hey guys, so, I've decided im going to make a serious thor fan fiction. it took me days to figure out what im going to do and now I do, so, yeah...ummmm I like so you'll like it (hopefully) and that means you'll review (hopefully)... thanks and enjoy!
WARNING: this story WILL change rating later on in the chapters to M! DID YOU HEAR ME! RATING M!
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Ana glided gracefully through the manor as a young women of her standing should. Her long dark brown hair was a family trait and she wore hers in a diagonal French braid, and was quickly taking off as a fashion for the young women of the realm; hanging over her left shoulder and complementing her pale face. Her fringe was pinned back with loose tendrils which framed her face. Today was her birthday. She was looking forward to the feast being held in her honor. maids fluttered around her like moths to a flame, curtsying and wishing her a pleasant birthday, occasionally pulling a pin from their sleeves and fixing a loose wave of hair. She only hesitated by the door to check her reflection in a nearby mirror, straightening down her long royal blue gold lined sleeves, which dragged along the floor behind her. The gold embroidery on her dress caught in the light of a nearby candle and shone as did the delicate metalwork of her gold choker. She put a gentle smile on her lips and nodded to the porters who opened the mahogany doors. She stepped out onto the balcony, and the cheering from their subjects, loud and overpowering, cut through the air like a knife. She waved to them before taking the staircase down to where the uncovered larger platform was waiting, filled with family and dignitaries from local towns.
She would receive many gifts this night; but the one she most looked forward to was her parents decision as to whom she would wed, a tradition passed down through her family since the beginning of records. on their 24th birthday they would be given their betrothed's name hidden from them since birth. it was something she greatly anticipated, and greatly feared.
The meal was 12 courses long, each small and intricately crafted. the gifts were opened, many fine swords and daggers, bows and satchels. dresses and shoes to last her at least the coming year, both light dresses and heavy dresses with different pieces crossing over; perfect for a princess. she received beautiful saddles for her horses, and looked forward to riding with them.
Finally the time came; her father stood at the head of the room, her mother on his arm; both with hair of the darkest brown. His voice rang true through the room, which was deadly silent. "As you all know, it is in our traditions that when a child of the manor turns 24, they shall be told of their betrothed. Our wonderful daughter is lucky to have such a well connected mother in this aspect."
The room tittered with laughter, and her mother smiled down at those she commanded. Her father continued "So, it is with great pleasure that we announce the conjoining of two families through the union of our daughter Ana and her fiancé Thor Odinson!"
The room was silent. then burst into cheers, all shocked yet ecstatic to celebrate their lord and ladies family with that of royal blood. Ana was dumbfounded as she chatted away about her husband to be. Ruling in vanaheim they hadn't yet seen the crowned city nor met the crowned princes. But knew of their wit, intelligence, and regal countenance. they were gods among men, and they had all heard of how thor was the greater of the two; with shockingly good looks and a charismatic attitude. Her family would greatly benefit from their union, and she would rule...she would be a queen. the idea thrilled her and frightened her equally.
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Today was the day. The day she was to go to asgard and meet the crowned princes. If she said she wasn't nervous she would be lying, she couldn't even sleep because of it. What if she made a fool of herself? trips on her dress or says the wrong thing? a million questions were zooming through her mind as she made her way towards the entrance. The guards of her castle opened the large mahogany door revealing crowds of people on either side of the isle. Her mother and father waited at the end locked arm and arm. Ana gulped and forced her feet to move and softly padded down the stairs. When her feet hit the grass her heart rate increased as she made her way down the isle. All eyes were on her as she approached her mother and father with 'confidence'. She stopped in front of them and the servant behind her set a suitcase down and backed away. Her mother and father wore their finest cloths and looked at Ana with joy and proudness. Her mother rushed towards her and they both embrace each other in a warm hug then pulls away, her father does the same. Ana grabs her leather suitcase and walks past her parents, stopping 10 feet away from them. she looks up at the blue sky and takes in a shaky breath "Good heimdell, this is princess Ana valasquia of vanaheim, I seek entrance into asgard." she said towards the sky. Seconds pass, then dark clouds form above her and start to twist down like a funnel. A beam of light shoots out of it and lands straight on top of Ana. Her body was pulled up then she felt like she was flying. Different colors flied past her as she zoomed towards the sky.
All of a sudden everything disappeared and she felt ground again. She looked around to find herself in a gold, dome-like structure with intricate designs. she looked forward and saw a dark skinned man wearing golden armor with orange-gold eyes walk up to her and kneel. "Princess Ana, it is an honor to be in your presence." his voice was REALLY deep. he got up and gave a ghost of a smile.
"Welcome to asgard."
so that was the end of chapter 1, I know it was rather short but the second one will be longer, I promise! please bear with me guys! it will speed up soon, please review! thank you!
