Pain

Claimer: hey guys I just thought of pain and got this passage in my mind do tell me if you like it or not, I wrote it by my self. so yea be kind and do review,

''sometimes pain is better then the cure, because it reminds you of your guilt of what you have done wrong .its a memory you cant for get no matter how old you are it lives with you and you die with it, this happens with every being some end it by ending them selves some bear it through out their lives, but if we stay as a good human there wont be any demons but when you become a demon then comes the pain of guilt that you cant cure even if you leave the path of destruction.''

So what do you think tell me?