Okay my brain killed over... this one totally sucks... but maybe revision will do good...
Sasuke lay asleep under a tree in the empty training field when Naruto arrived. the blonde only meant to come train by himself but there lay Sasuke all vulnerable and helpless. oh and so damn hot. yes he was definitely hot and irresistible. yes Naruto was thinking this about another guy. he didn't care. everyone thought he was completely obsessed with that pink-haired bitch who only had eyes for this vulnerable, sleeping guy.
Naruto crouched over the raven and noticed his shirt slid up on his stomach. he brushed a stray lock of hair away from the other boy's face and watched him sleep with an endearing look. the boy so helpless and beautiful in sleep always pushed everyone away.
Strange but Sasuke looked sad. All his protective shields fell away when he slept. He wasn't the better than everyone else and don't give a shit cold Uchiha. Right at this moment he was sad and alone. God! Naruto really hated him. They were truly alike. Neither of them has a family. Both of them had strong hatred for something. They loved fighting and insulting each other. Insults and fights distracted them from the problems surrounding them though they would never admit it.
They were both alone. They both blamed themselves for at the least three things. They both lived alone. They both were single. No, Naruto did not think it was important or a fact needed to be stated. He could care less if the teme had multiple girlfriends. It's not like it would ever matter to him. Yes, he thought the raven was hot in his sleep but that could mean anything. He'd date Shikamaru long before he'd even think about dating that baka.
They were the equivalent of a broken mirror. One side so distinct the other blurred with cracks running across it. Their foreheads met at the shattered glass. All they had to do is figure out witch image is the blurred and which is the distinct one. That is to say if there is a distinct one that is free of any cracks. Naruto knew he was a distorted image, but there were times when Sasuke seemed just as distorted as him. It was like they were puzzles put together wrong.
Okay, what the crap?! Naruto is no philosopher, he doesn't even know what the hell a 'filosa-whatever' is. So what, Naruto isn't a genius. He never really claimed to be one. Why were his thoughts rambling anyway? Oh yeah! He forgot the raven on the ground temporarily. Now it seems he is to regret that. It seems the raven doesn't want to be forgotten and ignored. Well, at the least in his dream he doesn't.
The raven had taken the liberty to pull the blonde, that was at the time of the surprise attack was still leaning over the other boy, into his own chest. WHAT THE HELL?! Yeah, he was pissed.
His days just kept getting shittier. That pink haired bitch he's so fascinated with turned him down again. He was used to the rejections, in fact he anticipated the rejections. His day wasn't complete 'til Sakura rejected him. Oh but noooooooooo today was fucking different. Why? You ask? Naruto hasn't a fucking clue. It wasn't any special holiday. Also, it's been like this for seven years and she's never flipped like this on a holiday before. It wasn't even this bad on the teme's birthday.
What the hell could her problem be?! He came back from his thoughts ounce again by the boy beneath him. The teme was finally stirring. Well, about goddamn time! Naruto was about to pull away when his gaze met the raven's and then both went wide when someone suddenly jerked the younger teen out of the raven's grasp.
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