I'm not sure why I feel the need to write a story like this, I was simply awake at 11 contemplating my existence (oh and you haven't) when the idea to make this story flew into my head. It sounded so cool (to me at least) that I just had to write it.
This is going to be a merdanny story as I found it fascinating how these stories always seemed to work but to make mine work I'm gonna make a few changes. Don't worry I'll make sure the characters are all the same but it is more or less the setting, amity park will be more like an archipelago mixed with a floating city.
But mostly I will not be including Vlad as the main villain as I feel he had been done to death with that role, as to who will fill his spot you'll just have to wait and see.
Chapter one
The afternoon sun shined dully as Danny Fenton and Tucker Foley loused about at the nasty burger, it seemed like an ordinary fast food establishment except for the fact it was floating in the middle of a bay that most teenagers gathered around. This was because it was one of the few places in Amity park that served non-fish related meat.
Danny gazed over at his surroundings, the city of amity park was quite a unique one as not many places in America would have a town literally on the water, but one Flood had the mayor come up with an idea so crazy it might just work.
And it did Amity park was now an extreme tourist destination as it became the floating city that had the small town become a city with skyscrapers cemented firmly into the ground and suburban houses either on mini-islands or floating on the water chained to the floor.
This isn't to say Amity Park was completely on the water the city had three main bodies of land, one held a school, Mall, Waterpark, sporting field, arcade, cinema and various other establishments earning it the nickname tourist island.
Another was the centre of business with the stock exchange, power control, water treatment and environmental protection centres making it the work island. Finally, there was the smallest island which held a simple neighbourhood and beach with luscious green forests and brilliant corals. Amity park had become a peaceful town with nothing but the water cutting it off from the mainland.
As such vehicles changed from cars and motorbikes to boats and Jet Skis. Everything was different right down to the food which was purely fish based, honestly a lot of people would say the people of amity park where as different as the Amish.
"Yo, Earth to Danny you appear to be drifting over." Danny was snapped out of his trance thanks to Tucker.
"Sorry, Tuck what where you saying?" Tucker frowned.
"I was just talking about how I could turn my PDA into a GPS simply by…" Danny started to daydream again getting on Tucker's nerves. "Danny! Come on man you need to stop doing that."
"Well can we at least talk about something we're both interested in, no offence tuck but your PDA's abilities don't interest me in the slightest." Tucker just huffed. He was an average geek but his traits made him unique he had brown skin, dreadlocks because he heard somewhere women like that hairstyle, Green eyes and was always wearing a yellow short sleeve shirt, green board shorts, brown flip flops, glasses and a red beret with a backpack for his technology.
"Well I guess we could talk about the field trip happening tomorrow I mean anything interesting happening there we probably gonna have to look for ourselves," Tucker exclaimed putting his PDA away, Danny just stretched lying back. Like Tucker, Danny opted for a more casual look he had pale skin, messy black hair, baby blue eyes as for his attire he wore a white T-shirt with a red circle in the middle, long jeans and red sneakers with a drainage system to get rid of unwanted water.
"Yeah sure, what is the organisation where going to again?" Danny asked scratching his head.
Tucker pulled out his laptop and started typing. "The GIW, this organisation is supposedly a military branch and was at one time a special force." Danny just rolled his eyes.
"Greeeeat, like I don't see enough weapons I may as well skip this and listen to my dad blather on about his latest invention." Danny sighed taking a bite out of his burger.
"Oh come on Danny I don't wanna go there by myself I need my wingman to set up a stage for my chance with the ladies." 'Of course' Danny thought. Just then tucker found something interesting. "Hey get this apparently the company is on its last legs."
"What do you mean?"
"It says here that the GIW is responsible for multiple complaints about property damage, blackmailing and even theft of inventions, and that's just the public annoyance. They also being a military branch are meant to show some form of results over a year or so but constantly fail to capture even the simplest threats, waste the government's money on large expensive weapons that later get destroyed and now are no longer consider top secret as they've switched to hunting down…" He paused as if he miss read something.
"Hunting down what?"
"Mythical creatures." We paused for a moment but failed to keep ourselves contained and started laughing hysterically. "Oh my I guess we're in greater danger than we thought if the government allowed this."
"Honestly I thought there name sounded stupid but this just takes it to a new level. I mean guys in white come on a ten-year-old can come up with something better." Taking a few breaths they finally calmed down.
"Ok, so we're going to go to an agency a 'government' agency that hunts mythical creatures?"
"Yeah, the note we're given says that we were going to look at their history and how a military branch is made but I'm confused as to why we would go here instead of….you know a museum or something. And you can't laugh too hard your parents believe in Mythical creatures too." The smile was gone from Danny's face the moment he finished.
"Yeah, I suppose that would make me gullible." Tucker realised his mistake and tried to make up for it.
"Hey you know I wouldn't make fun of you because of that right man." Danny sighed and just nodded. Tucker looked over his shoulder as a group of girls just entered. "Hey dude check out the babes that just entered." Looked up to see some pretty girls come into the store and snorted.
"Tuck do you really think you have a chance." He said with a smirk.
"While there is a group no, but one separates and I may just get a catch." He said with a smile, Danny laughed while rubbing his head as he knew nothing could stop Tuck from trying to get a girl. "Come on Danny, look there from outta town so they don't know about my rep, which means they won't turn tail and run, plus if one girl separates it'll give me a chance to get close before her friends point out any flaws which are hard to come across mind you," he said deeping his voice. Danny just facepalmed.
"Alright, fine one is leaving now, just don't give a cheesy pickup line you know everyone groans when you do." He said in a deadpanned voice, but really he wanted him to succeed as he knew Tucker well enough to know that if he wasn't talking about meat or technology he was a very caring person.
"Very well, I'm gonna get a soda." He winked before walking over. Danny couldn't hear what he was saying but it actually looked like he was getting somewhere, however, any chance he had was destroyed the moment a very notorious figure came by.
"Hey, Foley what's a loser like you doing here." Was the comment made but the well known Dash Baxter resident bully of Casper high, complete meathead and all around jerk as Danny prefered.
"This is a public place I'm allowed to be here." He complained a little nervous.
"Oh yeah well why do you be over with your loser boyfriend and stop bothering the hotties."
"I'm not bother…" At this point, Dash shoved tucker down on the floor and Danny ran over to his side.
"Perhaps you don't understand foley when I tell you to do something you do it, got it." Tucker just grunted before walking away ignoring the laughter of the jocks.
The moment we left Tucker growled. "My god he's a jerk, the one time when a girl doesn't instantly walk away and he has to be there to ruin it for me." Danny nodded in understanding. "I mean why just because I'm not six feet tall and don't play any sports, why does this make it alright for bullying. Like he can't even swim fast enough because he's made of bricks, and thinks like one too."
"Look let's not let this get us down, we'll have plenty of opportunities in the future, how about we play doomed tonight you've been talking non-stop about level twenty six maybe we can do it together?" Danny asked making Tucker sigh and submit to the request.
"Yeah ok thanks man, I'll see ya tomorrow." We stepped down to the water where we found our jetboards, they're kinda like electric scooters only a bit more expensive but they were just as fast. Placing his feet firmly on the board Danny grabbed his rubber handle/controller and took off.
He passed by tinies, yachts even speedboats on his way home. It wasn't on one of the islands but in the water like some houses, he liked his house because it seemed to be close to everything that and it was never in the middle of loud events or had strong traffic so it was nice and peaceful.
One other thing he liked about his house is that he couldn't get lost because of it, one thing he hated about his house though was that he couldn't get lost because of it. You see his parents were inventors though they didn't have a constant success they did invent a type of fabric that was easy to make and made any type of clothing, technology or book waterproof and this brought in a hefty amount of funding.
Enough for his parents to install what they call an ops centre on top of the house causing a slight panic as it looked like a saucer had landed on top of the house. This made his parents seem crazy but it didn't help that his parents we're inventing weapons to combat creatures that didn't even exist. You guessed it Mythical creatures adding to Danny's embarrassment.
Arriving at his front door the moment he grabbed the doorknob he felt a distinct vibration tremor through the building making him sigh. "Another failed experiment explodes." Opening the door he went into the lounge room waiting for his parents to emerge from the basement, seeing the door open he was met with a common but uncomfortable sight.
A figure stood around six eight and filled up the door frame wearing what was once an orange jumpsuit as it had been burnt by what Danny assumed the most recent explosion. The figure removed his cap and goggles dusting his face off to reveal black and white hair, blue eyes and the bright grin that was the trademark smile of Jack Fenton.
"Danny boy good to see ya home! How was your day?" His voice boomed with enthusiasm aided by his bright smile.
"Clearly not as exciting as yours." Jack just laughed.
"Ah, son you kill me, speaking of which I discovered that the engines on the Fenton sub-locator are better suited for water pressure below five thousand PSI good thing I was behind a glass shield or I might have been out of it."
'He's still working on that? A submarine, why do we need a submarine anyway?' Danny thought.
"Why do we need a submarine you ask?"
"I didn't."
"Well, I'll tell you why." He said grabbing Danny and placing him on the couch. "It all started during my college days what started as a simple side elective quickly became my life obsession." 'Here we go.' "While working with Mads and my good buddy Vladdy we started an experiment on unusual weather, we thought it would just be another assignment until it happened." Danny rolled his eyes at his fathers attempt to be dramatic. "A creature we've never seen emerged from the depths, she was gigantic and terrifying with her octopus-like legs and a humanlike body. She destroyed our boat and drowned Vlad in the chaos we found his body washed up on shore a few days later, we still mourn him to this day."
Danny always heard about Vlad how he was his Dads best friend and all but never really cared enough to know him. "Right so dad I'm going to the GIW facility tomorrow…"
"Who are they?"
"A government agency that hunts Mythical creatures."
"Hah! Solely for hunting Mythical creatures that's no way to make a living you'd have to be some sort of looney to commit your life to that." Danny raised an eyebrow. 'You mean like yourself.'
"But since Vlad's death, your mother and I have never once stopped our search for that beast because when we find it we'll make it pay." He said punching his palm.
"Jack honey are you reminiscing about the past again." A feminine voice asked.
"What about the past?" Jack asked clearly confused. Danny lost interest and headed to the kitchen where he found his mother. She was wearing a similar suit to his dad only it was blue and she had a body that wasn't the size of a house. She had brown hair and most unique was her purple eyes which Danny has yet to see another pair similar.
"Never mind, I'll start dinner soon but I need to ask Danny about his field trip tomorrow."
"Sure Mum what do you wanna know?"
"Well, sweety I just want to know if you'll be visiting anywhere dangerous. Because I don't want you in harm's way if we're not there." Danny tried his best at a smiled, despite their reputation as loons and mad scientist they were still overprotective.
"No mum we're just gonna go and look at some memorials or historical events not sure what we're going to get out of it though." She just smiled at him.
"Well dinner won't be ready for some time so why don't you do your homework?"
"Didn't get any today, speaking of work…." He was cut off by the front door opening to reveal Danny's sister Jazz.
"Sorry I stayed a little later at the library than usual and got lost in my studies." Danny rolled his eyes, his sister was a workaholic and an insufferable know it all. She was taller than him had red hair that came down to her back, wore a black long sleeve shirt, blue jeans, black high heels and a blue headband.
"Only you could get lost in something as boring as school work Jazz." She frowned.
"Danny if I were you I'd spend more time studying with the way your grades are going." Danny scoffed.
"Please this family has enough 'Genius' to go around thank you very much," he said watching as his dad caused something else to explode.
"I wish you'd take my advice little brother other than playing video games." She finished not really wanting to continue the conversation, as she began to read one of her psychiatry books.
Danny went upstairs to his room which was similar to most teenager bedrooms, a bed, computer in the corner, bookshelf, rock and roll posters/albums everywhere and telescope plus space related things all around his bedroom. Danny inspired to be an astronaut not just because he liked space but also because of the idea of being weightless in the great unknown sounds like a way to finally vent any worries he had and just relax.
Lost in his memories he began looking through his telescope finding various stars and planets, he knew that in order to become an astronaut he would need a lot of qualifications. The difficulty varies depending on the person but he didn't think they were too hard, plus with the promise from NASA saying its easier to get into every year he felt an almost guaranteed chance at getting in. As for study well he was a B-C average student and his teachers always say his capable of doing better, he was annoyed because they were right, with private tutoring he was guaranteed an A in almost any subject.
But enough of that turning away from his telescope he turned on his computer and started playing with Tucker as he waited for dinner. "Can't wait to get back to my boring routine after tomorrow, I've got a dream to achieve….later." He said as he began playing unaware of the events soon to take place.
In the depths of the GIW facility, two men walked side by side dressed in white suits and sunglasses inside during night time. With them was a suitcase handcuffed to both their wrists as they walked down the hall.
Arriving at their destination was the director. "Agent O, Agent K you're late."
"Sorry sir our clothes got soaked three times, and as protocol dictates, we need to have them dry and clean at all times. This could be avoided if we invested in Fenton tech sir." The director frowned.
"What was that?"
"Nothing sir." the man huffed.
"Very well do you have the package?" Then men nodded taking off the cuffs and unlocking the case. The director opened the case staring at the device with a menacing grin. "Excellent." Picking up the device and revealing it to be a shock collar that could fit an elephant. "With this object, we finally have the key to our funding." Agents K and O were still unsure of what was going on.
"Sir due to the secrecy of our mission we were unsure of what was in the case, how exactly is a shock collar going to save the GIW?" The director smirked.
"Not so much the collar but what is going to go around." He motioned them to follow him, staying close the went through a pair of high-security doors to an observation room. The glass gave them a view of a dark room and the agents could barely make out any silhouettes, but they could tell that the room was large had water at the bottom and statue probably a couple meters in height was half submerged in the water. "Right there gentlemen is what's going to save us. This is our ticket to becoming a full proof organisation."
The agents leaning in closely to see what their boss was talking about. But their blood froze when two purple eyes the size of dinner plates peeled open with a chilling glare.
AN: What do ya think too long, good/bad, out of my league? You tell me cause I plan on writing one more chapter and if this story isn't as interesting as I thought it was then I'll rewrite another story. Please tell me what you think.
