Dear Readers,
Ok guys! Thanks for clicking on my very first Fan Fiction!
Can you please review and tell me if I could improve this story?
Thanks! Hope you enjoy it.
BTW. For those of you who don't live in the same country as me, I'm Australian so it might look like I update at weird times, And for those of you who have a different spelling system to us Aussies, just ignore those words that might look like they're spelt wrong.
Max's POV
I can't believe Nudge made me agree to coming to New York… AGAIN! I guess it makes sense because I was outnumbered by the flock. Even Fang agreed to go. He's usually the one that backs me up!
Anyway, there we were, in a random mini-mart in New York, when I spotted something. Actually, it wasn't me who realised it. Iggy said he smelt DOG! We all thought "ERASERS!" instantly.
Gazzy was scratching his head in confusing; Angel was annoyed at Gazzy's confusion (urgh! Angel! Get over yourself!), Iggy was nervously looking everywhere like a madman (Iggy's note: Hey! It's hard being blind!), and Fang and I were full-on ready for whatever the smell was. Eraser or not, all our adrenalines were rushing. No-one knew where this dog-smell was coming from.
"I've got this under control!" said Iggy determined to find the mysterious smelling thing/being. Iggy began sniffing the air like a dog. There were probably people looking at him weirdly, and Iggy probably knew that, but no-one seemed to care because nothing else mattered than keeping each other safe at that moment.
As we got closer to the "dog", we all started to smell it and something else. This may sound weird- wait! Scratch that! This sounds extremely weird but we all smelt death!
Around the corner, there it was. An eraser was fighting some giant, black shadow. "Get back!" The eraser growled. "The blood is poisonous!" I thought "Wait a second! Erasers don't protect us!" I started to realise that this what-we-thought-was-an-eraser eraser wasn't actually an eraser. It was in full wolf mode and it could gralk! (That's growl and talk together! Get it! Ha-ha heh he… fine! Forget it!)
The wolf winced as it was stuck by the shadow and thrown over our heads. We all watched in slow-motion horror as the wolf hit the ground. I was actually half expecting it to get up and launch itself at the shadow again but it didn't. It just lay there on the ground and the shadow was advancing on me faster than you could imagine.
"Max!" Someone shouted. I didn't have time to figure out who it was because the shadow was already towering over me and was baring its teeth at me. I had sweat beads on my forehead because thought that might've been my last. It started whispering to me in a foreign language –which, by the way, really creeped me out- as it recoiled getting ready to strike. The shadow moved at an incredible speed. I squeezed my eyes shut and...
I'll try to update once a week or so. Maybe Friday.
Thanks again for reading! It would mean a lot to me if you would review, just so that I know if anyone is actually reading this story!
Also, the author who inspired me to start writing FanFiction is the author of Secrets and Lies, desperatelyobvious!
Cya! Kaitlin :)
