I am presently under the stress of rewriting the story. Trying to fix botched up spelling and give the story more meat, the bones are here but the meat is missing. Sorry for being gone for so long, but life has a way of letting you know that you may not be as in charge of the situation as you think. I would appreciate constructive criticism, but please refrain from griping about not capitalizing names, not getting direct tranlations from another language and such, I use an online translitator so I am not a language expert.
Chapter 1
The wind was howling as he ran. As fast as someone who couldm, somone who was exhausted, bleeding, wounded and on the verge of passing out. Behind him he could hear the screams of the ones who didn't get away. Away from the annihalation of everything. Knowing that he didn't have that much time before it caught up with him. Running as fast as he could looking around at the destruction of the land, knowing that as the sole survivor of the Order that unless he got to Hogwarts then everything they had planned and hoped for would be all lost. Carrying with him the hope of the wizarding world, no the hope of the entire magical world, Harry ran. As fast as he could knowing that Hogwarts was there waiting for him or what was left of her.
As the sun blasted through the clouds that covered the planet Harry looked around him, England was falling apart piece by piece. The first to go was the polar icecaps and then the island nations. The muggles thinking each other was causing the global devestion, fired off their nuclear weapons effectively wiping each other out. At first Voldemort was ecstatic, then realizing there would be no one to rule or be slaves tried a spell that was in essence the end of the world. The order knew this was the end, when all the magical creatures all had shown up at Hogwarts looking for shelter. But the magic was gone, so Hermione and a group of other order members found a spell to put them in statis and stored them in magically enhanced carriers, so if they got it fixed they would have the wild magic they would need to survive.
So they performed the spell Hermione created.
Až k spát až návštěva
Stárnutí ne dlouhý život
Hojivý celek bolest
Až k spát až návštěva
But not before she was killed, she never saw the end results. Ron was the last to be taken, Harry still remembered the ambush that left him alone in a world on the verge of dying. Shaking his head he ran faster seeing the blackened towers of Hogwarts. Everything was dead or gone, Hagrids hut just a burnt out shell, the black lake dried up, whomping willow nothing but a hole in the ground. All around Harry he saw the destruction of his world, even Hogwarts was almost gone. All that was actually left was a portion of the dungeon near Snape's quarters. Just a small broom closet really was accessible. But it had Dumbledores picture and the magical circle Ron and he had drawn the circle was drawn under Dumbledores instructions and ever watchful eyes, getting it just right. Working out the coordinates all the while grieving for their lost member.
Dumbledore when he was alive, had found a spell that was supposed to transfer one physically to a different dimension, the catch is that you had to be dead in the other dimension, "no two like beings could exist in the same plane" theory, so Harry along with Ron worked until they needed the last piece of the puzzle, something only Voldemort had, the poison of a parseltongues familiar.
Ron and Harry took great pleasure in killing Nagini and mutilating her body, after she had moved on from large animals to humans. Ron had lost his brother Charlie to Nagini's coils and stomach, so revenge was a great motivator. That's when he lost Ron, Voldemort along with about 15 of his followers ambushed them and Ron was killed with a spell that Voldemort loved to use on the order, it was the burning spell, "Penitus Exuro".
Ron being just as exhausted as Harry screamed for him to run, knowing that it was over for him, Harry watched as Ron died in front of him, cursing the rest of the DE's, after the battle with them was finished Harry looked round and saw only him and Voldemort was left standing.
Harry knew he would not have a chance against an enrage Voldemort so Harry used the only thing he had left in his arsenal, a muggle grenade. Pulling the pin and throwing it at Voldemort, Harry ran as fast as he could. Knowing that Voldemort would call what was left of the DE's, and be hot on his trail. I guess they didn't take into consideration that world was literally falling apart and the chaotic magic created by Voldemorts spell. The Magic was after any and all living things.
As Harry got back to Dumbledores picture, hearing the destruction behind him, he started the spell….
ex hic ut illic
take mihi ex hic qua totus est lost
ut illic qua totus can exsisto lucrum
Repeating himself Harry heard behind him,something that made his hair stand on end, an eerie laugh.
"Trying to leave me so soon little magic user?" a deep hypnotic voice asked.
Harry turned around and saw a black cloud, stopping on the outer part of the circle. Dumbledore in the background saying " Finish it Harry, hurry before it overcomes the circle!" Inside it was shapes, not knowing what they were Harry took a closer look, after seeing what was inside the billowing mess, he went back to repeating the spell. Using and athame he cut his hand and wiped the blood in the middle of the circle.
"Come on little magic user join us, we are all here" the shapes now had a form, Ron, Hermione, Ginny, Remus all of them who had died. As Harry's horrified glance saw each one with out their eyes, their bodies half decomposed, "Come home to us Harry, Its safe here." Wind was blowing hot, the smell of death, the feeling of hopelessness filled Harry.
Then a voice, Dumbledores "HARRY FINISH THE SPELL HURRY!"
Harry finally used to last of his magic to get Nagini's venom on the last rune, shouting the spell one last time
ex hic ut illic
take mihi ex hic qua totus est lost
ut illic qua totus can exsisto lucrum
The last thing Harry saw and heard was what he thought was Voldemort screaming and the Blackcloud rushing toward him.
English to latin
From here to there take me from here where all is lost to there where all can be gain
