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Behind Ruins

Winter passed quickly, the smell of spring have been felt, the butterflies began to dance around the flowers like every year, the color of the plants was green than ever had, It was the beginning of the beautiful spring season and it was a lot of young couples sat amusement park that located north of the city

"Ben establishment you're not going to waste this spring just about sleep," said Gwen when she pulls the blanket from Ben
"stop, Let me sleep five more minutes only ," said Ben and he pulls back the covers and trying to gain a few more minutes a sleep
"I guess you would not mind that I take this diary" said Gwen as she flees the room with her diary
"return it, I have no power to you!" "Ben got up quickly out of bed and tried to chase after gwen

Gwen down at the kitchen and put the diary next to the television that was on the coffee table
Ben took back the diary and go back to his room and max appeared before him with a smile

"Hoooo I see you're wake up, get dressed and I'm like waiting for you in the car," said Max

Ben went to his room and got dressed and went down to the car he was nervous more about that gwen made him wake up early
The ride was quiet, no one spoke until they reached destination

"What the mall again ..." Said Ben upset
"I told you in the morning when I waked you," said Gwen she laughs
" children get out of the car we need to hurry," said Max turned off the engine

There were many people at the mall and the shops were full of customers Ben did not like it much, he preferred a quiet place to calm as a forest and streams

Gwen ran straight to the shops in the mall , Ben and Max followed her after an hour of shopping, they stopped to sit in a restaurant which is near the fountain

"What do you want to order" the waitress asked
"Spaghetti" said Ben excitedly
"Just coffee, Gwen what you want?" Max said
"I'll take two balls of ice cream with chocolate," said Gwen

After ordering Gwen Heard someone behind her call her ...

"Gwen!" It was Kevin!
"Kevin?" Gwen asked shocked
"Shocked?" Said Kevin opened his arms to embrace Gwen
"I missed you!" said Gwen and jumps into the hands of Kevin and hugs him tight
"me to, for two years I am trying to find time to come see you," said Kevin embraced a stronger Gwen

"This Kevin again," Ben thought angrily
"What's going on Kevin, want to join us for dinner." Max said
"I would love to" Kevin smiled and winked to Ben who looked nervous
"Kevin why did you leave the city before two years ago?" Max said when he drink is coffee that he ordered
"I had to go back to my family," said Kevin, looking at Ben

Ben did not ate from the spaghetti that he ordered only played with the fork and tried to grab as much spaghetti with the fork

"What happen to you Ben .. what Kevin did to you?" Asked Gwen whispered to Ben

After dinner Gwen suggested that she and kevin walk alone and She will meet them another hour by the fountain Ben did not like the idea

Half an hour later Ben and Max was in the hunting shop Ben out from the store that he was sick of the odors that were in the store
Ben Standing by the railing and looked down and saw Kevin and Gwen sitting on the fountain like two lovers embracing
Ben had never felt such anger like someone stabbed a knife and only now realized that he has emotions and he love with her

"Grandpa Come quick," shouted Ben
"What happened?" Max asked in alarm
"I want to go upstairs "said Ben
"ok, ok but you don't have to shout "Max said smiling

while Ben and Max walked down the stairs a strong earthquake moving the mall from side to side mall's walls began to split parts of the ceiling began to fall following as a result of the earthquake the gas station near a mall was exploded which increased the destruction and prevented access to the mall rescue forces

"Grandpa, Grandpa what's going on here ?" Ben said in fear
"Do not worry Ben, it will be fine," said Max tries to take cover

Ben and Max tried to move but a stone wall blocked the road
"Ben we had to go back up," said Max
"No! we need to save Gwen, she is near to the fountain," said Ben while a tear falling from his eye
"Ben it will not help to Gwen if we'll die here," said Max tried pull Ben

Another earthquake occurred...

"Grandpa, Grandpa!" Shouted Ben as part of the ceiling fell on Max
"Grandpa Do not leave me now ... please" said Ben crying and trying to lift the stones that fell on Max

Ben was there for five minutes folding into himself and crying
"I must save Gwen" Ben whispered
and Began to move the stones blocking the way down to floor

After ten minutes Ben succeed to remove the stones that blocked the lower floor
Ben Saw people trying to find a way out of the rubble

"Gwen, Gwen! " Ben yelled and ran toward the fountain but nothing was left from the fountain just a pile of stones
"Ben is that you?"It was Kevin's voice!

For once, Ben was glad to hear the voice of Kevin because now he thought there was still a chance to save Gwen's life

"Where Gwen?" said Ben concern

Kevin looked at Ben and didn't say a word

"Where is she?" Asked Ben Again

"I need you to help me" Kevin said and looked at the hole in the floor...

To be continue …..

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