This is my first fanfiction so it will proberly suck, try not to be to harsh! Still, would really apprieciate it if you reveiwed and maybe gave me some pointers for improvement.
Summary: Naruto upsets kakashi, so the other sensei's tell him and the rookie nine why. With this new knowledge they they realise just how bad kakashi's life was. But then they gain some infomation and with a describtion of someone which seems very familiar.
Disclaimer: I do not own Naruto or Avatar the last airbender
"Mother" The shout was heard across the clearing "mother look" sitting on the ground, talking, a young woman heard the shout and, when she looked up, couldn't help but chuckle at her young son's antics.
Returning to the conversation with the other parents the young woman felt herself relax in a way she hadn't done for days, only vaguely paying attention to the three year old on the other side of the clearing playing with the other three.
She briefly left the conversation to check on her 1 year old daughter and, seeing that she was still asleep near her legs, turned her attention to the sky. It was a lovely day; the sky was clear with only a few clouds, a gentle breeze made the grass ripple while the sun bathed the clearing in a soft golden light. Turning her face into the warmth of the sun she could almost forget her worries and fears.
When her best friend had told her about this little outing her first reaction had been to refuse, but after weeks of constant nagging she had been worn down and agreed. Across from her sat the parents of the twins, she had never talked to them much and couldn't remember their names, while the twins themselves where currently playing with her son.
Looking over at the children she noticed her best friend's daughter, Yukiko, and her own son huddled together and appearing to be in deep conversation (The sight was pretty funny considering they were both three), but she was unsurprised, the two of them were like brother and sister.
Yukiko's father, and her friends husband, Yoshi, was sitting to her. 'It's ironic' she thought to herself 'that she spent so much time convincing me to come but hasn't come herself' for indeed her best friend was missing, although it wasn't really her fault. She'd been called away on a last minute mission, much like her own husband had just yesterday, which is why he also hadn't attended.
"It's good to see relax a bit Kohaku" The woman turned her head to see Yoshi talking to her. "You've been acting strange since that incident two weeks ago" and with those words the moment was ruined, whatever delusion of peace she had had just moments ago was shattered as she was reminded of the harsh reality of life.
'Yes' she thought 'I should have know they'd notice', Of course they'd be concerned, The incident 2 weeks ago had left many worried and confused, but none more so then herself, because she was the only one who knew what happened. The others weren't as worried now, after all nothing else had happened, but she couldn't shake the feeling of dread that flooded her every time she thought about it.
She should of told someone, should tell someone the truth, but she couldn't, she was afraid of how they would react, which was stupid, she knew they'd be fine with it, but her past teachings made her wary of telling people.
Forcing a smile on her face she turned to Yoshi "Yes, I think I really needed this, I feel so much better out here" She said in, what she hoped was a cheerful voice. Nodding Yoshi returned to the earlier conversation, having long ago lost the trail of what they were talking about she, once again, turned to the laughing children.
'He looks almost exactly like his farther' she thought while staring at her son. As she watched he looked up, saw her staring at him and promptly broke out into a grin, she tried to smile back, she really did but, upon meeting his eyes she felt that familiar feeling of dread. Yes, he looked just like his father; many people noticed that the only thing he inherited, appetence whys, from her were his eyes.
His eyes which were a deep rich shade of emerald green just like her own. Until two weeks ago that is, two weeks ago when her oldest child and only son fell to the floor screaming and clutching his eyes, two weeks ago since he was taken to the hospital unconscious, two weeks ago since he opened his eyes and everyone saw the change.
As the pain in her chest rose and as she stared into those eyes, Those deep, rich emerald eyes with small, equally rich golden flecks within them, she couldn't help but think, two weeks since my past caught up with me in a way I never imagined.
It was right there and then that she decided she would tell someone, whatever the consequences. However she would never have that chance because just as she finished that thought there was a large explosion and the clearing was swarmed with people. The last thing she heard before falling into unconsciousness was the terrified scream of her son echoing across the clearing. "Mother!"
So what do you think. I know its a bit confusing and I'd really like to hear your ideas on it
