Violence + Pain + True Feelings Pure Love?

Written by:AnimeRulez08

Disclaimer: This Fan Fiction is based on Love Hina, I do not claim to have any rights to characters and locations included in the Love Hina Animated series or Manga, However I do claim rights that this Version of the story is my own creation and whoever claims this version except me has no legal rights, and I would be glad to fight for my own rights of my version. Just a little reminder I could be too sly on making this story so I suggest you to read other stories than mine. However you may still continue if you wish, as long as you can take what I do to the characters... Hehehe! Mwhahaha! ... Ahem... Ahem...

Note: This is my second fan fiction so don't expect too much, though I write stories on quizilla before, I was still not that good. And also I'm not an English I'm a pure Filipino living in Philippines, so please understand that I'm not that good in expressing myself in English and that sometimes my grammar is way lot worst than you may imagine it, and same goes for my spelling. Anyway, this story will be mainly about the two girls who likely to kill Keitaro Urashima because of their sudden rage, and Keitaro himself.

Chapter1: The Storm

It was middle of summer vacation, and yet the rain was pouring hard on the lodge that the Hinata gang rent for their summer vacation. The sky outside was dark and grim, the clouds was rather gray and dirty white hue. The thunder bolts and lightning strike which sends chill in the spine, rather makes the scenario a lot more worst.

"Huh" Keitaro sighs in disbelief that this weather is actually happening in the middle of summer. The worst part is that the lodge they rent out wasn't the one they're expecting.

"This is really it! I can't believe that were stuck in this lodge?!" Naru said in fury, sending deadly look on Keitaro's direction, making the young fellow feel Goosebumps on his back.

Keitaro realizing the killer aura Naru and Motoko sends in his back, slow shift his look from the deadly scenario outside the window to the deadly looks the 2 was sending him, only to face two dark figures with killer intentions towards him. He only sweats unusually in the current temperature. "Gomenasai..." he stuttered not being able to finish his sentence, was sent flying 20ft up in the sky.

"Keiiiiiitarooooo you damn pervert!" both Naru and Motoko said in unison after sending Keitaro 20ft high in the grounds.

"What did I do again?" Keitaro murmurs to himself before he flown out of sight.

"Senpai-Urashima" being the youngest tenant in Hinata Inn, Shinobu yells out worrying for her beloved senpai. She head towards the door intending to go after her senpai..."Shinobu-chan yamero" Naru said firmly. "But-" Shinobu doesn't have the chance to finish he words. "Your senpai is a pervert Shinobu-chan, he deserves it" Motoko counter part her reasons.

Shinobu can do nothing but to follow and wait patiently until her senpai returns. She sat in the couch and stare at the rain pouring from the hole Keitaro flown out. "Don't worry Shinomu Keitaro will be back soon with bananas and by then Tama- chan will ambush him and win over the bananas" Su said in victory, wearing a camouflage army uniform and helmet to match her attire, pointing her finger up in the air and stepping on the couch completing the dramatic effect. "Uh, Su where did you get that clown uniform out of the blue?" Mutsumi asks, suddenly popping in the scene making Su out of balance. Suddenly a young foreigner girl with blonde hair entered carrying a huge pile of rolled parchment "Wake up Su! I've plotted the perfect plan to ambush Keitaro". Su suddenly got energy out of the blue, she jumps and landed gracefully on Sara's shoulder "Tell me, will that plan win the bananas from Keitaro?". "Are there some watermelons too?" Mutsumi popped infront of Sara looking anxiously at the plan laid on the roll of parchment. "Will ya 2 stop it? This is to destroy that dummy! Not about bananas and watermelons!!..." Sara said in rage. "Just what I thought there are watermelons involved" Mutsumi nod in agreement. "Yup, and Bananas too!" Su jumped on Mutsumi's shoulder. "This is about crime not Watermelons and bananas!!" Sara protested, just in time when Su and Mutsumi snatched the parchment roll from her hands. "If you don't want to share Bananas and Watermelons as she said, we will just take this from you!" Su teased from Mutsumi's shoulder as Sara runs after them in circles.

"I wonder why Keitaro is not yet back. At this moment he should be on his way back." Tsuruko said in daze looking from her sister to Naru. "Will you guys shut up?" Kitsune throws the 3 bottle of Sake she just emptied, to Su, Sara and Mutsumi sending the 3 of them in to sudden sleep "And as for you, maybe you're bit too thoughtful of Keitaro, must it be that you're also falling for him?" Kitsune said in a sly under tone voice. Tsuruko just simply hit her w/ her katana's case, sending her into deep sleep.

"And as for you 2, I believe you're both worrying over Urashima-san. After not giving him a chance again, you two have been giving him too much of a hard time don't you think? Why not let you're true feelings show and search for him?" Tsuruko said to the 2 girls who was both surprised to her comments. "Tsuruko-neechan -" Shinobu started. "I understand Shinobu-chan, but I rather you to look along for Keitaro, we will catch up soon" Tsuruko said. "Hai" and with that Shinobu left with her umbrella and an extra jacket, probably for her senpai.

"Mind telling me the matter with you two?" Tsuruko started as soon as Shinobu is out of sight. There was no reply from both girls only deafening quietness, none of them bothered answering both just in their usual self. "Well it wasn't Keitaro's fault if the-" Tsuruko's words were broken when a figure of Keitaro and Shinobu came in sight. Shinobu came in with Keitaro by her side looking a bit pale.

As soon as Keitaro entered the lodge he quickly kneeled infront of Motoko and Naru "Gomenasai, I know that I'm a pervert. I'm so sorry for being one that disgust both of you" After saying sorry, Keitaro closed his eyes waiting for another attack. He knows that if he runs it'll just make it worst and make the pain greater. But instead he feels nothing; he slowly lifts his head to see Naru and Motoko not looking at him. Feeling rather depressed and frustrated, Keitaro only manage to say "I see... I'll just repair the roof" Keitaro faking a smile. "Senpai-Urashima you're still-" but Shinobu's words were cut, she was caught off guard by her senpai's mild and sweet smile. "It's just all right, I'm just fine, just sit there and rest I'll fix everything in just a minute but I'll just fix the mess in here first. 'What those he mean that he's just all right?' Naru, Motoko and her sister's mind both said in unison, but Naru and Motoko just shook that thought away.

Keitaro went to get some towel and wipe off the water in his hair and body. Then he started to pick up Su and carry her to room B same goes for Sara, then he pick's up Mutsumi and carry her to room C and also same goes for Kitsune that sly fox brain. Then Keitaro went up in the roof to start covering the whole he made when he flown high above.

Shinobu cut the silence "I'll just cook supper if anyone wakes up or anyone feels hungry" Shinobu announce and left for the kitchen. "I'll help, I'll use my katana to cut the meat you're using" Tsuruko said leaving the two girls in the window. "I'll just do something Motoko-chan" Naru said and left.

Naru went up in the roof, not knowing that an eye was following her. "Keitaro" Naru said almost a mumble as she held the umbrella to her and Keitaro. Keitaro who was busy thumping the nails didn't notice her come, and was surprise with her actions. "Arrigatou Naru-chan" Keitaro smiles warmly at her, Naru blushes a bit but Keitaro was too busy with his work that he didn't notice Naru's response. Both of them not knowing that Motoko is watching from a distance silently. 'What am I doing here? Sneaking in that pervert's business, I must be out of my mind' Motoko mentally scolded herself.

When Keitaro finishes his work in the roof and sealed it so no rain drop will enter the lodge, Keitaro went down with Naru, he then started to wipe the floor which the hole left flooded in water rain. Naru quite notices that Keitaro looks pale; Naru can tell for somehow his color shows it even though his acts is still the same. "Umm, Keitaro" Naru calls Keitaro, as she was about to lean forward to touch Keitaro's forehead, she was suddenly caught off guard with his warm and caring smile. "Naru-chan?" Keitaro asks. Naru blush red, she quickly turn her back on Keitaro not wanting to show him the she blushes "I'll call you if dinner is ready" and with that she leave.

Naru entered the kitchen where Motoko is sipping her tea with Tsuruko, and Shinobu busy putting the cooked meal in the table. "Naru-chan you're all red, did that pervert did something to you? I'll teach him a lesson don't worry" Motoko stands up and was about to charge at Keitaro. "Chotto-matte Motoko-chan he... he didn't do anything I just volunteered to see if supper is ready" Naru finishes. "You don't have to cover for that pervert it's in my code to protect girls from pervert like him" Motoko assures Naru. "I said NO!" Motoko was taken aback by Naru's sudden outbreak. "Gomenasai, I must be just tired" Naru said quickly returning to her normal tone. "Shinobu-chan can you call Keitaro over for supper?" Naru asks politely, sitting down comfortably on the chair infront of the prepared table. "Hai" Shinobu bows down.

The supper started, "Itadakimase" Keitaro tried to say energetically trying to hide his pain. They started to eat. No one spoke until they finished. "I'll wash the dishes Shinobu-chan" Keitaro offered, breaking the silence. "But-" Shinobu looked worried. "I insist, I must make up for the trouble I cause all of you, and Shinobu, thanks for looking for me in the rain" with that Shinobu knows that her senpai is damn serious. "Hai" Shinobu accepted her senpai's offer, though hesitantly, she and the others proceeded to their room leaving Keitaro alone washing the dishes. He was starting to sweat not in fear or horror but in pain. He, not knowing that there's a shadow in the corner watching over him. After he put the last plate in the drawer and placed the apron on its place, he suddenly collapsed in the floor.

"Urashima-san!" the shadow from the corner run towards the unconscious Keitaro, who turns out to be Motoko. "Urashima wake up!" Motoko said, starting to panicked. She put Keitaro's back on her lap and starts shaking him madly. "Motoko-chan gomenasai for making you worry" with that he passed out. Motoko reached out for his forehead, but she quickly removed her hands because he was burning hot, not that she mean it literally, but Keitaro is really burning in fever. "Urashima get a hold of yourself!" Motoko said panicking which is not normal to see her, usually she is calm and open-minded, but now she is in great panic and doesn't know what to do. She decided to put Urashima's arm on her shoulder and shift his weight on hers. She drags him until the room.

Inside the room there was only1 small couch enough for a kid, 2 beds; one king size and a single bed. In the single bed Naru lays, on the king size bed Motoko's pillows are arranged, while Keitaro's pillow is on the small couch. Seeing this Motoko shakes her head in disapproval, though that's their arrangement she cannot let Urashima, crouch there on his current condition.

She place Urashima in her bed and noticed that Urashima's clothes were still wet from a while ago, when he was blasted up in the sky. 'This maybe the 1 reason he was ill, but me changing his clothes?' she blush beat red on the thought, that she accidentally punch the poor Urashima. "Gomenasai!" Motoko said panicking more. 'I have to do it for the sake of Urashima' she said as she slowly reaches for the unconscious Urashima's clothes. She slowly quavering removes Urashima's shirt, then throwing the shirt on the ground. The next is his belt, yet she slowly reached for it as she reached the belt she blushed deep red, making her punch Urashima's unconscious body again. "Gomenasai" Motoko said again in panic. She gulped deeply but the thought of Keitaro only in his boxers in her mind makes her again punches Keitaro. "Gomenasai" she said once more. She wasn't sure of what to do; she was walking here and there, jumping everywhere murmuring to herself, she was similar to a kid who is going crazy. "No! No! No! I mustn't do it!" she said walking to the right side of the bed. "Yes! Yes! Yes! I must do it for his sake!" she said walking back to the left side of the bed. "No! Yes! NO! Yes!" she finally stopped at the middle. She slowly gulped 3 times, "I must!" as she slowly reached for Keitaro's belt holding her breath and closing her eyes. She undid his belt, then unbuttoned his pants and roughly seizes his pants to the floor leaving Urashima half naked, unconscious on Motoko's bed. When Motoko can't hold her breath anymore she let the air escape her lungs, same as she open her eyes, she turned tomato red and let out a wail. "Aaaah" she wails, making Naru jump up in bed from her sleep. As Motoko realize what she has done, it was already late Naru is already charging at the unconscious Keitaro, and gave him a super Naru punch. "You pervert! What have you done to Motoko?! And dress your self!". Motoko Jumps at the back of Naru and kicked her out of the way, she then run faster than a bullet towards the unconscious Urashima, who was about to crash on the window. "No! Urashima!" Motoko got Urashima in her arms just in time to save him before he crashes out of the window.

"Gomenasai Naru-chan, but it was my fault! Urashima was unconscious because he was very ill. He was ill because of what we did, and I was changing him from his wet clothes when I freaked out. Gomenasai" Motoko apologized to Naru while putting back the poor unconscious body of Urashima in her bed. "And to add up to my fault, I hit him a lot of times while changing him and even make you hit him. Gomenasai Urashima, I was no good" Motoko said tears filling her eyes. She quickly wipe it away, and start looking for a dry and warm clothes for Urashima in his Travel bag. Finally she found a green turtle neck long sleeves and a sweater, she also found a plain dark blue warm pajama. She put it on Keitaro.

After finishing changing the clothes of Urashima, she settled on the other side of the bed, though blushing she didn't have a choice. Naru was still shocked, she never saw Keitaro so ill, but she returns to her sleep anyway knowing that Motoko will take care of Keitaro.

Motoko is sharing the same be with Urashima and same covers, though she is madly blushing, she just turn her back on Keitaro and proceed to sleeping. Suddenly Motoko's eyes flattered open, she was awakened by the struck of lightning and thunderbolts, she remember when she was a child, she would usually cuddle comfortably in her sister's arms, but now she was all alone to battle her fear in that thing, or was she?

At that time Keitaro's fever was burning hot more than ever, he was shivering in cold. Until Motoko notice the commotion on her back, when she turn she saw Keitaro shivering and gritting his teeth in cold. And his fever was rising alarmingly high. She acted not thinking, she reached for Keitaro's neck and hug him close to her. And all that the ill Urashima do was place his arm around her waist and the other around her shoulder. Motoko was surprised on Urashima's action nevertheless she was astonished that she wanted it too, she feels safe in his arm, his hug was not too tight to choke, not too loose to feel the cold, his hug was like more of protecting. "You sense that I was afraid huh?" Motoko mumbles to Keitaro with a warm smile painted in her face as she comfortably laid her head on his chest and hug him, and Keitaro slowly calming down from shivering in cold. That night the 2 of them sleeps peacefully in each other's arm, the other giving warm and the other giving assurance that nothing can harm her.

All the Hinata gang have nice sleep except one, that one is burning in anger and in jealousy as this person watch the two...

Questions: Who is this person? Why is this person burning in jealousy? And to whom is this person jealous of? Is this jealous person a boy or a girl? Is this person going to be a new character? What is the arrangement they make that Urashima has to sleep in the couch? Why did the Motoko and Naru sent Keitaro Urashima flying 20ft high above the grounds earlier calling him a pervert?

Note: Hahaha! You better watch out for the next chapter! And guys sorry I wasn't a good comedian, as you can see it reflects in the story, sorry for having no sense of humor at all. And sorry for having a boring start for my story. Hope you give me reviews on how I can improve it more. Don't worry I'm used to critics instead I used it to make my story a lot way better than before. I don't take offense at all, I'm sport and also I know that I'm not good enough like the others, but I'm trying to be good enough. I know that most of the writers and readers here in are college students already, so I, being just a 14 yr old sophomore ask for your patience.

So please senpais guide me! Arrigatou Gozaimasu.