Hello everybody my name is Trevyler and Welcome to my first (or second if I finish my other story before this one.) Mortal Kombat story.

I'm doing this basically to sort of test the waters on writing more MK stories.

I don't really have anything to say right now so let's get on with the story.


CHAPTER 1:THE DEMONESS APPEARS

Sub Zero, or Kuai Liang, sat in his room in the Lin Kuei temple. His thoughts lingered on the woman who claimed to know of Bi Han's whereabouts. He felt a familiar presence within the room, "What is it Thunder God?" Sub Zero said coldly. Raiden stood on the opposite side of the room, "I'm only here to to warn you of a visitor that could be a great Allie or an even greater threat depending on your choices." he spoke. Sub Zero turned to him, "And who is this visitor?" he asked. Raiden stood firmly and a small smiled formed on his face, "You will know when the time comes." he said. Before Sub Zero could ask anymore questions the protector of Earthrealm teleported away, leaving the Grand Master by himself once more, 'Damn you Thunder God' he thought to himself. He returned to his thought from before he was interrupted, 'How could this woman of known Bi Han. He never informed me of any encounters with any women. Then again had someone caught wind of it in the old Lin Keui he would've been punished severely' the younger Sub Zero thought of his brother who had previously held the title.

He had concentrated so hard on his thoughts that he didn't hear someone entering, "Kuai Liang someone is approaching the temple. They've managed to sneak passed the patrols on the Lin Kuei borders.' a man informed. Sub Zero knew who this was, "Tomas you'd better not be fooling with me. If there is an intruder then we need to be on the look out." he told his best friend. Tomas, also known as Smoke, had been Sub Zero's best friend since they were both practically raised in the old Lin Kuei. Smoke had the look on his face that said he was serious, "I wouldn't joke around at a time like this. Especially since we've got a possible lead on Bi Han's location." he said. Sub Zero went to his balcony that looked over the forest of the Lin Keui territory as well as the main courtyard, "Have you informed the guard towers?" he asked. Smoke nodded, "Did it before I even got here." he said returning to his normal cocky self. Sub Zero nodded, "Good. If someone's good enough to get past our borders then they'll be on their way here. And if you're messing with the Lin Kuei then you're looking for a fight." he said in a rough tone.

A few moments later commotion was heard from the guards in the towers, "There in the path." one of the guards said. Approaching the temple, was a woman dressed in Gothic leather clothing that was very revealing. The guard in the tower signaled for the archers to be ready, "Halt in the name of the Lin Keui!" he yelled. The woman simply kept walking. The man growled a little, "Archers! Aim! Fire!" he yelled to the archers. The hooded archers began firing arrows towards her only for her to disappear before they even came near her, "What! Impossible! Keep looking for her!" he commanded.

In his chambers, Sub Zero heard the commotion and saw the guards searching frantically for someone, "She just disappeared!" he heard among the yells. That surprised him, 'So it's a woman with either teleporting or cloaking abilities.' he thought to himself. Then he heard the clicking of heels approaching behind him, "Looking for me?" a female voice asked. He didn't even need to face her to know who it was, "Sareena." he said flatly. The demoness let a smile dance upon her lips, "Have you thought about my offer Sub Zero?" she asked. The cryomancer turned to face her, "And how do I know you speak truth? What if you have no knowledge of my brother? I don't even know if you knew him. It could be a trap or a suicide mission for all I know." he said with an edge to his voice. Sareena stepped closer to him, "I'm asking you to trust me. It's disappointing to know that Bi Han never spoke of me. I also never said it would be an easy task." she answered each of his questions. Sub Zero still had his doubts, but he hoped that this could really lead him to his older brother, "Alright I'll help you, but if you even think of double crossing me then it'll be the last thing you do." he said with a bone chilling coldness to his voice. Sareena nodded, "Wouldn't think of it. And whether this all works out or not I'll still appreciate the help." she said truthfully. The Lin Kuei turned away from her, "We leave tomorrow, but first I must make preparations for my departure." he said. Sareena smiled a little as he left, 'You are definitely not like your brother Kuai Liang, but I want to find out more about you. You could help me in more ways than one." she thought to herself.


Well that was a short start. What did you guys think was it good? bad? awful? If it was awful then tell me about it and don't just say it was bad, but tell me why.

Anyway if you haven't figured it out then I'll tell you that this story is gonna focus on Sub Zero and Sareena. If you're not into that then go ahead and stop reading this.

Anybody else that's okay with that go ahead and carry on reading.

That's all for this time. Have a great day!

~Trevyler