kids would play with him cause their parents would let them. He looked different from the other kids cause of his blonde hair and blue yes signifing his french heritage. The adult assumed that he was troublemaker and bad omen because of that. So the children stayed away. One day as naruto was playing by himself in the sand box an another little boy walked up to him. He had raven hair and gentle kind eyes typical asian. Naruto stared as the boy sat down with him and started to build a sand castle. Naruto smiled he finally had a friend. When his mother called for him he stood up and turn to say bye but the boy was gone.
The day naruto was in his backyard and the raven appeared again. they played til Naruto was called in for dinner. And when naruto turned around the boy was gone again. This went on for weeks til Naruto's family had to move, on his last day in his old room the boy appeared in the window. He looked at naruto's crying face and gave him a hankercheif. He smiled gently and kiss him on the forehead. Naruto closed his eyes at the gesture and this time was wasn't surprised when he opened his eyes to find the boy gone again but he was surprise to find a white feather in his place. And when his picked it up he heard
we will meet again
I redid this chapter what do you think