Kyane:Yup I am back!Don't worry...Intruders will still be written and completed...it's just that I should snag a chance when I get it!

Muse:Wow...you really out did yourself...

Subby:Intruders is nearing the end! Here's our second story...


He said,she says:Chappy 1:Rebound


"Sadly,our own beloved Baron Kingley has died.No kin,no wife.As his deathwish,Baron Kingley wants Commander Praxis to take up the title."The Head Councilor announced before backing away from the mike."Will Commander Praxis step up here?"

The crowd below the Councilor roared with life as a twenty year old man in a familiar red suit with the Krimson Guard sign on his back.He waved to the crowd before stepping up onto the stage.Praxis shook hands with the Head Councilor.

"They're gonna eat you alive boy."The elder exclaimed before smiling and walked off stage.


Praxis stared after the elder,clearly shocked.Praxis went up to the mike."Dear citizens of Haven City!"

A crowd of girls started screaming his name and held up a banner with his name on it."We love you Commander...Baron!"

Praxis glanced at them then at the smirking crowd.

They're gonna eat you alive boy.

"As I was saying...Citizens of Haven City.I will gladly accept this title as Baron and will honor this city as our dearly departed Baron Kingley has.I will protect in any way possible!"

Praxis finally grabbed the nerve and looked back up.The crowd wasn't looking at him but at the sky,pointing and murmuring.

The Head Councilor tapped Praxis's shoulder."You should uphold that honor."With that,the elder pointed to the sky.Praxis looked up and immediately grabbed his communicator."We have a problem."


There was an object on fire and it was heading straight for the square the crowd was at.

"Clear the area and put up the light eco nets! I repeat,clear area and Q3 emergency."Praxis shut it off and helped the elder down."Get everyone out of here."

The elder nodded and disappeared into the crowd.

Praxis looked up again and made out a figure with a...jetpack on their back?


As it came closer,the nets finally popped up and caught the person.

"Female?"Praxis warily stalked up to the woman and saw a magnificent mane of unnaturally red hair barely singed by the flaming jetpack."Er..miss? You alright?"

"Stupid Vinny I swear I'll..."the red head glanced around her and grabbed the net,which was lowering slowly.She turned around and glared at Praxis."You!"She jabbed a finger at him."Is this net reboundable?"

Praxis snapped out of it."Oh shit..."He ran for the net but it was too late.

The net flung the red head,who was screaming a very colorful vocabulary,towards the lake where the battleships were.


Praxis sighed before taking out his communicator."This is Praxis again...yes take the nets off...really?...oh thank you...anyways...there's a red head woman now swimming in our lake...take her out for questioning of course...take your mind out of the gutter soldier!"He slammed it shut before jumping onto a lone hovercar and zooming to the middle of Haven City.


Kyane:Whaddya think?

Muse:still shocked...

Subby:By the stupidity of what she said?

Muse:you've been reading Furuba haven't you!

Kyane:No don't fight...till next time...