Hello! I'm going to write a Game of Thrones AU about Jon Snow. In my story he would be the bastard of Ned Stark and Ashara Dayn. The only thing that troubles me is my lacking of english skills but I'm trying to make the best of it! So don't be too strict with my grammar :) -- Here comes a demo

Jon was tired. The whole day he was fighting in the yard. He always liked to fight with the sword, it is the only thing where he is better than Robb and Theon. The people say he fights like a professional knight and it would be the bastard-blood in him which makes him better in fighting than the most people. That thought disturbs Jon, he couldn't understand these people.

Wasn't it a good sign when a 15year old boy could beat the master of arms?

In generall Jon didn't get much attention for his fighting or is riding. Of course not, he is the "Bastard of Winterfell", the only stain on Ned Starks honor, the shame of the North.

He could be happy that he has some family-members who treats him nearly as a beloved lad. Robb and Arya has always treated him as a fully-fledged brother. Neither did Bran nor Rickon something cruel against him. Sansa, his thirteen year old sister ignores him nearly like Lady Stark. Lady Stark the wife of his father hates him with all her heart. He knew he has to move away soon, perhaps to his uncle Brandon at the night's watch. The only place in Westeros were a bastard could achieve some honor…

Suddenly a knock disturbs him in his thoughts. It is Jory, a knight of Winterfell.

„Your father wants to speak with you, Jon. I shall bring you to his solar." …

What could Ned tell his bastard? Something about his mother? Constructive Critizism is welcome!