Hey guys!!!! Welcome to my first (and, depending on your opinions,possible last) fanfiction.I really wish to hear your comments.This one will be an crossover with One Piece.I need to point that this is also a "neglected by family" story , so if you don't like it than don't read it.p.s. Sorry if i make grammar mistakes i'm from Romania so yeahhhh.I don't own anything that will appear in this fanfic. Both anime and every element from any other series belong to their owner."why"-author note/ability/bijuu
"why"-thoughts
"why"-talking/narration
Deep in the forest that surround Konoha, an 8 year boy is laying on the ground.
Pain.
That was the only thing that Naruto felt.
His body was unable to move as he was surrounded by a pond of blood.
It happened again.Those damn peoples that his father swear to protect attacked him again, drived by their anger and ignorance.
He could only clench his bloody hand as hundreds of thoughts fill his head."Why can't they just leave me alone!!!" he screamed as his body got colder and colder.
He wanted to stop. He wish to have enogh power to make it stop.
You may ask why is he in such a situation. Well the answer is simple. He was the unlucky child of the Namikaze family.
8 years ago , on octobre 10 the Kyuubi no kitsune attacked the village and took thousands of lifes.To stop it the Yondaime Hokage sealed the almighty beast inside two of his newborn children. Those were Naruto's brother and sister. The yang half in Menma (i know, i'm not original at all) and the yin half in Narumi (what did i just said).
He didn't any of it's chakra , instead he was allways neglected over his simblings by everyone. Above all the villagers saw him as the reincarnation of Kyuubi because of his wiskers like marks on his cheeks.
As he rose on his feets , he sens something strange. Even if his body is full of wonds from the beating from the villagers, the pain started to fade.
Sudently, his head feeled like it was hit by a lightning.
Inside the mindscape]
Naruto found himself in a sewer like place, with a lot of water covering the floor. But the most shocking thing was the powerfull looking creature that was standing in front of him.
It was like a nightmare took a fizical form. It's sheer size was intimidating, easily towering over the bigest building he ever saw.
It's body had the construction of an wolf with ten long tails waving slowly behind. It was covered in silver colored fur and the claws were ready to rip any fool that dare to approch.
What scared and astonished Naruto the most were deadlly looking eyes. The eyeball was completly red with cocentinc rigs descending from the center.(Juubi's eye from Naruto)
Despite it's appearence, Naruto couldn't help but fell safe in the presence of the beast. He approch and extend his hand, touching the noze of the wolf that lowered it's head at his level.
"Hey" was the only smart reply that he could come with. The wolf appeared to amused by his childistic answer to it's presence.
"You are kind of stupid, aren't you ?" sayed the wolf still, with a boomig and feminin voice.
"WHAT THE-- I'M NOT STUPID!!!" said Naruto trying ( and failing) to defend himself in front of the mighty beast.
"Whatever make you feel better kid" said the wolf, suppressing it's laughter at the child outburst.
"Hey stop looking down on me." demande Naruto with a pout on his lips. That kind of pout that make adults bend at the will of the children in a heartbeat.
"Sure, sure little one " said the wolf , still trying to not burst out in laughter at the sight.
After a few moments of embarasment Naruto regain his calm and ask the wolf "Who are you and were are we ?"
"We are in your mind young one, in your mindscape to be mote specific. And I'm the great, powerfull, almight-"
"Will you end with the self glorification and tell me your name" intrerupted the boy with an upset tone.
"DON'T INTRERUP MY SPEECH ABOUT HOW GREAT I'AM " responded the wolf with rage " and you have the honor to be in the presence of the strongest bijuu, Juubi no bakemono, the queen of all demons." she finished with an big smile on her lips.
"And what do you want, why are you here?" said the child with a little bit of fear.
"I came with an proposal for you. How do you feel about leaving this place for as long as you want ?"
"What's the catch ? I know you will have something to win from this."
"Ohhhh, so you really are smarter than you appear. Alright you cought me, I do have something to win from your departure. You see, I know what you have been through and you have potential. And if you reach that potential to it's maximum capacity it will help me in a long run."
"How will you even help me to escape this place if your are in my mind ?"
"Don't underestimate my power human. I will teleport you on an island in the Grand Line."
"Grand...Line ?" ask the little boy, tilting his head in a cute and confuse way.
"Oh right , you don't know about the world you live. You see, it is larger than you think. The Grand Line is the most dangerous place on the whole planet. There you will have the chance to gain the power to live as you like. But in excenge you will have to come back to free me as well. Deal ?"
Naruto thinked for a moment and decided"Let's do it"
[Outside the mindscape]
Without any warning or pain his body covered by blinding light.
[On a nameless island.Grand Line]
He's wounds were gone and the blood was cleaned from his body.As he looked around, he found himself on a beach with an beautiful sea in front of him. Turning around he saw another forest, this one having a more tropical aspect.
He could only smile as the feeling of freedom filled his body.Walking around he found himself close to what seemed to be an military base with a large number of ships docked nearly.
As he approach some mans dressed in white uniforms, with matching caps that have the word " marine" on the front and strange metalic pipes (guns, but he doesn't know) saw him.
" Stop right there!" yelled a nameless solider (expect to hear that a lot, because there will plenty of interaction with soliders in future chapters)"What are you doing here? There shouln't be any villages on this island".
He wanted to answear but his body feeled heavy and fainted. The fatigue making itself know after the long night he had.
ANNNNNDDD DONE ! So everyone tell me what do you think in the coments.
To answear questions:
NO. Naruto will not be a jinchuuriki
YES.He will have a devil fruit (logia.leave me some origina l ideas)
And for the pairing I will bring Esdeath from Akame ga kill( and some others characters as his subordinates).
SEE YOU ALL LATER!!!
