Hello guys!, Thatguy48 here rewriting and improving on Justice 10. Im fixing Grammar, Spelling, and other issues with the story. I wanted to focus on a story following on an 13 y/o Ben Tennyson rather than the other fanfics on this site where he is either 16/18. I also have him as 13 because I dont want for him to be too over powered in the DC Universe compared to the other heroes and villains but don't worry, he'll have his moments like Master Control and Maybe "Ultimate Forms" when he is older. So anyway, Kickback and relax and Enjoy "Justice 10.", Reviews are Greatly appreciated and criticism allows me to further go deeper into the story.
FYI Ben has his OMNIVERSE look as it fits the best with the art syle of Justice League/ Unlimted.
-Washinton D.C, Lincoln Memorial- 5000 Meters below the ground...-
Underneath The Streets of The Nations Capital and 5000 Meters below the ground, lied a large room filled with strange chemical and biological equipment that far passed 21st century technology. In the Center of the room lied a computer with a massive monitor as the chair infront of the keyboard swivels around to show a man appearing to be in his late Fifties, He has white hair and a scrawy appereance, he wore grey goggles with red lenses and a long lab coat that trailed down to his knees an he smiled deviously. "My Plan that I worked hard for six months is nearly complete Mr. President, after I mutate you into one of my Creations, the nation shall bow before me as I lead them to a new Genetically pushed future.", said the man in his late fifties to The United States President who was currently tied and gagged up to prevent him from escaping.
"MMMMPH!" "MPPPH!", Replied the president who was powerless to escape the mad Professor's plan.
"Come to think of It, It was a Excellent Idea I installed a Jamming System into my base for those ratchet plumbers couldn't track me!", The aged scientist said while grasping his chin "Tennyson and his allies could have stopped me but it's already too late!"
"You really think so Animo?", asked a adloscent voice from behind the mad doctor, Animo's faced scrunched up in disgust as he knew he would be able to reconise the voice anywhere. Animo turned around and saw a Boy with a young teenagerish appearance, the teen wore a white shirt with a black collar and line going down the middle of the shirt forming a "T", he also wore Khaki tangy green pants with black shoes, most oddily was the oversized object on the boys left wrist. It apperaed to be an slightly oversized black and grey wristwatch with a green hourglass center in the middle this was the "Omnitrix", the most powerful device in the Universe. To normal people he was known as Ben Tennyson but to his closest allies and family members he was known as "Ben 10", Bearer of the Omnitrix, and saver of his home planet and his entire universe.
"Tennyson...", Animo spat out as his teeth gritted together, he hated Ben, he was always so close to victory and world domination but Ben Tennyson was always there to stop him in one form or another-literally.
"Yep.", Ben responded in a taunting manner appearing like he didn't care of Animo's words "That's Me, anyways are you ready for A major buttkicking like last time?, anyway lets make this quick, I'm trying to catch Sumo Slammer's by 9 PM."
"Don't treat me as A JOKE! I'LL KILL YOU BOY!", Animo angrily lashed out ashe balled up his fist angrily and began typing strings of commands to his keyboard before hitting "enter". "You WILL NOT RUIN MY PLANS OF WORLD DOMINATION AGAIN! MEET MY CHILDREN!"
From the shadows rolled out a large mechanical cage that moved itself a few feet infront of Ben, loud animalastic roars were heard from the inside of the cage as the latch then opened as three of Animo's "Children" crawled out of the cage. To Ben, they appeared to Be a combination of Stinkfly's and a Grizzly bears DNA. Getting on all Fours, the Creatures rushed at Ben causing him to vault out the way and quickly slap down the dial of the strange device on his wrist and engulfing him in a green emerald light which spread across the room.
Ben's body became lankier and he grew taller to an adults height. His Skin color turned a light blue and his eyes developed dark lines that ran drom his sockets down to his jaw, his head became longer and cresent shaped. Ben developed a long tail with black and blue stripes on it as his feet developed small black balls on the soles. Lastly, the Omnitrix reappeared on his chest. When the Transformation was complete he resembeled a humanoid velociraptor.
"XLR8!", Ben yelled before dashing towards the mutations at an impressive near five hundred miles per hour speeds towards the mad doctors creations. Jumping into the air, XLR8 performed several quicks to the eye stalks of the Stinkfly/bear hybrid before twisting around and slamming his striped tail into the mutate's neck. Grunting in pain, the bear roared before trying to perfrom several swipes at the Kinceleran which all missed thanks to XLR8's senses and speed.
"Okay Teddy! Play Times Over!", Ben yelled as he slammed his foot into the bears cranium, slamming it into a nearby wall while leaving multiple cracks nehind from the impact. "One hideous science expermient down, two more to go."
The Kinceleran then dodged a swipe from another bear before cornering it and before speeding around it and confusing it. A Blue and black cyclone then followed while Ben launched a barrage of Superspeed Punches, Kicks, and swipes while the mutations attempted to fight back by spraying green acid towards XLR8 that he quickly dodged. Soon the creations fail to their feet uncounsious.
"Score for Ben 10!", Ben yelled before the room was engulfed in a Red-ruby light revealing Ben back in his human form "Really!?, I thought I had 25 minutes on this thing!", Ben exclaimed suprisingly "Stupid watch!" he yelled as he crossed his arms while staring at the hourglass which was now Red.
"Don't worry Tennyson, you wan't have to worry about how much time you have when your DEAD, After I kill you, I'll rip off your arm!", Animo yelled "Release the Droids!"
At that moment the Hourglass on the core changed from Ruby Red to Emerald Green which it then produced a light beep letting Ben know that he can now transfom again, Ben smiled as he adjusted the dial on the Omnitrix and selected a black siloutte of a four armed humanoid "You want my arms?, well how about all Four!", Ben yelled as he slammed down on the core again, his body began to steadily change as his mouth and nose dissapeared while both of his eyes fused together and formed a thin green ring. his chest became white while the outside of his body elongated and became solid black. Lastly, a green circuitry pattern appeared on the black parts of his body while the Omnitrix reappeared on his chest.
"UPGRADE!", Ben yelled in a synthesized voice, sounding like it was coming from a computer, Ben then began to briefly look at himself up and down and he let out a sigh of frustration. "This isn't even funny anymore, what do you against Four-Arms!?
"Fine I can work with Upgrade." he said as his cycloptic eye then glowed a bright green and fired an destructive energy wave at Animo's suit Gorilla suit. The blast sent the geneticist flying towards the computer and cracking the screen. Groaning from the impact, Animo hit a button inside of his suit and a robotic being fell from the ceiling and quickly became Ben's new target. Seeing this as an opportunity, Uprade then lunged towards the robot and absorbed himself inside it. The Droid's "skin" then molded into a black and green color scheme which then resembled Upgrades. The Droid controlled by Ben then shifted one of it's hand into a small gattling gun and opened fire on the room, making sure not to miss of any of Doctor Animo's lab equipment.
"You Brat!", Animo screeched while banging his fists into the ground completly shattering it, "I spent 6 years of my life working on equipment, from Amino Acid resequencers to biological nano machines! You will pay for this boy!" Animo yelled.
Upgrade let out a synthetic giggle before proceeding to separate from the machine while deconstructing it and leaving broken peices on the ground. When Ben was finished Unknowingly to him, he was unprepared to face a swing knocking him down into the ground from The Gorilla Exo-suit.
"You DO NOT WANT TO MESS WITH ME BENJAMIN!, I'll make you PAY!, You do not want to fight Fire with Fire!"
Getting an Idea of what Ben 10,000 taught him about his use and the feature of the Omnitrix, Upgrade softly tapped the Omnitrix faceplate on his chest and began to transform into another species entirely. His body's skin texture became extremly rock like and crusty as his hands became slightly oversized. His toes fused together on his feet leaving two toes left in the front and one on the back of his foot. His "insides" were then coated in a molten liquid resembling magma and his head erupted on fire. Lastly, The Omnitrix reappeared on his chest.
"HEATBLAST!", Ben yelled as he began to light two fireballs in each of his hands and began to float in the air. "Did anyone order fried Gorilla?, you know what...nervermind."
Heatblast launched the flaming projectiles at Animo who proceeded to block them with his massively sized fists but the impact was far too powerful, it knocked the doctor back while parts of his suit began to catch on fire. He brushed himself off as fast as possible before turning his attention back towards the pyronite.
"I know this is Ironic coming from me.", announced Heatblast in his raspy voice "But your little light is going out." Ben then lit up two medium sized fireballs that grew rapidly in sized and then slowy placed his hands forward.
"I call this move the Flamethrower.", The shapeshifter said before the Omnitrix begun to flash red on his chest while producing a high pitch series of beeps. "All Shi-"
In a flash of light, Ben was once again transformed back to normal "Always at the worst times!"
The Scientist smiled deviuosly as he hopped out of his battle worn exo-suit and begun to slowy approach The now powerless Teen. "With your lengthy recharge period due to your rapid changes with the Omnitrix nothing can stop me now!, he then pulled out a AK-47 and pointed it at the Omnitrix bearer.
"Die!", he yelled as he tried to fire his weapon only for it to be engulfed in a blueish looking construct With the energy trailing leading back to Lucky Girl- Gwen Tennyson- Ben Tennyson's cousin. Gwen then telekinetically ripped apart the weapon before tossing it towards the side.
"You witch!", The professor gasped while grasping his head, "Do you know how long it takes to work on that?, Luckily I always will have a plan B!" Animo then brought out a strange looking stick that fired an energy wave at Ben before he could react. This sent Ben flying towards his cousins feet and he groaned in agony.
"Ben.!", Gwen yelled for her cousins safety and kneeling to his limp body trying to make sure he was okay.
"I called it the molecule destabilizer, other words a "goop" gun for your single celled mind to understand!", Doctor Animo said before laughing and preparing to fire again "Luckily one more shot should do the trick!"
"Don't hurt my cousin you worthless FREAK!" Gwen retaliated and shot a Mana attack right at the Destabilizer, causing it to combust nearly instantly and melt in the mad doctors hands. Ben screamed as a white light enveloped him and vanished in a cloud of smoke. Gwen panicked and looked for any traces of her cousin, she couldn't find him. He was gone.
"No you can't be gone, you just can't!" Gwen yelled, appearing on the verge of tears and frantically looking for any signs of Ben's wherabouts.
"This is simply, most interesting.", said the mad doctor while sporting a wicked grin, "I didn't plan for it to Vaporize the boy, But Ben Tennyson is gone, he is no longer a thorn in my side, I can continue my experiments freely...I did it... I HAVE DESTROYED BEN TENNYSON"!, Doctor Animo fell on his Knees while yelling triumphuntly.
"I'll make you pay!", Gwen yelled as her eyes glowed a bright pink and a aura flowed around her body with the same color causing Animo to crawl back out of fear.
"Stay away from me child!"
Gwen slowy moved closer as a dangerous amount of heat radiated off her body and step she took warped and melted the once cold metal floor.
"Please!, Show some mercy- the Gun wasn't mean't to kill him, or evaporate him, only to cause him harm!", Animo pleaded with his hands locked together as he begged for mercy to the normally stable Tennyson in the Trio.
"Mercy? Mercy?, Like How you showed my Cousin? I'll show you Mercy!", Gwen screamed as a large burst of mana erupted from her body and slammed into Dr. Animo, pinning him to the wall.
"You can't kill me I know you well enough to know that Max raised you and Ben well enough to know when the enemy is down-r-right!?", The doctor asked as he began to whimper, when the Gwen get this powerful? It most likely can't be her magic Animo noted to himself, From his small experiences with magic, Animo found himself allying with Charmcaster in the past multiple times before and surly she herself never practiced spells this powerful. It was like Gwen was being powered by some other entity or force.
Gwen gritted her teeth together as her eyes grew even brighter and Animo screamed even louder than he ever did in his life.
"SOME ONE. PLEASE. HELP ME!", Animo yelled as he fate was left in the hands of an enraged and powerful Gwendolyn Tennyson.
AUTHORS NOTE: Well that's "Chapter 1" redone folks, I kinda rewrote the story a little bit but overall everything is still the same. The "Unknown power" Gwen called upon is actually her partial "Anodite form" since Gwen's 1/4 Anodite. However, she does not know about Grandma Verdona (Yet).
For Anyone wondering, NO Gwen didn't kill Animo, only that she had hurt him very badly and put him in critical condition however he's surely to remeber this encounter with her in the future.
UP NEXT: Re-doing chapter 2 and changing the story around a little bit, I wanT to show how Ben managed to transform into Diamondhead in time to survive the impact from his fall.
Reviews are greatly appreciated along with Constructive Critisicm so tell me how you think of the story and how I can improve.
