I am still working on Afterlife but I came up with this and I just want to know if I should continue it? What do you guys think?


Comatose

It started of as a normal job. Sam had seen an article in a local newspaper about and abandoned warehouse where people were getting hurt. Anyone who went in to the warehouse ended up in a mysterious coma. Sam suspected that something Supernatural was going on so he and Dean had to check it out. Despite Sam's pleas Dean had insisted on the going to check out the warehouse late at night when it was dark. Sam had tried to tell him that it'd be safer for them to go during the day so that they could get an idea of what was happening. But Dean thought that they'd be better off going at night. Sam was afraid that something would go wrong and that one of them would end up in a coma but he didn't say anything to Dean. They reached the warehouse shortly after midnight. It was a big building that was literally in the middle of nowhere. It was surrounded by a lot of trees that made the area seem even darker than it was. There were no streetlights due to the fact that it was such a secluded place and only source of light came from the moon. As Dean turned of the engine a cold wind swept through the air and it was almost as if something was out there. Watching and waiting until it was able to strike out.

Sam looked on as Dean walked over to the trunk and started to pull out various weapons; he still wasn't sure about this. He didn't know how to explain this but it was almost as if he could sense that something bad would happen.

"So anyone who goes in there always ends up unconscious?" Dean asked as he shut the trunk. Sam nodded and said,

"Look Dean, maybe we should wait until it's light" Dean looked up at Sam and saw the look of panic on his face. Sam was scared, scared that one of them would end up hurt as well. And the truth was, Dean was scared too, but they had to figure out what was going on. After all it was their job. Dean sighed,

"Look, how about one of us goes in and the other stays out here that way if there's any trouble…" he trailed off quietly but he knew that Sam had understood what he'd said. Sam glanced at the warehouse; he still didn't like the idea of either of them going in there. He couldn't bear the thought of Dean getting hurt while he stood by the car and waited. One look at Dean told him that his brother was thinking the same thing.

"I'll go" they said in unison. They looked at each other, both of them trying to conceal how scared they really were.

"I'll go" Dean said firmly and Sam knew that Dean wasn't going to change his mind. There was no way that Dean was going to let Sam in there on his own, not when there was a chance that he might get hurt. He turned and he started to walk down the pathway that led to the entrance.

"Dean" Sam called softly. Dean stopped and he turned to look at Sam; all traces of panic had vanished from his face and he now looked determined and brave like he usually did when they were hunting.

"Sam, I'll be okay…I'll call if I find anything" he said.

"Just be careful, Dean" Sam replied.

"Come on Sam, when have ever not been careful?" Dean said in a light voice. Sam smiled and shook his head. Dean grinned at his brother and then he continued to walk down the path. As he watched the retreating figure of his brother only one thought crossed his mind. I hope you're okay.