A/N: Gods... Sorry it took so long to get this out. I rewrote it a bunch of times and still don't like it. >
Anyway, this is only a prologue. Sorry to everyone who was expecting a full chapter. >
Here are responses to the last chapter of Eien. ^_^
Ryuujin Dragon King: Wasn't exactly fast, and isn't much a chapter, but here's something at least. XD *Laughs* You've asked a lot. XD I'd count, but... I'm lazy.
And sorry. I can't stop harassing Yami. It's too fun. XD Thanks for the review!
Shadow Spirits: I think I'm gonna go back and make it a little more dramatic... Just slightly, at least. *Giggles* Don't worry, I'll explain about Bekhura eventually. XD Thanks for the review. ^_^
sugahigh: Thanks a bunch for the review! Glad you liked. ^_^
Starlit Hope: Well, this is the sequel/prequel, and I'll have a third installment which takes place a little after Eien and such. And don't worry, there'll be sidestories. They're what's been distracting me from writing this. XD I'm glad you liked, and thanks for the review!
Lori Kimaya: ^_^ Thanks for the compliments. And yup, I know about Yami's name. And yes, I'll incorporate it, but you'll have to see how in the next chapter, I think. ^_^ Wasn't exactly a quick update, but whatever. Close enough. XD Thanks for the review!
Borath: Glad you liked the ending even if it was quick and somewhat rushed. I wasn't exactly clear on how the memories thing is working, so I'll explain it before the actual chapter in the notes. I'm really glad you've liked Eien. ^_^ Thanks for the review!
Wingleader Sora Jade: ^_^ Sankyuu for the review!
yamisugar: ^_^ Thanks a bunch for the review! I'm glad you liked. ^_^
Silver Nightingale: Don't worry about it. ^_^ You've more than made up with it for all the compliments. *Giggles*
I'm so glad you liked Eien. ^_^ I'm also so flattered by the compliments I can't really think of anything to say. *Sweatdrops* Erm... I'm just really happy you like it and that you think it's well done. ^_^
I'm certainly gonna' try and finish everything. *Nods* Gonna work on getting stuff out in a timely fashion so I don't get bored. XD
Anyway, thank you for the review and I hope you like this fic as much as Eien. ^_^ (Or at least almost as much. XD)
AuroraIce: *Giggles* I'm glad you liked the fic. ^_^
Namonaki Pharaoh: ^_^ Thanks for the review! Glad you liked.
Shadowsage Hopesong: *Laughs* Here's the sequel. Glad you liked!
Other notes: As promised to Borath, I'm gonna explain how the memories this is gonna' work.
As you'll see, this chapter will start straight into AE. The way that this is working is that each character is seeing and feeling everything through their AE self's eyes as the events happen, like they were remembering it. Which is right. Yeah. It's like they're watching the something, just through their past self's eyes. They're not making any actions or anything, and they're not really aware that they're watching. It's like they're living it like they had. Er... If that makes any sense. Characters that aren't in the present, i.e. Akunadin, are just doing what had happened. If you're still confused, anyone, say so and I'll try to explain better.
Also, ages are a bit whacked. I took creative liberties. O.o If an age chart is requested I'll add one next chapter.
Warnings: Nothing this chapter. Amazing. XD
Disclaimer: I dun' own Yugioh. *Sigh*
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Itsumo; chapter 1 (prologue)
by: Amiasha
White cloth fluttered delicately as the wind brushed through it, and ruffled black hair. The young woman brushed a stray lock from her face and shielded her eyes from the wind and twirling sand, gazing upwards solemnly.
The to-be-priestess Aishizu frowned as she watched the dark clouds gather and swirl and the windstorm pick up. "This is not a good omen..." She murmured to herself softly.
She turned around as she felt a hand on her shoulder, coming face-to-face with another boy her age. "Hello, Mahaado." The girl greeted.
The blond boy smiled at her, then looked up at the sky. "This is very strange... Almost like a sandstorm, but not." He commented. "We should consult the priests and our parents. I wonder what this means..."
Aishizu sighed. "Not something good, I can tell that. How are the queen and her child doing?"
"As far as I have heard, they're alright." Mahaado answered, nodding without looking away from the sky. "You think this has to do with them?"
"Most likely." Aishizu said. "I hope not, though... If it does not mean death, then it means something else unpleasant... The child's life will be very unhappy..."
"Let's not tell him that." Mahaado suggested, shielding himself with his cloak as the wind kicked sand up into his face. "He would become understandably discouraged."
Aishizu sighed. "I'm not a priestess yet. I'm not certain. We cannot be sure what this means without someone experienced."
"Right..." Mahaado conceded. He looked over at her. "Come, let's get back to the palace and send our parents out."
Aishizu nodded. "Yes..." She said, following the blond boy back into the palace, casting a glance at the sky a last time before she entered.
Not a good omen at all.
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A/N: I said it was short. *Sweatdrop* I don't expect long reviews. XD *Looks again* Damn, the notes were longer than the prologue. O.o But at least I'll be past my block and I should have a chapter in some relativly timely order. I hope.
Anyway, this is only a prologue. Sorry to everyone who was expecting a full chapter. >
Here are responses to the last chapter of Eien. ^_^
Ryuujin Dragon King: Wasn't exactly fast, and isn't much a chapter, but here's something at least. XD *Laughs* You've asked a lot. XD I'd count, but... I'm lazy.
And sorry. I can't stop harassing Yami. It's too fun. XD Thanks for the review!
Shadow Spirits: I think I'm gonna go back and make it a little more dramatic... Just slightly, at least. *Giggles* Don't worry, I'll explain about Bekhura eventually. XD Thanks for the review. ^_^
sugahigh: Thanks a bunch for the review! Glad you liked. ^_^
Starlit Hope: Well, this is the sequel/prequel, and I'll have a third installment which takes place a little after Eien and such. And don't worry, there'll be sidestories. They're what's been distracting me from writing this. XD I'm glad you liked, and thanks for the review!
Lori Kimaya: ^_^ Thanks for the compliments. And yup, I know about Yami's name. And yes, I'll incorporate it, but you'll have to see how in the next chapter, I think. ^_^ Wasn't exactly a quick update, but whatever. Close enough. XD Thanks for the review!
Borath: Glad you liked the ending even if it was quick and somewhat rushed. I wasn't exactly clear on how the memories thing is working, so I'll explain it before the actual chapter in the notes. I'm really glad you've liked Eien. ^_^ Thanks for the review!
Wingleader Sora Jade: ^_^ Sankyuu for the review!
yamisugar: ^_^ Thanks a bunch for the review! I'm glad you liked. ^_^
Silver Nightingale: Don't worry about it. ^_^ You've more than made up with it for all the compliments. *Giggles*
I'm so glad you liked Eien. ^_^ I'm also so flattered by the compliments I can't really think of anything to say. *Sweatdrops* Erm... I'm just really happy you like it and that you think it's well done. ^_^
I'm certainly gonna' try and finish everything. *Nods* Gonna work on getting stuff out in a timely fashion so I don't get bored. XD
Anyway, thank you for the review and I hope you like this fic as much as Eien. ^_^ (Or at least almost as much. XD)
AuroraIce: *Giggles* I'm glad you liked the fic. ^_^
Namonaki Pharaoh: ^_^ Thanks for the review! Glad you liked.
Shadowsage Hopesong: *Laughs* Here's the sequel. Glad you liked!
Other notes: As promised to Borath, I'm gonna explain how the memories this is gonna' work.
As you'll see, this chapter will start straight into AE. The way that this is working is that each character is seeing and feeling everything through their AE self's eyes as the events happen, like they were remembering it. Which is right. Yeah. It's like they're watching the something, just through their past self's eyes. They're not making any actions or anything, and they're not really aware that they're watching. It's like they're living it like they had. Er... If that makes any sense. Characters that aren't in the present, i.e. Akunadin, are just doing what had happened. If you're still confused, anyone, say so and I'll try to explain better.
Also, ages are a bit whacked. I took creative liberties. O.o If an age chart is requested I'll add one next chapter.
Warnings: Nothing this chapter. Amazing. XD
Disclaimer: I dun' own Yugioh. *Sigh*
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Itsumo; chapter 1 (prologue)
by: Amiasha
White cloth fluttered delicately as the wind brushed through it, and ruffled black hair. The young woman brushed a stray lock from her face and shielded her eyes from the wind and twirling sand, gazing upwards solemnly.
The to-be-priestess Aishizu frowned as she watched the dark clouds gather and swirl and the windstorm pick up. "This is not a good omen..." She murmured to herself softly.
She turned around as she felt a hand on her shoulder, coming face-to-face with another boy her age. "Hello, Mahaado." The girl greeted.
The blond boy smiled at her, then looked up at the sky. "This is very strange... Almost like a sandstorm, but not." He commented. "We should consult the priests and our parents. I wonder what this means..."
Aishizu sighed. "Not something good, I can tell that. How are the queen and her child doing?"
"As far as I have heard, they're alright." Mahaado answered, nodding without looking away from the sky. "You think this has to do with them?"
"Most likely." Aishizu said. "I hope not, though... If it does not mean death, then it means something else unpleasant... The child's life will be very unhappy..."
"Let's not tell him that." Mahaado suggested, shielding himself with his cloak as the wind kicked sand up into his face. "He would become understandably discouraged."
Aishizu sighed. "I'm not a priestess yet. I'm not certain. We cannot be sure what this means without someone experienced."
"Right..." Mahaado conceded. He looked over at her. "Come, let's get back to the palace and send our parents out."
Aishizu nodded. "Yes..." She said, following the blond boy back into the palace, casting a glance at the sky a last time before she entered.
Not a good omen at all.
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A/N: I said it was short. *Sweatdrop* I don't expect long reviews. XD *Looks again* Damn, the notes were longer than the prologue. O.o But at least I'll be past my block and I should have a chapter in some relativly timely order. I hope.
