Summary: It begins as it did but ends in an entirely different way. What if Negan didn't take Daryl but took someone else instead.
This is my first ever fanfiction btw.
Sorry but same two people die.
If you don't like bad things to happen to your favorite characters don't read.
I don't own The walking dead
But I own my imagination
A person's thoughts
"someone speaking"
Carl's P.O.V.
The whistling began. It came out of no where yet came from everywhere all at once, hitting us like a bullet. My mind was blank and full of fear and concern all at the same time. I could see the fear on people's faces as we stopped dead in our tracks, Abraham and my dad still holding Maggie. We look around us seeing movement in the trees. My dad suddenly says, "Go!" almost yelling by the second "Go!". Abraham, Sasha, Aaron, my dad, and I run quickly through the trees and whistling, still carrying Maggie on the stretcher. The whistling grows louder and louder and we find ourselves in the middle of hundreds of people. The Saviors… The group that seems to keep appearing everywhere even after we killed many of their men. Both Aaron and Sasha have their guns out pointing every which way even though they know that we are entirely surrounded.
Just then a Savior who seemed to be at a higher rank than those around him but not top dog walked towards us. "Good. You made it! Welcome to where you're going". We stand there in seconds of silence before the continues. "We'll take your weapons. Now." As he pulls his gun out and points it straight at me. Seriously, why is it always me they choose to pull a gun on or put a knife at my throat! "We can talk about-" my dad beginsbefore he is cut off by the Savior, "We're done talking. Time to Listen". A good number of men come towards us, taking our weapons and My Gun! He asks me, "That's yours, right?". He leans in towards me not making me uncomfortable but more angry with the situation. He flicks my hat up nearly setting me off the edge but I hold together not moving a muscle. "Okay" the guy continues, "Lets get her down and get you all on your knees. Lots to cover". I notice men moving towards Maggie. I lean closer to her out of worry. Thankfully Abraham stops them by saying, "Hold up. We got it". "Sure. Sure" the man agrees. I stand by wishing I could help as the others set Maggie on the ground slowly helping her up. We walk over to Eugene as they bring him closer to us. "We're gonna need you on your knees" the Savior daydreaming me wonder and scared of what is going to happen next though I do my best not to show it. I can see the wild look of fear Indy dads eyes as we slowly get down to our knees.
No P.O.V.
The Savior yells to a man named Dwight to come on. Dwight then walks over to one of their vans opening the back doors revealing Daryl, who seems to be wounded, Michonne, Rosita, and Glenn. Glenn struggles and falls to the ground only to look up and see Maggie looking sick and weak. "Maggie?" he gets out before he is shoved into the line along with the others. "All right" the Savior says, "We got a full boat. Lets meet the man". He goes up to the RV and knocks on the door getting out of the way after he does so. Just then the door swings open revealing a well built man in a leather jacket while carrying a baseball bat wrapped in barbed wire. For some reason his presence scents chills down everyone's spines. "Pissing our pants yet?" that's the first thing he said. "Boy, do I have a feeling we're getting close. Yep. It's gonna be pee-per city here real soon." He begins walking down the line like he is observing us one by one person. by. person. He continues, "Which one of you pricks is the leader?" The previous Savior answers "It's this one". The man walks up to the guy the Savior had pointed to. "Hi. You're Rick, right. I'm Negan. And I do not appreciate you killin' my men. Also, when I sent my people to kill your people for killing my people, you killed more of my people. Not cool. Not cool. You have no idea how not cool that shit is. But I think you're gonna be up to speed shortly. You're so gonna regret crossing me in a few minutes". No one knew what that meant and no one wanted to find out.
Carl's P.O.V.
The man who called himself Negan continued his speech to my dad and us making me more furious. He came up to me a couple times and I just sat there sitting, more like drowning in a burning fire of anger. He called me a serial killer which I did not appreciate at all! Negan put together the fact that I am Rick's son which I noticed that my dad was scared to death that Negan would do something. The talking continued as suspension grew. He introduced us to his stupid bat that he named Lucille for some psycho reason but then he nearly killed Maggie with it, which I instinctively tried to get up and run at Negan but I was just pushed back into line. If he hurts anyone in my group,… my Family, I'll kill him , I promised myself that! Negan finally said he figured it out and he walked up to my dad and pointed Lucille at him and said, "Eenie" No. "Meenie" No. He can't be doing some stupid silly child's nursery rhyme to choose who dies. "Miney, mo". He continued I know he did but it was like I was not really there I couldn't hear what was going on. I was so filled with shock of what was about to happen even though I had no idea what was about to happen. I told myself that I was ready for whatever was going to happen I was going to kill Negan. I was ready … or at least I thought I was. The thing that brought me out of my trance was when Negan said something about me and my dad. It just happened so quickly, he brought the bat down, I was frozen in fear and shock, I couldn't move, I couldn't help, I couldn't …I couldn't save him…I couldn't save… Abraham. … I didn't know what exactly happened but I saw Daryl jump out of line and somehow I knew Negan wouldn't brush that off. No!...Glenn. The worst part was that Negan stopped in the middle of it leaving Glenn barely alive but just enough. I could hear Maggie crying. Rosita and Sasha and Eugene all crying. My dad, Aaron, and Michonne in shock. Daryl was in between both crying and in total shock. And again I sat there not being able to do anything. After a minute, Negan grabbed my dad and told us that they might be back and drags him to the RV. I tried to get up and go after them but like before I was pushed down.
