Hello, XxXBlackPhoenixXxX here. I don't feel like boring you with my commentary at the moment so I'll make this short. This part is taking place when Shun show's up in New Vestroia (I think I spelled that right). Review if you feel the need, I would appreciate it.
Chapter I
Shun was jumping around from tree to tree. The forest surrounding him was healthy and green with pine trees that you couldn't see the tops of from the forest floor. He had explored this forest at every chance he could, finding new and more challenging jumps. The rush of being surrounded by nothing but air was quite therapeutic to, clearing his mind of all his problems and worries. He could spend hours among the trees, but his grand-father was expecting him back in a half an hour, so he couldn't waste his time.
Shun was scaling higher and higher, from his experience, having only found this forest a month ago, he knew that the best jumps were at the top. He did flips and spins on familiar jumps and made his way to the very top of the tallest tree. From there he could see the entire forest, from the purple mountains in the west to the sparkling lake in the east; it was the sight to see. He settled himself on his perch and gazed over to the mountains, the sun had not yet set, it was positioned right above the purple cliffs, in a mater of minutes Shun watched as the shadows got longer and the skies darkened. He had watched this miraculous affect a few times and still couldn't decide if this or the sun rising over the lake was a better view.
He reluctantly got up, he would have to explain to his grand-father the reason to why he was late and, as always, he wouldn't understand. It was hared for people to understand what they did not experience themselves, to Shun; it was surprising that so many people believed in one religion or another.
He jumped down the way he came and went speeding thru the forest; he then came to a jump that he had not done before. Fifteen feet, he estimated, I've done farther and he pounced, Shun would have made the jump to if not for a wide circular portal that suddenly appeared mid way. There was no turning back, even he, a ninja, couldn't turn around in mid air. He was sucked in.
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Apparently if you enter a portal from an altitude, then you exit said portal from the same altitude. Shun learned that the hard way when he was teleported fifty feet in the air in the middle of no were. After a quick free fall, he managed to land on his feet in what appeared to be a desert.
It was an easy guess, jugging from the circular, blue portal, that he ended up in New Vestroia, opposing to that hypothesis was the fact that, from what he knew, there where no deserts on the planet, and most of all, where were all the bakugan? The desert was deserted. Shouldn't they be swarming the place?
Shun figured that if he wanted his questions, well, answered then he needed to find someone to talk to, so he walked. After a walking for quite some time, he began to doubt that he really was on New Vestroia, maybe all portals look like circular blue vortexes. By night fall he found what appeared to be a tropical forest, framed by two cliffs, this he assumed is what New Vestroia should look like.
After wandering around for a few minutes, he came across a stream and his doubts on his whereabouts were throne to the wind when he saw a group of bakugan huddled together talking in hushed voices. The only problem with the seen was the fact that the bakugan were in there sphere forms and not there full bodies.
They must not have noticed him because they continued to talk.
"What happened?"
"What if it comes back?"
"I wish master Preyas was here to protect us." They must know Preyas.
"What if it comes back?"
This is where he made his presence known;
"What if what comes back?"
The bakugan scattered, one screamed, they must have been startled. Shun walked up to the place were they once were. He got an idea, "What would Preyas think of you cowering and hiding?"
It worked an Aquos bakugan came out of a near by bush.
"You know Master Preyas?" It was a Lumitraid, she was the one who screamed earlier.
"Of ours I do, does he still hang around with Angelo and Diablo?"
She was about to answer when a Haos Splight interrupted, "Who are you; you don't look like a Vestal."
"Shun Kazami, what's a Vestal?"
"Kazami? You wouldn't happen to be one of the Bakugan Battle Brawlers would you?" said a Pyrus Snapinoid.
Shun nodded "What's a Vestal?"
"The aliens" "The invaders" "The savages"
"The invaders?"
"Yes, they invaded our world" Said the Splight.
"They use us for battle in their tournaments" said the Snapinoid.
"They put us back in our sphere forms and are sucking us up with their flying thing" Said the Lumitrait.
As if on cue, a HUGE air craft came flying above. Its tractor beams were sucking up bakugan of all sorts. The three bakugan before Shun were being pulled up as well, he grabbed them before they could get too far and put them in a hollow trunk "Stay here" he said.
It was impossible to catch all of the Bakugan and bring them to safety, Shun realized so he had only one other option to stop that 'flying thing', to destroy it, or at lest put it out of commission. Thus he climbed the near by cliff, he was then high enough to jump onto the ship. He made fast pace to the engines, broke off a lose plate and pulled out what looked like some important stuff. His quick thinking paid off when the engines on that side ran short. He jumped off in time to see a smaller ship leave the bigger one and as he planed, the big ship crashed into the side of the near by cliff, the captured Bakugan flooding out of available spaces.
(Shun's Pov)
I landed on the adjacent cliff to the one the ship crashed into, the Bakugan cheered their thanks for their freedom. I wasn't concentrating on that though, my thoughts were on the other ship, the one that got away. Just then, I was surrounded by what appeared to be officers in green jump suits and who wad stun guns, the ship that got way landed behind them.
"You are under arrest for treason". So, they did see me.
The officer that spoke positioned his gun and fired. It hit and I recoiled, but I didn't make a sound and kept on my feet. Then two more officers fired too and I dropped to my knees the pain that shot true me was almost unbearable, the agonizing jolt in my spine, but I refused to make a sound or pass out, hun, so much for 'stun'. A full total of six stun guns were now shooting at me and then, it all went black.
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