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hi peoples, blackraven162 and Ttwist here. First story ever so feel free to rip our heads off but please be nice about it! Constructive criticismis welcome, so feel free to help us. We know that we got the colours to Castle Oblivion wrong, we thought is was a completly white castle inside and out, so we appologise for that mistake.
This story is based on Kingdom Hearts II. So all the characters clothing - such as sora's, kairi's and riku's -is from Kingdom Hearts II. Just so people don't get confused.
Disclaimer: We do NOT own any of this besides Charlie, Amaya and the crazy plot.
Chapter 1
Axel hated these meetings. Xemnas kept nattering on about the 'restoration of Kingdom Hearts' and Demyx was asleep, drooling on his arm, Axel's sleeve and glove slowly becoming covered in the disgusting, warm liquid.
His mobile began ringing, the familiar voices of Charlie and Amaya, his nieces, filling the room. Flinging Demyx off his arm, Axel excused himself from the room, avoiding icy stares from Xemnas and Demyx as he left.
Axel shut the large door behind him and dug deep into his hidden pockets to find his phone. A small sigh of relief left his lips as he pulled the small gadget out, checked the caller I.D and answered.
"Hello Xexon"
"Good Morning Axel, how you doing??" replied his older brother.
"I'm doing fine, you?" said Axel as he leaned against the white door, crossing his left arm across his chest.
"Great"
An awkward silence filled the conversation.
"Look Axel, I really badly need a favour" said Xexon, caution filling his voice
"I'm listening"
"Would you be able to look after Charlie and Amaya at Castle Oblivion for a couple of weeks?"
Axel looked up at the white ceiling, thinking the request over before answering
"Yes, I can look after them, but why?"
"I'm going on a business trip for three weeks; you'll need to look after them just till their summer camps starts"
"Kay, its fine by me, when are you sending them over?" questioned Axel
"In a couple of minutes if that's ok" replied Xexon
"I don't know what Xemnas if gonna say, but screw it, send them over" replied Axel, shrugging
"Thanks Axel I owe you big time!"
"And Xexon"
"Yea"
"Just call me earlier next time, Got it memorized?"
"Got it, catch ya later"
"Bye"
Axel snapped his phone shut and re-entered the meeting hall.
"Xemnas, my nieces are staying at Castle Oblivion for a couple of weeks that ok with you? Really, great, thanks" said Axel in one breath.
"What?" A simmering anger entered Xemnas's voice, making Axel cringe.
"Do I have to spell it out for you? My nieces are staying here for a couple of weeks. Got it memorized?" replied Axel, tapping his left temple.
He paused as a loud crash shuddered through the meeting room, "UNCLE AXEL" roared two voices. Snickers erupted from Roxas and Demyx, who was now sitting back in his chair.
"Oh yea, I must've forgot" Axel pretended to slap his forehead"They're arriving today"
Xemnas stood up from his chair and calmly walked towards Axel. When he reached him he angrily shoved a finger in his face.
"I swear, if they get in my way or annoy me at any point, they're dead and you'll be following them" With that Xemnas turned on his feet and strode out of the room.
"I guess the meeting over then?" Demyx questioned pushing his chair away from the table and standing up.
"Thank you Captain Obvious" muttered Zexion sarcastically, as he summoned a dark portal to get to the library as quickly as possible.
"Come on Axel, lets go meet these nieces of yours" Demyx said cheerily heading towards the doors.
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"Dad…where are you going? Why are you going? How long will you be??" Charlie questioned as she and her sister, Amaya, dragged their suitcases into the entry hall. Xexon sighed, as he rubbed his temples with his right hand.
"I've told you again and again Charlie, I am going on a business trip, because I have to and I will be gone for three weeks" Amaya flicked her short hair away from her face, "Who are we staying with anyway, Dad?"
"Only your favourite person in the whole universe" replied her father, Charlie frowned, her nose wrinkling "Cloud Strife…yea right Dad" said Charlie, rolling her eyes at the ceiling.
"Not him smart ass, Uncle Axel" Xexon sighed, strain showing in his voice from Charlie's nagging.
"Brilliant" replied Amaya, her voice dripping in sarcasm, "who knew that staying in a house with twelve guys and a tom-boy would sound so creepy"
"Quiet Amaya" retorted Charlie "At least we get to see him" as she placed her oversized bag next to Amayas.
"Okay girls, ready to go?" asked their father.
"Yes" both girls replied in unison "Then have a good time, behave and say hello to Axel for me, okay?" said Xexon.
"Got it Dad" said Charlie as she gave her father a hug goodbye.
"Don't eat too much sugar either, I know how the both of you can get" muttered Xexon into Amaya's ear as he hugged her.
"Yes Dad" replied Amaya, rolling her eyes at her sister standing behind him.
"You ready?" Amaya asked Charlie as she picked up her black bag.
"I'm ready if you are" replied Charlie as she picked up her own and flexed her right hand out in front of her, summoning a dark portal before walking into the abyss, Amaya quickly followed, holding onto her older sister's wrist.
"I…hate….portals" she muttered before the opening disappeared.
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"So, is this it?" asked Amaya as she struggled to control her short hair.
"I think it is" said Charlie, tapping a finger on her cheek. "It's not all that welcoming si it?" Amaya said staring up to the daunting peaks of the castle.
"Let's go check it out!" Charlie walked towards the huge double doors of Castle Oblivion and tried to push the doors inward.
"Amaya, help me out here please?" asked Charlie, Amaya smirked
"Ever tried pulling Lee?" Charlie quickly stuck out her tongue and pulled the lower eyelid of her right eye down, and then grabbed one of the handles and pulled….nothing happened.
"Getting a little soft are we, Charlie?" chuckled Amaya as she placed her hands on her hips, Charlie scowled.
"You know that I'm not strong after using a portal!" she exclaimed, throwing her hands up in the air.
"Let's see you do it then!" Amaya strode forward to one of the huge doors, grabbed a handle and pulled, sending the door slamming into the wall with a loud crash; she then turned and gave her sister a smug look while she dusted off her hands.
"I hate you" muttered Charlie, a frown crossing her face.
"I love you too" replied Amaya, sarcasm dripping from her every word. Charlie grabbed her bag and dragged it into the grand hall.
"We gonna yell for Uncle Axel?" questioned Amaya, her eyebrows raised, Charlie nodded.
"On my count then…3…2…1."
"UNCLE AXEL" the girls yelled, their voices echoing through the long white halls.
"You'd think they'd paint this place by now" muttered Charlie as she stared at the ceiling. A man suddenly burst from two large doors at the end of the hall. He walked passed them not batting an eyelid in their direction. Amaya and Charlie watched the grey hair man storm down another hall.
"What's up his a…" Amaya started.
"I hope you're not thinking of finishing that sentence, Amaya, seeing as you both just got here" Axel interrupted as he walked up behind them. Charlie and Amaya looked at each other and grinned before turning and running into their uncles' tight embrace.
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Axel looked down at his two nieces, they hadn't changed much since he last saw them. They had both grown tall and slim, though Charlie was slightly taller than Amaya, and they both kept their trademark orange hair, Amaya's short and uncontrollable, Charlie's long and slightly spiky like her uncles.
Both were wearing comfortable clothes. Charlie was wearing black converse, army print shorts, studded leather belt and a cookie monster t-shirt that Axel had given her for her fifteenth birthday. Amaya, on the other hand, was wearing the same shoes as her sister, grey jeans and her green 'ignorance is bliss' t-shirt underneath a black unzipped jacket.
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"Uncle Axel!" squealed Charlie as they both clung onto him.
"How have you been?" asked Amaya as she hugged him.
"I've been doing great" replied Axel hugging them both back.
"Wow Uncle Axel, you have a lot of…roomies" said Amaya as the other members appeared in front of them, walking in from the meeting hall.
Axel released the girls from his hug and they looked around. Charlie spotted Roxas, immediately ran towards him and flung her arms around his neck in a friendly hug, Roxas cheeks turned slightly red as he smiled and returned her embrace, before letting go and hugging Amaya.
"Roxas, dude, long time no see" said Amaya as she let go of him.
"Yea, Roxie, last time we saw you, you had a thing for that Namine chick" commented Charlie as she nudged him in the ribs.
"Well…you know…" mumbled Roxas as he stared at his feet, his cheeks now bright red.
"No, Roxie, we don't know…tell us!!" Amaya demanded cheekily as she gently poked him in the chest.
"Stop picking on him girls" said Axel, interrupting their interrogation of Roxas love life.
"Let me introduce you to my so called 'roomies' then" said Axel as he begun counting of the other Organization XIII members with his fingers.
"Xigbar" Axel pointed to a man with grey streaks in his hair and an eye patch over one eye.
"Xaldin" a man with huge arms and dreadlocks nodded his head in the girls' direction.
"Vexen" Axel pointed out a man with that was walking away with long dirty blonde hair.
"Lexaeus" A large man with short brown hair gave a small wave to the girls,
"Zexion" Axel pointed to the second shortest of the group who had his nose shoved in a book, that he had just gotten from the library.
"Saix" Axel jerked his thumb towards a man with blue hair and a cross shaped scar across his face, who was slowly drifting towards a different hall.
"Demyx" he pointed to a young man with a mullet who waved enthusiastically at the girls.
"Luxord" a man playing with a pack of cards nodded at the girls, not bothering to look up.
"Marluxia" Axel pointed to a man with pink hair, causing Charlie and Amaya to snicker, Marluxia frowned at them.
"Larxene" the only female of the group politely smiled at them.
"And Xemnas, but he's not here cause he's on a pissy mood" finished Axel.
"So that was the guy who stormed past us…right" said Amaya thoughtfully.
Charlie whispered something into Amaya's ear and they both burst out laughing.
"What are you laughing at?" questioned Roxas as he looked back and forth at Charlie and Amaya.
"You're mind is too young for these evil thoughts!" replied Amaya as she looked him straight in the eye.
"Oh…kay" said Roxas, shrugging "Wait…I'm older then you!?"
"That might be so, but my mind is more complex than yours" replied Amaya, as she tapped her right temple in a similar fashion to Axel.
"Come on girls, Roxas and I will show you your room" said Axel as he picked up Charlies bag. Roxas picked up Amaya's bag and the four left the room.
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"Well, it's very…white" commented Charlie, as she rocked on the balls of her feet, hands clasped behind her back. In front of them stood two beds, a bunk bed to the right and a queen sized bed to the left, with a bedside table and lamp beside them. A door to the left lead to a plain bathroom and a door to the right lead to a walk in closet.
"I guess we better get unpacked then" said Charlie, as she grabbed her bag off Axel and walked towards the closet, Amaya took her bag from Roxas.
"Thanks for carrying our bags for us" said Amaya "We'll talk to you later Roxie about Namine" yelled Charlie from the closet as Amaya gently pushed the boys out the door and closed it behind them.
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Okay end chapter one!!! review please!!! we need more ideas and opinions!!!
