Hey this is my first fanfiction so I hope it's good but if you guys don't think it's that great please give me tips on how to make my story better thanks 

A dark figure of a male tauren was poised on the zeppelin leading to Borean Tundra. The only noticeable thing about him was the sword he was carrying, twice his size.

A goblin on the zeppelin took a look at him and the tauren stared right back at him. The goblin shuddered thinking to himself "Most terrifying tauren I've ever seen, and that sword....looks like a Death Knight's but seems too large for fighting. Gives me the chills." The goblin looks at the tauren again "So what's your name?" The tauren doesn't lift his head "Torim..." The goblin chuckles "What's your full name?" Torim gives the goblin a deadly look but hangs his head down again and sighs "I'm not a tauren; I gave that up a long time ago..." The goblin looks away a little embarrassed "Hey are you over compensating for something?" The goblin points at the sword and laughs. Torim gets up and grabs the goblin by the neck "Think your funny you irritating goblin." Torim hears growling behind him as he turns around to see a troll petting a lion while holding a gun pointed at Torim "Put the goblin down mon, he's just havin a little fun with ya." Torim drops the goblin and turns to face the troll hunter while the goblin gasps for air. "Don't tell me what to do you animal loving bastard." Torim grabs his sword ready to pull it out. The troll gets up and shakes his head. "Ha-ha I'm not lookin for a fight mon but if you want one" The troll cocks his gun and the lion prepares to pounce "I'll sure as hell give ya one." Torim chuckles "What's your name?" The troll smiles "Name's Cu'tak, my lion's name is Pukek nice to meet ya" Torim takes out his sword and quickly takes a shot for Cu'tak's head but Cu'tak blocks it with his gun "Danmit mon cheap attacks ain't gonna win ya the fight!" Cu'tak aims his gun at Torim's hand and fires. Torim dodges the bullet and takes a large swing at Cu'tak while Cu'tak goes for a stab with his gun. The goblin gets up and shakes his head almost dying from Torims vice like grip around his neck. "What happened....?" The goblin shakes his head and notices where the zeppelin was "We've landed at Borean Tundra! Welcome to Warsong Hold!" Torim hears the goblins call and stops, so does Cu'tak. Torim says "Guess we're here finally. Hey you with anybody?" Cu'tak shakes his head "No mon just me and Pukek." "You want to come with me?" Cu'tak smiles "Ya mon, wouldn't mind bein around someone else than an animal." Torim shakes his head and sighs "Ever been to Northrend?" Cu'tak looks at Torim confused "No mon why?" Torim gives an evil smile "Heh you're in for one hell of a ride" Torim and Cu'tak step off the zeppelin into Warsong Hold.

That's the end of chapter one hope you enjoyed this and I'll be sure to make chapters weekly if you guys like this story