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1918 – Chapter 1 – BPOV
1 year it's been since the Volturi tried to tear my family apart.
1 year it's been since I had my beautiful daughter, Nessie
1 year it's been, and my husband and I haven't been closer
Edward had dived into marriage life with so much enthusiasm; I think it made Emmett step-up a bit in the 'pleasing your wife' department. Although I don't think Rose would complain.
I was sitting in our new home in England. We had to move after Nessie started to grow up to much. I still called Charlie and he would visit on mine, and Nessie's birthday. He made sure to visit the '2 most beautiful girls in his life' although I'm sure if his new wife Sue Clearwater was told that, Dad would be sleeping on the couch for the next few days.
Seth loved the fact he was now related to Edward, but I had to remind him that the only reason that he was, was because of me. Jake was not happy that Seth and Leah had managed to become aunt and uncle to Nessie before he had gotten to the best friend stage of their relationship.
Nessie still was still only 1 year old, but looked more like 4 years. Edward and I had had a talk with Jake and told him, we wanted him to act according to her age, not how old she looked.
I was sitting in our new house, which wasn't the most exclusive, but where we were there were 3 other houses surrounding ours, which made 'the square' as Emmett called it, perfect for all of the couples to have their privacy, but close enough that it kept Esme happy.
"Mommy!" Nessie called, running in through the back door, through the kitchen and into the living room where I was currently sitting.
"Yes sweetheart?"
"Come and play hide-and-seek with me and uncle Em! Please mommy?"
I put my fingers to my chin, tapping them as if I were thinking about the answer. Nessie had learnt from Alice how to do the infamous puppy pout. I caved quickly
"Ok, I'll come. But only if you can get daddy to come as well"
"YAY!" she started bouncing up and down on the spot, before sprinting up the stairs up the Edward's music room, where he has been composing a new piece on Emmett request. He wouldn't let anyone hear it, not even me when I tried to corner him.
I heard Edward music stop as Nessie asked him if he wanted to play. Between me and Edward, I was the hardest one to crack to Nessie's requests, unless it was about Jake. I heard Edward come down the stairs, holding Nessie in his arms. It never ceased to amaze me how much I loved this man. He smiled his crocked grin at me that would have made my heart stutter and stop.
"Coming love?"
"Sure" I said as I closed my book and stood up to join them.
As we went outside, the weather was overcast. It looked like it might rain later but I was going to have my fun with my family while I could, or rather to the point, Alice would let me. Otherwise I would mess up me outfit and she would throw a fit
Along with Emmett, we headed for the field that was next door to Alice and Jaspers house. Hopping over the fence, we split into teams. Me and Edward vs. Nessie and Emmett. They gave us a 15 second head start, so we took off running.
When we ran at vampire speed, no-on could see us, so we didn't need to worry about exposure. We had crossed the other side of our village and waited in the near by forest for the others to find us. We walked, hand in hand, just talking about the new life we had set up here and how Edward was not looking forward to the next 17 or so years. I laughed at this but it was cut short when Edward stopped moving. I looked up to see a vampire, red eyes, standing there before us, her head tilted to the side, as if looking confused.
"Your eyes?"
"We don't feed off humans" replied Edward.
"Neither do I."
"Then how…?"
"I don't feed at all. Its not the way I work."
"Then how do you 'work'"
"How about I show you?"
She turned to look at me. Her eyes racked over my body as if checking me out. I cast my shield out around me and Edward, not wanting him to be in danger either.
The women chuckled. "That wont work", and then I felt a power surge go through me.
It hurt. A lot. So much that I screamed and fell to the floor trying to catch my breath. It wasn't coming and soon I found it had to se. if I had know I was a vampire and I didn't need air to live, I would of thought I was having a heart attack.
"WHAT DID YOU DO?" shouted Edward as he came down with me.
"You'll see" she said and then faded into nothing.
"Bella? Can you hear me? Its ok. Your going to be ok" he said but it sounded as if he was fighting back sleep.
I couldn't take it anymore and let the panic attack take me.
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NPOV
"WHAT DID YOU DO?" I heard my daddy shout. I looked up at Uncle Emmett with a worried face. He looked back at me with worry and confusion. He picked me up and started running in the direction of my dad's voice.
When we found them, it was too late. My mom was in my dad's arms, but both of them were on the floor not moving at all.
"MOM! DAD!" I screamed, getting out of Emmett's arms and running over to them. I started shacking them, hoping they would open their eyes and tell me they were playing a game.
"Please wake up! I don't want to play anymore!"
They didn't move. Emmett had come over to me, picked my dad up and slung him over his shoulders, so it looked lie he was giving daddy a piggy-back ride. He then picked up mommy like he does to Aunt Rosie when they get married. I climbed on top of mommy and Emmett ran us back to Grandpa Carlisle. We needed to make sure they were ok.
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