Ch.1
The New Ham Ham
My 1st chapter of my 1st fanfic is up! Please R&R, but please no flames!
My title sux…
"I better step on it!" thought Hamtaro as he ran with his backpack in tow. All the Ham Hams were going on a picnic today in the park. "Almost there! Just gotta go 'round this tree" thought Hamtaro. He didn't get to finish that thought. As he rounded the tree, he collided with another hamster. The two fell in a raucous heap.
"Ow… what hit me?" as he sat up and rubbed his head with a paw. The other ham had already gotten up and rushed over to Hamtaro's aid.
"Omigosh! I-I'm so sorry! It's my fault for not watching where I'm going where I was going! Are you okay?"
"Y-yeah, I'm alright" answered Hamtaro as he grabbed the hamster's outstretched paw. The hamster had white fur with some spiky red head fur. He could see by the straps on his shoulders that he was also carrying a backpack with him.
"Sorry that I bothered you" the hamster said apologetically as he turned to dash off.
"Wait! Hold on a second!" shouted Hamtaro.The hamster stopped dead in his tracks and turned back around.
"I'm Hamtaro! What's you name?"
"I-I'm Kai"
"I don't think I've seen you around here before…"
"My owner just moved here. Today's the first time I've been outside the house to explore. I don't really know anyone either"
Hamtaro couldn't help but feel sad for Kai. Here he was in a new place with no friends. No wonder he was so shy.
"Well, now you know me, and their's a bunch of friends at the clubhouse I could introduce you to!"
"Um, I don't know…"
But Hamtaro wasn't about to take no for an answer. He grabbed Kai's paw and led him to the direction of the clubhouse.
"Come on! The clubhouse is right over here!"
A couple minutes later, Hamtaro and Kai walked though the door of the clubhouse and walked inside. Most of the ham hams were already their either chatting amongst themselves or readying their backpacks.
"Hi everyone, sorry I'm late."
"That's okay" said Boss as he zipped up one of the zippers on his backpack. "At least you're not as late as Pashmina or Penelope. We're still waiting on them.
Boss and the rest of the ham hams had walked over to Hamtaro and Kai, all wondering who the new ham was. Kai couldn't help but to feel nervous. There were so many hamster in the room that he didn't know.
"Who've you got their?" asked Panda.
"Oh yeah! This is Kai. I ran into him on the way here…literally!" All the ham hams surrounded the shy ham, bombarding him with greetings and introductions.
"Bonjour! I'm Bijou!
"Hi! My name's Oxnard!
"Like, hi! I'm Sandy!
"And I'm her twin brother, Stan!"
"Greetings. I'm Maxwell!"
"Howdy! I'm Howdy! And that ugly knuckle head is Dexter.
"Who are you calling an ugly knuckle head?"
"I'm Panda!"
"And I'm Cappy!"
"Hey there!" They call me Boss, 'cause I'm the boss around here. The hamster sleeping over there in the corner is Snoozer. You can probably figure out why we call him that.
"It's nice to meet you all"
"Whatcha got in the backpack?" asked Howdy.
"Oh, just my rollerblades" said Kai as he took them out of his backpack. The ham hams saw that Kai also had horizontal tiger stripes on his back just like Sandy and Stan, except his were red and went in a diagonal pattern from the back of his left ear to his lower right back.
"Those don't look anything like the ones my owner Kana has" said Oxnard. "Her's have a brake in the back of one of them and they don't have those things on the sides."
"Can you do any tricks on them?" asked Stan.
"Sure, lots of 'em!" exclaimed Kai.
"Prove it!" said Stan.
"Stan, stop being a jerk and leave him alone" ordered Sandy.
"That's okay Sandy" said Kai. "I'd be happy to prove it to him". Kai ran up to the second level of the clubhouse and quickly changed into his black and white skates.
"Has anyone noticed how much more confident he got when started talking about his rollerblades?" asked Maxwell. The ham hams nodded in agreement.
"I'm surprised he can skate on zee carpeting" aid Bijou.
"Let's see if I can do a fakie 720 to the lower level" shouted Kai.
"Hey Maxwell, what's that?" asked Sandy.
"Um, I'm not really sure" answered Maxwell.
"It's when he skates backwards and spins two times around" answered Stan. "There's no way he's going for it." Just as the words left his mouth, Kai launched himself into the air and began his rotation. Unfortunately, he only completed 1 and three fourths of the rotation when his skates hit the ground, casing him to go into a rolling fall. "Oops! Let me try that again." said Kai as he headed back up to the second level.
"That looked like it hurt" commented Hamtaro.
"Whoa, I didn't think he was actually gonna go for it" said Stan.
The ham hams held their breath as Kai again launched himself into the air. He completed the two spins this time, but he had too much force going backwards, causing him to slam his head back pretty hard. All the ham hams rushed to his aid, but were surprised to see him up already. "I'm so close, and three's the charm" he said as he skated off.
"Wait! Wouldn't zou like zome ice for your head?" asked Bijou. But he was already on the second level and ready to give it a go again.
"Yo, Kai, It's cool, you proved yourself" shouted Stan. But it was too late, Kai went off the second level and went into his spins. He hit the ground, landing perfectly. The ham hams cheered, thankful that he didn't hurt himself, but mostly for the awesome trick.
"Wow! That was great!" The ham hams turned to see Pashmina and Penelope clapping at Kai's performance. They apparently snuck in when the ham hams had their eyes on Kai. Kai blushed greatly upon noticing the pink scarf wearing hamster. His eyes gazed into hers a gazed he couldn't break, not even to notice the chair behind him and that he was still going on his rollerblades. He ran right into it, falling onto it in a messy heap. Again, the ham hams went over to Kai to check up on him. Pashmina was the first to reach him.
"Oh my goodness! Are you okay?" she asked. Again, Kai couldn't help but blush greatly as gazed deep into her eyes.
"Uh, yeah" he said in a shy voice. "I-I gonna take my skates off now." He quickly skated over to his backpack. Sandy pulled Bijou aside.
"Hey, did you, like, see Kai's face when he saw Pashmina?"
"Looks like Howdy, Dexter, and Stan will have more competition, no?"
Yay! I finished my 1st fanfic's 1st chapter! (Does a quick victory dance) Please R&R. No flames, the story will get better. I'll try getting up ch.2 soon.
