Libby POV
Argh I fucking hate that Darren Miller. He thinks he is my life and soul and that I can't and won't replace him... Ok he's right about that part but that's just for now. Oh and by the way I'm Libby Fox. And Darren Miller was my boyfriend until that faithful night.
(No Ones POV) Flashback
"Hey Lib's?" Darren Miller shouted to his Girlfriend.
"Yeah, what? You still coming over tonight?"
"That's what I wanted to talk about. I can't make it. I gotta sort some things out at the car lot and its gunna take me AGES! But I promise I will come over tomorrow night and make it up to you."
Libby's face fell but acted like she didn't care. "Yeah that's ok. I mean you if it's to do with the car lot then I can't make you not do it."
Darren kissed her and ran off to the car lot.
Libby watched him run off and said to herself "Sort some things out my ass. I'm going to find out what you're up to Darren Miller"
Later that night...
"No she's not important to me. I mean I'm only going out with her so she knows what its like to be loved. But I promise I will dum---LIBBY!!"
Libby was standing in the door way with tears in her eyes. But those tears quickly went and were replaced but a hurt look in her eyes.
"Darren Miller! I hate you! I hope you and Blondie here have a happy life together!! And if you haven't guessed we are OVER!"
"NO LIBBY WAIT!! I LOVE YOU!!!"
"NO YOU DON'T DARREN YOU JUST SAID SO! YOU JUST TOLD HER YOU'RE ONLY DATING ME SO I KNOW WHAT ITS LIKE TO BE LOVED!"
"BUT----"
"NO! Look I'm going! Don't come after me!"
"I WON'T BUT YOU WONT BE ABLE TO REPLACE ME! NO ONE WILL LOVE YOU AND THEY WILL TRY AND DROWN YOU LIKE YOUR DAD DID!" fuck why did I just say that!"
End Flashback.
Libby's POV
He thinks I didn't here the comment about my dad but I did. And it hurt. He was the one I went to before I went off with my dad. Really I could blame him for not stopping me! Stupid Blondie! I knew Darren preferred skinner girls but I thought he just liked looking at them. Not actually having sex with them. I mean I haven't even had sex with him! ARGH who's that?
Darren's POV
WHY!! I just ruined the greatest thing in my life. Why didn't I realise that BEFORE I went and fucked that girl! One thing I know is that I love her and I AM going to tell her that! I'm going to tell her how sorry I am and see how it goes from there—when did I walk to her house? Oh well her it goes.
No-One POV
"Oh its you! What do you want Darren? And where's Blondie?" Libby said glaring at Darren.
"Beats me. I made her leave so I could think and when I was thinking I realised something that I should have realised a long time ago?"
"And what's that? That you're gay?" Libby said whilst laughing.
"No that I love you and I want to be with you!"
"You really mean that? Because if you do then I would say I love you too" Libby smiled and she and Darren slowly leaned in and they kissed like it was their first kiss.
"Ya know. Know ones in and I'm ready…" "You mean it? You're really ready?" Libby grinned. "Yup...So come on. I bet I'm better than Blondie.!"
"You will be babe you will be"
So this is my re-write of this
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