Hi, this is my first published fanfic, I am 13 and I hope you like it, I also have fanfic's about revolutionary road! I hope you enjoy, this is one of my shorter fanfic's.
Jack?
Rose sat at the end of the doc, looking out to sea. The wind whistled in her ears and the sea breeze dried the tears on her face. She had started with Cal, she had found jack and had the best part her world served to her in 3 days. Slowly Rose stood up, her legs were scratched and battered from the furniture, she walked away from the New York dock and headed for one of the black cabs that waited in a line for the few survivors, she looked back, as if she was almost certain jack would be stood there, she blinked back a tidal wave of tears and stepped into the cab. The driver had thick black hair in a style that reminded her of cal; the driver did not ask were she wanted to go he just drove. Rose stared out of the window taking in the sights, for herself and for jack. The cab swiftly took a right turn, then a left turn and then it screeched to a halt whipping Rose out of her seat and nearly into the driver, the driver got out of the cab and started yelling in the way you'd expect to be yelled at by your mum for making a mess. Rose sat up and moved about so she could see what the problem was, before she saw anything she stopped looking and froze what if it was Cal who had come to claim her for ever! The driver stopped yelling by this point and the mystery began to speak, its voice was low (telling her that it was a man) and calm sounding just like Jacks. That's impossible she thought, all she kept imagining was jack stood in front of the cab and then picturing him lying on the end of the door frozen to death. The thought whizzed through her head until she could no longer bare it, she climbed out of the cab and slowly peer over the front windscreen, her eyes filled with a tsunami of tears as there stood jack in his white shirt, brown trousers and his silver handcuffs shining in the sunlight, she giggled through her tears and ran to Jack. She threw her arms around him and he lifted her up. Rose was lost for words, several minutes passed and Rose struggled to put the letters together to speak to him, but eventually she managed, "how jack, how did you get out alive" she stuttered and mumble until jack placed his finger over Roses lips, he ran his fingers through Roses hair "you jump I jump right?" Rose smiled at him "right"