Hey, please read this and tell me if you like it.
It was just a spur of the moment thing. I just got this idea and decided to write it down.
All advice is appreciated.
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Preface
"You cant leave me here!" I said quickly, jumping to my feet and hastily brushing the snow off my jacket.
"I can do as I like," he said calmly, turning his back slightly.
"I wont let you!" I screamed at him.
Who on earth did he think he was?
"I'd like to see you try," he whispered over his shoulder, then he looked down at his feet.
"What has happened to you?" I asked softly, taking a tentative step in his direction.
"I don't know what you are talking about... Goodbye," he said the last word quickly, as though it would hurt more to string it out.
This last word hurt like a white hot knife being plunged into my stomach; knocking all the wind from my lungs.
"No! Wait!" I held my hand out in protest.
But it was too late. He left in a flurry of cloth, with no trace except the tiniest swirl of snow on the ground. I looked up, searching for any sign that he would still be there, but there was none. The snow, then, began to fall in small flakes here and there; it would be a pretty sight if it wasn't for the circumstances.
Typical, absolutely typical!
Who finds out a secret, so mythical, so magical, so unrealistic but believes it? Feels that it fits perfectly into her life? How many people would want to help?
I can name only one person, I thought bitterly, me.
