Revised
Chapter One
This story is going to be slow on updates. I currently have writer's block as well as too many stories in progress. I have too many ideas in my brain and not enough time.
Disclaimer: I don't own anything
(A/N)Let's assume that Harriet wasn't stung like Alby. Let's say that Minho's equivalent was stung, and took Alby's role. Rachel ran in and helped Sonya. Sonya, Newt's equivalent, didn't jump and took Minho's role at getting the stung girl back to their Glade(Jungle). Now Rachel is Thomas' equivalent and runs in. She survives and the stung girl, Mary, is given the serum.
The Chance
She had come up with him.
All she saw was darkness as she could hear the shallow breathing of another human. This was mixed with the sounds of metal moving.
She could only look at her unconscious partner before light blinded her.
She heard many whispers.
"It's a boy." seemed to be the most said.
The girl peeked from behind the boy to see a bunch of girls, "Hello?" she asked in an innocent tone.
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The girls looked at her with large eyes. "Awwww!" They squealed in unison. The girl shrunk back a little.
A dark skinned girl jumped in with them. They seemed to be in a metal box like thing.
"Hello, sweetie. I'm Harriet. Do you know your name?"
The girl thought about it. A name popped into her mind, "Elli."
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Harriet helped pull her out before another girl jumped in. She examined the boy. "Harriet, he's holding a note...He's the last one...ever." She read, her face revealing apprehension.
Harriet frowned, "let the nurses take care of him. We'll figure this out later. Rachel, you're in charge of the kid."
A girl with brown hair and kind blue eyes walked up to them. She was about to speak when a haunted voice stopped everything.
"Rachel." The boy had woken.
"Everything's about to change." The boy fainted again.
All the girls look at the brown haired girl, Rachel. They started whispering but Harriet signaled for the girl to lead Elli away.
The girl offered her hand, "I'll show you around. I'm Rachel."
Can anyone guess who Elli is named for?
Later gladers...
