Okay you guys have asked for it and I have been meaning to do this for awhile so I'll do it before I leave. A warning to all, this story is a little difficult in the beginning and I beg you to stick with it becasue it will fall into place I just want you to get the feel of my characters and such. My character Desiree goes to a military juvenile camp because she has a major temper. If your parents can't handle you they sometimes send their kids to these camps and they do exsist. You will understand Desiree in the upcoming chapters I promise she is a very complex character with several issues. Please review, criticism is always good but so is praise.
Disclaimer: This story has a lot of violence and language. I don't own any characters except the ones you don't recognize. R/R thanks!
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After all of the stealing and cheating
You probably think that I hold resentment for you
But, uh uh, oh no, you're wrong
'Cause if it wasn't for all that you tried to do
I wouldn't know just how capable I am to pull through
So I wanna say thank you
'Cause it makes me that much stronger
Makes me work a little bit harder
It makes me that much wiser
So thanks for making me a fighter
Made me learn a little bit faster
Made my skin a little bit thicker
Makes me that much smarter
So thanks for making me a fighter
Lyrics from `Fighter' by Christina Aguleria
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Crack crack crack, pant pant pant. 16 year old Desiree Black raced through the Miami woods back towards her home base with a feeling of pure horror. Her failed attemped at an escape to freedom could put her back in more intense therapy if she didn't get back in time.
She tore through the coniferous greenery commonly found in central Florida without a single backwards glance.
Finally after fifteen minutes of running at brake-neck speed she gets back to the hell hole barricks where she sleeps. For the first and only time in her life she is happy to see this shit site.
Quietly she opens the door, tip toes across the small barracks, and flops back on the thin lumpy bunk that belonged to her and cursed at herself for what happened. "If I only stuck to the plan." she thought.
~~~~~~~~~~~~~~FLASHBACK~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~
Running. That's all she could do, was run. Run from the military camp she was forced to call her home. Run from her crack-headed mother who hated her. Run from the shit she was in with drug dealers. Run from everything.
Her exstensive military training was a must in getting out alive. She knew how to run and leave no footprints or make a sound. If she kept her head she could start all over in a new place where no body knew her.
Frump! All of a sudden she falls back and comes face to feet with two men who literatly appeared out of nowhere. Cursing and looking up she saw in horror a man with a scaly face and blood red eyes and another man with a metal hand.
At first glance at the first of the faces she knew what she had to do..........Run like hell back the other way. She didn't know why but his red eyes scared her, and she was the type who never got scared.
Behind her she heard a faint feeble voice cry "Kill her" and the flashing of green light behind her. "You guys are gonna have to get up a lot earlier than that to catch me." she thought in her head as she continued to run.
~~~~~~~~~~~~~~END OF FLAHBACK~~~~~~~~~~~~~
Yeah I know it's short but the chapters will get longer and to understand it better keep reading! And I promise not to torch Mary Sue any more if you will just review, but in my defense she was a bitch!
Disclaimer: This story has a lot of violence and language. I don't own any characters except the ones you don't recognize. R/R thanks!
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After all of the stealing and cheating
You probably think that I hold resentment for you
But, uh uh, oh no, you're wrong
'Cause if it wasn't for all that you tried to do
I wouldn't know just how capable I am to pull through
So I wanna say thank you
'Cause it makes me that much stronger
Makes me work a little bit harder
It makes me that much wiser
So thanks for making me a fighter
Made me learn a little bit faster
Made my skin a little bit thicker
Makes me that much smarter
So thanks for making me a fighter
Lyrics from `Fighter' by Christina Aguleria
~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~
Crack crack crack, pant pant pant. 16 year old Desiree Black raced through the Miami woods back towards her home base with a feeling of pure horror. Her failed attemped at an escape to freedom could put her back in more intense therapy if she didn't get back in time.
She tore through the coniferous greenery commonly found in central Florida without a single backwards glance.
Finally after fifteen minutes of running at brake-neck speed she gets back to the hell hole barricks where she sleeps. For the first and only time in her life she is happy to see this shit site.
Quietly she opens the door, tip toes across the small barracks, and flops back on the thin lumpy bunk that belonged to her and cursed at herself for what happened. "If I only stuck to the plan." she thought.
~~~~~~~~~~~~~~FLASHBACK~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~
Running. That's all she could do, was run. Run from the military camp she was forced to call her home. Run from her crack-headed mother who hated her. Run from the shit she was in with drug dealers. Run from everything.
Her exstensive military training was a must in getting out alive. She knew how to run and leave no footprints or make a sound. If she kept her head she could start all over in a new place where no body knew her.
Frump! All of a sudden she falls back and comes face to feet with two men who literatly appeared out of nowhere. Cursing and looking up she saw in horror a man with a scaly face and blood red eyes and another man with a metal hand.
At first glance at the first of the faces she knew what she had to do..........Run like hell back the other way. She didn't know why but his red eyes scared her, and she was the type who never got scared.
Behind her she heard a faint feeble voice cry "Kill her" and the flashing of green light behind her. "You guys are gonna have to get up a lot earlier than that to catch me." she thought in her head as she continued to run.
~~~~~~~~~~~~~~END OF FLAHBACK~~~~~~~~~~~~~
Yeah I know it's short but the chapters will get longer and to understand it better keep reading! And I promise not to torch Mary Sue any more if you will just review, but in my defense she was a bitch!
