"robo thoughts and speech"

'thought'

speech

Well this is my first story..ok well its my second and i learned a couple things so i was playing custom robo and i decided that it was lacking but anyways heres my story and just to let you know it will follow the original storyline and some of the text from it but theres going to be a few diferences but anyways on with the story

(between the time skip)

Kris walked towards the department of liscensing he liked to play with trish (his father died and he got the letter its kind of important for this part) her mother works there(hey what can i say i forgot the name). But while on his way there he saw a blue square in the bush just the tip sticking out, he walked over to it and grabbed it, hey theres a button on it he said to no one so he pressed it and a dim flash appeared. Ahhh! he fell back dropping the cube and in a deep machine-like voice the cube said. Go to the parts generator..'huh whats that... oh yeah that thing in my apartment' hey this must be a custom robo! i can finally fulfill my fathers will (insert funny little dance here) i better go back home!.

(and now its time for the time skip)

Hey wake up,what you got wax in yer ears get up you've got an appointment with the stale-horse remember! lucy the landlord(or land lady) walked out of the room so he could dress.

(at the office)

so have you ever worked has a bounty hunter before?

er..no

THEN DONT GET COCKY!

do you have your own robo?

yes..well actually i have two of them

two huh...well i dont think your right for steel hearts,What come on the steel hearts is legendary! i need this job,see look at that confidence! besides its all well known that im legendary! harry said.No harry i wasn't talking about you i was reffering to marcia, nobody really likes you.

'Why doesn't anybody like me' harry thought with his head down,wait..wheres marcia? hey what about me harry said.She's at...Riiinnngg.ah sounding lovely has usual hmm hmm hm..ok well we've got a job at the robo research lab, linda called us.Linda! im there!

(at the lab)

It's those BOTTOM-FEEDERS! one of the police officers said with obvious disgust,hey were bounty-hunters!.

Yeah whatever anyways nobody called you so just crawl under a rock somewhere,actually i called them here.Linda said making a dramatic entrance,yoohoo linda looking good has always,thanks harry..but linda we have evrything under control the police officer said trying to get rid of harry.They are stealing our newest robo on cant be to careful linda said in a matter-of-factly tone

Yeah thats right harry said quickly and rushed off to fight another burgler,then suddenly a cop crashed through the room and smacked into some barrels.My turn! kris said with confidence and rushed towards the burgler and dived.

(in the holloseum after both cubes revealed there robos)

"ha ha ha your using that outdated piece of junk!" the metal grappler was laughing profusley at the ray legend."Oh yeah laugh at this" (by the way here are kris's parts..knuckle,wolf spider,raven,wyvern,ray legend..illegal massive but massively powerful) ray legend did two air dashes and cleared the entire stadium punched the metal grappler clear across the stage.Ray legend then dashed again and punched him backwards and continued suit until it finally had to rebirth. the metal grappler touched the floor but ray legend was all over it and with one punch it exploded. Perfect,Kris wins