Mommy Dearest
By HamClover
11/23/03
Gee, I never really realized that for such a humorous person, I sure am good at writing drama genre fics! I just finished writing No Answer. It really didn't get too many reviews, but those who did read it said it was great, so If you like this fic I suggest reading No Answer too! I just finished reading a really great book called Cut. It's about this 15 year old named Callie who goes to Sea Pines, a place where they treat girls with mental disorders. Callie goes there because she cuts herself. Never too deep, and never enough to die, but enough to feel the pain, and she likes it. She is in this Group with a bunch of other troubled girls. I was addicted to this book and I read it in a few days. Cut also inspired this fic! I really suggest the book to anyone who thinks like me! Enjoy and PLLLLLEEEEEEAAASSSSSEEE send a review! Bye! Bye!
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Chapter One- Piano Peril
Maria leaned over, squinting at the ivory keys of the piano. She just couldn't play right this week! She tried taking a walk out to the park with her friend Laura and her cute dog Brandy, but that didn't work this time.
Maria banged her hands on the keys, making a loud, startling noise, that woke her purebred hamster Bijou up with quite a start.
Maria sighed when she noticed she had startled her hamster.
"I'm sorry Bijou," Maria sighed. "I just can't play the piano! I've tried everything.It just isn't working.."
Bijou set her head to one side and blinked. "But Maria! You look so sick! You should get some rest, yes?" Bijou tried telling Maria to take a break, but as always, Maria didn't even turn to her direction to listen to her advice. "Maria! Please!"
Maria didn't listen. But Bijou was right, Maria did look horrible. She was so pale, her hair was a mess, and she had bags under her eyes. But the most major factor was that she was as bony as a stick, which was not like her at all! Maria ate a healthy diet of tofu and practically every vegetable ever grown.
"Maria." Bijou moaned, giving up on yelling at her, it seemed shouting to a brick wall would be more efficient.
After Maria left to go to Peaceful Glen, a private school for girls, Bijou scurried out of her cage and up to the window, she heard someone calling her name.
"Bijou! Bijou! Are you there?"
Bijou recognized that the voice belonged to Mable, one of her friends who had only lived in this neighborhood for about a year. Someone else was with Mable, too.
"I am coming!" Bijou shouted, crawling up the window sill. Bijou blushed when she noticed the other ham tagging along with Mable was no other than Hamtaro.
"Hamha!" Hamtaro greeted, with his usual attitude.
"Bonjour," Bijou answered glumly.
Mable cocked her head to one side. "Heke? You seem upset. what's wrong?" She asked.
Bijou paused for a moment and turned towards Maria's piano. "Maria is not well, she cannot play the piano. She isn't acting like herself!" Bijou wanted to cry at the moment, if Hamtaro hadn't said something.
"That's not good, has she taken a walk?"
".many times,"
"What about painting a picture? That always makes me feel better." Mable suggested.
"No, she's tried practically everything, she's so, skinny."
Hamtaro and Mable don't say anything. Bijou leaps onto the branch. "It's okay.we can talk about it later, I would just like to go to the clubhouse."
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Yes, short chapter, I know..ohhh! But I hafta tell ya'll this! I had a horse show yesterday and in one class I came in 3rd place out of 6 and in my patterns class I came in 1st! Yay for me!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
Tootles! Oh and please send a review! It inspires me!
By HamClover
11/23/03
Gee, I never really realized that for such a humorous person, I sure am good at writing drama genre fics! I just finished writing No Answer. It really didn't get too many reviews, but those who did read it said it was great, so If you like this fic I suggest reading No Answer too! I just finished reading a really great book called Cut. It's about this 15 year old named Callie who goes to Sea Pines, a place where they treat girls with mental disorders. Callie goes there because she cuts herself. Never too deep, and never enough to die, but enough to feel the pain, and she likes it. She is in this Group with a bunch of other troubled girls. I was addicted to this book and I read it in a few days. Cut also inspired this fic! I really suggest the book to anyone who thinks like me! Enjoy and PLLLLLEEEEEEAAASSSSSEEE send a review! Bye! Bye!
~*~*~
Chapter One- Piano Peril
Maria leaned over, squinting at the ivory keys of the piano. She just couldn't play right this week! She tried taking a walk out to the park with her friend Laura and her cute dog Brandy, but that didn't work this time.
Maria banged her hands on the keys, making a loud, startling noise, that woke her purebred hamster Bijou up with quite a start.
Maria sighed when she noticed she had startled her hamster.
"I'm sorry Bijou," Maria sighed. "I just can't play the piano! I've tried everything.It just isn't working.."
Bijou set her head to one side and blinked. "But Maria! You look so sick! You should get some rest, yes?" Bijou tried telling Maria to take a break, but as always, Maria didn't even turn to her direction to listen to her advice. "Maria! Please!"
Maria didn't listen. But Bijou was right, Maria did look horrible. She was so pale, her hair was a mess, and she had bags under her eyes. But the most major factor was that she was as bony as a stick, which was not like her at all! Maria ate a healthy diet of tofu and practically every vegetable ever grown.
"Maria." Bijou moaned, giving up on yelling at her, it seemed shouting to a brick wall would be more efficient.
After Maria left to go to Peaceful Glen, a private school for girls, Bijou scurried out of her cage and up to the window, she heard someone calling her name.
"Bijou! Bijou! Are you there?"
Bijou recognized that the voice belonged to Mable, one of her friends who had only lived in this neighborhood for about a year. Someone else was with Mable, too.
"I am coming!" Bijou shouted, crawling up the window sill. Bijou blushed when she noticed the other ham tagging along with Mable was no other than Hamtaro.
"Hamha!" Hamtaro greeted, with his usual attitude.
"Bonjour," Bijou answered glumly.
Mable cocked her head to one side. "Heke? You seem upset. what's wrong?" She asked.
Bijou paused for a moment and turned towards Maria's piano. "Maria is not well, she cannot play the piano. She isn't acting like herself!" Bijou wanted to cry at the moment, if Hamtaro hadn't said something.
"That's not good, has she taken a walk?"
".many times,"
"What about painting a picture? That always makes me feel better." Mable suggested.
"No, she's tried practically everything, she's so, skinny."
Hamtaro and Mable don't say anything. Bijou leaps onto the branch. "It's okay.we can talk about it later, I would just like to go to the clubhouse."
~*~*~
Yes, short chapter, I know..ohhh! But I hafta tell ya'll this! I had a horse show yesterday and in one class I came in 3rd place out of 6 and in my patterns class I came in 1st! Yay for me!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
Tootles! Oh and please send a review! It inspires me!
