So hello people this is my very first fiction and I'm not really used to writing but here's the story and heads up they will be humanized and Pegasus well be giving an elemental type of magic well let us begin!

Meeting terror

As the sun starts to set and all forest creatures head to sleep while some find this the time to hunt. One man walks through the forest looking at a map heading to the home town of his old friend. This man is known as Midnight terror "damn maybe I should have took that left? Now I'm lost at night in a forest in habited by dragons, timber wolves and who knows what else?" as he walked through the trees and bushes the. Sound of howling could be heard in the distance. But only a smile encased his face. Stretching his arms and putting his hand on the hilt of his katana preparing himself for what's to come "it'll be bothersome if there's more than four." At that moment three timber wolves jumped from the under groove of the forest. Eyes heavy on their prey midnight only said "who's first" as one ran for him it jumped up only to noticed a blade passing through its jaw down its body it feel to the ground in a slump the other two circled there prey both, then after a second they charged in. Midnight was able to impale one through the skull but the other jaws bit down on his arm, acting quickly he's blade lit ablaze, it jumped back to avoid he's swing only to be engulfed in flames. Checking his wound he said "damn I thought I had that under control? "Sighing he turned around to walk off only to hear more growling behind him. Turning around to see about four more wolves he's blade lit ablaze along with the mark on his head "I guess she won't mind if I'm a little late." He said charging towards them with a grin on his face.


In a usually lively town the moon start to rise and all inhabits head to there homes to sleep to prepare for tomorrow. But one purple haired girl sits at her window waiting for the arrival of her dear friend lost in thoughts that only snap her out when she hears a crash behind her. She turns to see a boy with green hair purple t-shirt buried under a pile of books. "Oh spike stop fooling around we need to make sure the house is perfect for when mid arrives" she said as a purple aura floated spike to his feet and books to there right place.

Spike looked at her "I'm sure the house looks good enough Twilight" he said looking around the almost blinding sparkly house Twilight looked at him and said yea maybe your right she slouched down in her chair "I'm just so excited to see him I haven't seen him sense the princess trained me we lost contact and he just went to live with his brother he was my very well only friend in canterlot"

Spike asked "well if he's such a nice person why he is being sent here to learn friendship again?" Spike asked quizzically only for Twilight to get depressed. "I don't know I'm sure it all started when his mother died" spike felt bad that he had asked that now. But Twilight only patted his head no need to feel bad how about some ice cream and easily the dragon blooded kin was happy and ran to the kitchen.

Twilight was about to follow when she heard her door knock "I wonder who that can be "she checked her hair and smiled hoping she looked good she didn't know why she was so nervous he's just an old friend of mines as she opened the door to see the kind gentle boy she'd know sense childhood. But she didn't except anything what she so now

A boy with black shoulder length hair, eyes as blue as the sea, body full of bite marks, scars and a smile on his face as he said "you're the only person I know who'd want to live in a library" but Twilight wasn't laughing "what happened to you!" midnight thought on his better judgment and tried lying I "I got lost on the way here" but Twilight was giving a stern look and said "you have a map" damn the usual works he thought to himself the only thing he could do was tell the truth "sorry Twilight I was really just looking to fight some of the everfree forest timber wolves" he said disappointed but Twilight only hugged him and said "I can't stay mad at you now come on inside so we can get you bandaged" she said smiling


Midnight was amazed there where so many books here and he had to admit to himself Twilight had really grown he wonder how she saw him. One thing he didn't like here is how her, how she put it? Adopted brother kept looking at him like I was stepping on his territory are something. He remembered Twilight telling him how she hatched a dragon before she started training with the princess.

Twilight asked so how's your brother. Midnight looked at her and said "oh sky he's still a fat ass" he said grinning to himself but he's making it pretty high in the ranks of wonderbolts. Twilight poked him in one of his wounds and he yelped you. Should really be nicer to him only for midnight to say "the day I beat him is the day ill respect him "Twilight shook her head at his ridiculous logic but she couldn't help look at how strong he seemed to got she was snapped out bye spike telling them he was gonna go to bed

Midnight only looked at the boy walk away and Twilight said "don't worry about him he just needs to get use to another male being in the house now. "As long as he doesn't get in my way where cool he said picking his blade up

That's when Twilight noticed the dragon tooth on the blade and it struck her "you became a wonderbolt!"


ARUTHORS NOTES-there you have it people the 1st chapter of inner darkness please review and tell me how I did I don't mind flames as long as there not to devastating :p and Pegasus have elemental magic if you were wondering and the marks on there head tell you which element

I know the first chap was a little boring but trust me it it'll get better :D