Hey! Hello! This is my first fan fiction I have ever wrote! So I'm kinda scared 0.0 please be gentle with me. I'm new with this all. And my spelling and grammar is worth shit but I'm working on it. Let me no if u see any errors :) ill try proof reading before posting but everyone makes a few mistakes.
Please give me feedback cause I'm a newb and would really need some advice! Haha!
This story for different chapters with prob. switch between first person and third person.
Btw if you see these - "" - that means its someone's thoughts. Just wanted to let you know
There is one OC so far in the story, to be totally honest I don't know how this story will fall out :) but I want to make it long since I enjoy my story's long to build characters :P
I don't own any Rise of the Guardians characters, only Crystal so far :)
(Yaoi and straight pairings are in this story so BEWARE!)
Enjoy! *bows but runs away blushing*
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Chapter 1
"Jack! Wake up!" Crystal shouts in sleeping Jacks ear.
"GAHHH!" Jack lurches forward from his curled up position into Crystals forehead with a nasty thump.
"Owwww! God damn." Crystal groans in pain cupping her forehead. "At least your awake now." Crystal mutters glancing down at jack, still rubbing her forehead.
"Yeah thanks, Sis." Jack replies with a glare. Clutching his forehead were he smacked it. Jack sits up and glares at Crystal.
""Yeah this loud mouth is my sister, my twin sister to make things better. Surprised? Well don't be, crystal and I are 317 years old. We woke up in a frozen lake 300 years ago together. When we woke up we had just a nice and dandy talk with the moon. He told us that we were twins and that are names are Crystal and Jack Frost and that was it... Great help he was wasn't he? I mean why couldn't he answer why are were floating, not cold on top of the frozen lake, or even why we can make frost and snow!? He couldn't even answer that could he? Well at least I knew Crystal was my sister. But then again it was pretty obvious, the only difference was her hair had a tinged orange on the tips of her hair and had some freckles under her eyes. But besides that we are completely alike. Same chin,ears,eyes,height, body shape and even the same hair flip! Geez... Oh and we are spirits on top of everything! So no one can see us! But let's get back to being 317 years old""
"Stop spacing out!" Crystal yells smacking Jacks head gently. " let's go, we have to make snow days." She says excitedly. With that said she quickly stands up with a long stretch.
Jack stares at her and notice her hair and starts to crack up."What's so funny?" Crystal ask confused but gets ignore by a rolling Jack. Quickly she pats herself down only stopping at her hair, her eyes widen realizing her hairs in snarled nots in every direction. Blushing she quickly runs her fingers through her hair fixing it. Pouting at her brother she shouts "s'not FUNNY!" She turns and leaves the cave they live in by the lake they came from.
Noticing Crystal stomping out of the cave Jack quickly gets up "oh Crystal don't be like that!" Jack calls after her. Catching up with his sister by the frozen lakes edge. "Come on don't be upset" Crystal just ignores him, continuing. "Hey how about we go to Burgess and give them a snow day? It's been awhile hasn't it?" Jack ask in a pleading tone. Jack notice her pout quickly turning into a wide grin ""yes! Works every time!"" Jacks thinks to himself.
Crystal runs back to the cave excitedly grabbing there staff they share. Sprinting back " I call driving the winds today!" Crystal shouts but not without her feet slipping under her, she slides into Jacks legs bring them down. "Owwwwwy!" Crystal groans out.
Jack rolls his eyes. Muttering moron slowly Jack gets off the ground and pulls his sister up as well. " I think I'll work the winds for today sis." Crystal pouts but doesn't say anything while handing the staff to Jack. Nodding Jack kneels down for his sister to get on. Crystal climbs onto his back hanging on tight. Knowing his sister wasn't going to slip he calls for the winds to take them to Burgess town. Feeling the wind lift then like they weighed nothing the Frost's shout in joy flying toward Burgess.
So that was the first chapter 0.0 I hope you liked it. I'll post the 2nd one tomorrow!
Please give me feedback!
Thank you! 3
