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Hey everyone, this is the second chapter and it is a longer than the first. Please review especially Ymer
Juicy Fruit (there I absolutely no reason I'm calling it this, I just happen to be eating some right now)
Max: So you're telling me that the guy who called didn't leave a name or a number, but his voice sounded familiar.
Logan: Yea
Max: I'm guessing that you have no idea who it sounded like?
Logan: Yea
Alec: Isn't that quite the pickle (walking into the living room)
Max and Logan: Alec!!?
Max: what the hell are you doing here? How long have you been listening?
Alec: oh, I dunno I was here for the phone call right through to now
Logan: so, are you going to help us?
Alec: nope, I just came to get some food
Max: (grabbing Alec by the neck) look, you idiot, this is probably the one and only time I will come right out and ask you for help, we have no idea who this guy is, but we do know that he isn't a stranger. If you could just help us find him, please.
Alec: What will you give me?
Max: Is all you care about money?
Alec: no, I also like woman, but I need money to get them
Logan: I will give you anything in my apartment, not including my phone, my computer, or Max
Alec: How much do you think that painting is worth? (Pointing at wall)
Logan: an Original Picassos, probably my best and most expensive piece.
Alec: I'll take it (do you guys think I'm doing a good job with Alec because I don't really think I am, anyway)
Max: now, will you help us?
Alec: With what?
Max and Logan: ALEC!!
Alec: yea, yea I'll help you
#3 hours later Alec is sitting in the living room and Max is standing behind Logan who is sitting at his computer
Max: Look we aren't getting anywhere and I have to go to work so Alec let's go, Logan call me if you get anything
Logan: Ok
Alec: Finally, ok now I can finally tell sketchy about that new bar down in sector 3
Max: Is that how all men spend their time, just going to bars and watching women?
Alec: pretty much
An hour later they had gotten to work and started their route Alec and Max stayed together, they had gone to about 4 deliveries
Max: what's the weirdest thing that has ever happened to you while working
Alec: Probably when I delivered a package to the woman, that was actually a man.
Max: Ok well, I don't know if you noticed but we have been being followed since we left the station, he's standing about a block back in a black overcoat wearing a hood
Alec: How much do you want to bet that he's the one who called you
Max: Let's keep working, we only have two more deliveries, and if we can we'll follow him home.
This chapter was really weird, I'm not really expecting any of you guys to like it that much, and it's setting up the rest of the story. Please review
Hey everyone, this is the second chapter and it is a longer than the first. Please review especially Ymer
Juicy Fruit (there I absolutely no reason I'm calling it this, I just happen to be eating some right now)
Max: So you're telling me that the guy who called didn't leave a name or a number, but his voice sounded familiar.
Logan: Yea
Max: I'm guessing that you have no idea who it sounded like?
Logan: Yea
Alec: Isn't that quite the pickle (walking into the living room)
Max and Logan: Alec!!?
Max: what the hell are you doing here? How long have you been listening?
Alec: oh, I dunno I was here for the phone call right through to now
Logan: so, are you going to help us?
Alec: nope, I just came to get some food
Max: (grabbing Alec by the neck) look, you idiot, this is probably the one and only time I will come right out and ask you for help, we have no idea who this guy is, but we do know that he isn't a stranger. If you could just help us find him, please.
Alec: What will you give me?
Max: Is all you care about money?
Alec: no, I also like woman, but I need money to get them
Logan: I will give you anything in my apartment, not including my phone, my computer, or Max
Alec: How much do you think that painting is worth? (Pointing at wall)
Logan: an Original Picassos, probably my best and most expensive piece.
Alec: I'll take it (do you guys think I'm doing a good job with Alec because I don't really think I am, anyway)
Max: now, will you help us?
Alec: With what?
Max and Logan: ALEC!!
Alec: yea, yea I'll help you
#3 hours later Alec is sitting in the living room and Max is standing behind Logan who is sitting at his computer
Max: Look we aren't getting anywhere and I have to go to work so Alec let's go, Logan call me if you get anything
Logan: Ok
Alec: Finally, ok now I can finally tell sketchy about that new bar down in sector 3
Max: Is that how all men spend their time, just going to bars and watching women?
Alec: pretty much
An hour later they had gotten to work and started their route Alec and Max stayed together, they had gone to about 4 deliveries
Max: what's the weirdest thing that has ever happened to you while working
Alec: Probably when I delivered a package to the woman, that was actually a man.
Max: Ok well, I don't know if you noticed but we have been being followed since we left the station, he's standing about a block back in a black overcoat wearing a hood
Alec: How much do you want to bet that he's the one who called you
Max: Let's keep working, we only have two more deliveries, and if we can we'll follow him home.
This chapter was really weird, I'm not really expecting any of you guys to like it that much, and it's setting up the rest of the story. Please review
