Bramblepaw' P.O.V (I know he's Brambleclaw but this is back then)

I was just about ready to go into battle with Shadowclan but I wished my sister Tawnypaw was here with me. I look at the Shadowclan cats and I see… I see… TAWNYPAW!

"Tawnypaw why are you with Shadowclan?"

"I come to be with my father and also I don't want to be judged by my clan mates." She told me

"Please Tawnypaw I can't live without you." I begged

"I'm sorry why don't you come to join Shadowclan?" She asked

"Because I've been working really hard to earn loyalty despite what my father has done but I want nothing to do with him I still love you Tawnypaw but I hate him!"

"Please Bramblepaw, don't blame him he was doing what he thought was right." She tried to defend him.

"You mean killing the deputy, trying to kill Ravenpaw, or Bluestar, Hating every cat and kittypets because his father decided to become a kittypet. Yeah that's so right. Everything I just listed is against the Warrior Code." I said with hatred.

"Wait I never knew that. Is this true?" She looked at Tigerstar

"Yes of course you didn't know?" He said in shock

"This is why I was judged I thought it was because he left the clan." She had sorrow in her eyes. "Firestar may I join the clan again I'm so sorry."

"Of course you can you were a valuable lose and I'm glad to have you back." Firestar told her.

Yeah I know this is different from the books but I wish it was that way and sorry if I spelled it wrong I lost the book and I had no internet when I wrote this so sorry please RRF (read, review, favorite) I hope you like my new story and it summer and nothing to do so yeah comment if you like It and if you have any idea if you want a cat fill this out.

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