please no fire or hate because sora bulkhead i'm gettin alittle tired of it so please atleast end your reveiw with something positive,

first chapter of jurassic star wars, i've been thinking of this since i woke up and i will complete it

FOUND

third person pov.

obi wan the feathered raptor was walking down a dirt path and heard something, he heard whimpering and it sounded like a very young raptor but the whimpers weren't out of sadness they were painful sqeaks every once in a while he came up closer to hear the raptor whimpering something so he poked his head through the bush to see a tan feathered raptor that looked to be three years old nudging it's parents who's necks were broken and they had blood all over their bodies

the raptor would nudge them often

mommy, daddy?

and he then noticed it the small raptor looked that it hadn't eaten in a week or two, you could see its ribs poking out from under the feathers and a large gash on the right side that was bleeding and many other scratches

he stepped out from behind the bush to see the that the raptor had face markings that were white

he nudged the three year old raptor and saw that it was scarred when he tried to nudge it again it stood up and he saw that its foot was twisted in a weird angle almost like it had been bitten and thrashed around

it was about to fall and he caught it with his nose and sat it down

he grabbed it's loose flap of skin under the feathers and picked it up walking back into the open after 20 minutes of walking and running he finaly reached the cave and went inside where he and another raptor were living, they chose to not have seprate territories so they live in the same cave with brush, bushes and large rocks along with some pebbles and small rocks surrounding the cave inside the cave the ground was hard dirt and a ledge

he walked inside to see another raptor sleeping and when obi wan put the raptor down it quickley hobbled over to a corner in the cave that had part of the top of the cave gone there were storm clouds outside and it started to rain a little and it did not notice

the other raptor woke up and snarled loudly at the small raptor, he aproched it snarling and hissing and the small raptor bolted for the other, darker corner and cowered in fear whimpering and squeaking in pain with it's eye lids clenched together fearfuly while it's small body was shaking violently

this made the raptor that was snarling and hissing at it stop for a minute but then keep moving twords it snarling the other raptor that found the small raptor finaly stepped in

anakin stop your'e scarring it

the coal brown fearhered raptor turned around to face the pale feathered raptor that was called obi wan and hissed

it's an intruder and im ridding us of it by getting rid of it myself even if i have to kill it

no anakin your'e not going to kill it because i just rescued it

what

i'll tell you later just move over

anakin's pov.

i stepped aside letting obi wan aproach the small raptor but it quickly hobbled away from him running into my foot and when it looked up at my face it shreiked in fear it tried to get away and i lightly caught it by the tail, it scratched at my nose until i let go and walked off i sat down in my usual spot, my usual spot is the ledge, i could already feel it, it was going to be a cold night

i woke up to an ice cold breeze and noticed obi wan asleep across from me i felt something warm against my side and i saw that the three year old raptor had jumped over my leg and curled up in my feathers. i quickley got up and slapped it away with my tail, it hit the wall and it curled up in a corner just when another ice cold breeze ripped through the cave and the raptor shivered violently looking hurt emotionaly and physicaly where the large gash on it's side was the featheres had fallen off

i went back to sleep and woke up in the morning to see the small raptor sleeping on my side feathers, i slapped it away again more violently this time and i saw that it had landed on it's broken foot whimpering in pain nonstop because it was sitting on it's foot i felt a little bad but not enough to regret my decision until it started to whimper

mommy. daddy?

that made me a little sad assuming that it's parents are probably dead, it started to whimper louder

mommy

daddy

poor three year old, i shrugged off those thoughts and saw that obi wan had carved a message in the dirt

anakin i left a few fish for you and the raptor, i would apreiciate if you fed her

i picked up a fish with my teeth and threw it at her and it hit her in the face, i started eating mine and i heard soft struggling, i looked over to the raptor to see her struggling to get the skin off the fish she finaly gave up and curled up in a ball being carful of her broken foot

i tilted my head and went over to the fish and ripped the skin off i then lightly nudged her head twords the meat and she rubbed her face on my nose thoughtfuly but i pushed it away violently and stormed off back to my fish

after we had eaten i was cleaning my claws when i saw out of the corner of my eye that she was aproching my side again and i snarled at her, she whimpered loudly

is there something wrong with me, why you hate me so much

her breath caught and she let out a shaky breath folowed by tears forming in her eyes as she limped off

i looked at her sadly then shrugged it off as i thought to myself

i don't need freinds

i looked over to see her in a corner silently letting tears go down her face and into her feathers and a small whimper every once in a while